Do i deserve ur love part 34

24 May

Still you didn’t forget this maan? why maan why you are making it difficult for me. I hate this helplessness. I don’t deserve your love maan, I really don’t. please don’t force me to come to you maan thought geet. when aishu’s dance completed there was a huge round of applause. Suddenly geet turned back as she is feeling instant gaze on her. She saw maan averted his gaze when she turned back and is clapping smiling at aishu. Aishu is searching for her nani and mumma. When she saw them, she smiled widely and waved at them.

The next second her eyes caught maan standing there at the back. Her smile broadened and she waved at him too. Maan smiled at her. its the results time and maan is praying aishu to win as he cant see her sad. And as expected aishu got the first prize and she is on cloud 9. Maan sighed and left from don’t want to upset geet more. After some time geet with rano and aishu left home. Geet is quite till the way to home. Even after reaching home she went to her room and locked herself.

She lied on the bed closing her eyes and in deep thought.

I am not able to understand anything, what should I do? Maan I just want to come to know and be in your arms forever. But I hurted you so much still why you love me so much maan? I know that I did a mistake by leaving you alone. That time I couldn’t think anything else other than muskaan and I was scared to loose our aishu too. Dad was also like you maan he don’t think anything before doing things after that he repent. I lost dad, then muskaan I cant afford to loose anyone in my life again maan and I cant change your life too. I know how you are? The fear of mine is overcoming my love maan. I am feeling so helpless seeing you in pain geet cried her heart out feeling helpless her fear is overcoming her love.

Here aishu wants to show her prize to her friend maan and she asked rano the same. Rano dropped aishu at maan’s house and came back and decided to talk to geet. Aishu rang the bell but the door is ajar. She opened the door and tip toed inside to surprise maan. Maan saw aishu and hid behind the door. Aishu looked here and there and felt sad not finding maan. But maan took her in his arms from back and kissed her cheek.

Aishu showed her prize to maan, he looked at her proudly and kissed her cheek appreciating her. Maan took her to kitchen and gave her an apple and thought to prepare pasta as she might be hungry.

Aishu is watching him thinking what he is doing. Aishu added salt in the pasta, added veges which maan chopped and started stirring it with her tiny tiny hands. Maan is just adoring her and helping her. when pasta is finished they both bend down to smell it.

Ummm yummy both said at a time and laughed at each other. Maan is feeding aishu and she is happily eating. Aishu took spoon from maan and offered him. Maan just stared at her, muskaan always does that. He became emotional and controlled his tears with great difficulty and ate from aishu’s hand. She smiled at him.

After eating maan cleaned up everything and when he came back to hall he saw aishu sleeping on the floor itself. Maan took her in his arms and settled himself on the couch with aishu sleeping on his chest. He kept caressing her hair. Aishu slept peacefully holding his collar in her tiny fists. Just then sam came to maan’s house to invite maan to her birthday party. She is happy to see aishu with maan.

Here geet came out of her room washing her face. when she didn’t find aishu she understood where she might be and went out to bring aishu with her. At the same time she is feeling tensed and nervous to face maan, today she want to talk with him and pour her heart in front of him. Today she want to put full stop to all their sufferings. She is excited to meet him now.

When geet parked the car in front of their house and climbed the steps. As the door is open she saw a beautiful sight in front of her, aishu sleeping in maan’s arms. She smiled at them and felt contended. When she was about to enter into the house, she saw sam coming out of the kitchen with a glass of water in her hand. Geet frowned seeing sam there and a pang of jealousy erupted in her. When sam bent down to clean the pasta on aishu’s dress, but geet assumed that she is cleaning maan’s shirt and that angered geet.

She knocked the door loudly and went inside before anyone react and took aishu from maan. Seeing her angry face maan thought geet is again angry on him for meeting aishu but that is not the true.

Seeing aishu holding maan’s collar tight in her fist, she released it hurriedly and left from there giving angry glares to both maan and sam. Poor maan is thinking she is angry on him again but sam understood she is angry on her and jealous as she is close to maan when she came there. Sam smiled widely and thought her plan is working and tomorrow’s bday party will take a step ahead in their relation.

The day passed peacefully, geet though didn’t talk to maan today but decided to talk to him later. The D-day has come. The birthday girl is so excited, today maan and geet will come face to face and seeing her reaction yesterday sam is more curious. Evening everyone gathered for the party. Geet along with aishu came there and after sometime maan too arrived. Sam smiled at him and she cut the cake. Sam first fed maan, geet looked at sam angrily, she just want to stangle sam with her bare hands. Here sam is observing geet from corner of her eyes and is thoroughly enjoying her restlessness.

Sam fed geet and aishu too. Sam smiled at her plan now and its time to execute.

Hiii friends, let us play a small game. Here there are chits with me. everyone should take one and what ever they gets they should do that or answer that question told sam.

All of them clapped and everyone took one chit.

Ok now lets start, hmmm with whom we will start asked sam and looked at aishu.

Yes we will start with aishu told sam and went near her. aishu smiled at sam broadly. When sam took the chit from aishu and opened it.

Aishu, whom do you love? Mumma or papa? Asked sam. Aishu looked at geet and geet smiled in return.

I love mumma told aishu. Maan smiled widely hearing aishu’s answer. Who don’t love his geet.

Why you don’t love your papa? Asked sam.

Aishu nodded in a no. why? Asked sam.

Bad daddy, he don’t love us. He never came to me told aishu which shocked everyone. Sam never expected this answer she looked at geet disgusted. Maan looked at aishu painfully. Geet is also shocked to listen aishu. She remembered once in anger she shouted on aishu telling he doesn’t loves us and he killed her didi. After that never that topic came and she never clarified to aishu about maan and geet never expected that aishu still remembers those words which she told in anger.

Maan immediately left from there not even glancing at geet once. Till today there was a small hope that he will get his geet and aishu back but today at this moment all his dreams are shattered and only pain engulfed him.


Precap: Rano slaps geet.

                Maan leaving delhi and accident.


Do i deserve ur love part 33

9 May

Part 33


One side sam and rano are busy in planning sam’s birthday party so that maan and geet can come close.

Aunty, I am not able to understand what should I do now? I invited geet but will maan come? Asked sam nervously to rano who rolled her eyes as this is the nth time sam asking the same question.

Sam, we will plan something. First we should make them face each other, then we can do something told rano patting her cheek.

Done aunty I will inform maan too about party as well as adi and pinky too so that they can be a helping hand told sam.

Yes that’s a good idea and still one week is left, some idea will strike till then told rano smiling at her. So her second plan is also success, now geet will face maan and vice versa.

It was Monday morning, aishu is in no mood to go to school. She is still on the bed rubbing her eyes and cutely pouting at her mama who is staring at her.

What happened? Today my aishu is so lazy? Asked geet tying her messy hair which is falling on her face.

Mumma, I don’t want to go to school today told aishu making puppy face to melt her mumma.

Acha? Why? Asked geet.

Don’t know mumma, please mumma requested aishu. Geet is melting from one side, as aishu never ask that she will not go to school.

But what about your homework and all? Asked geet.

Mumma, I will ask rohan told aishu excitedly. Geet’s face became dull with the name of rohan but she cant tell aishu not to talk with him. And children don’t have anything to do with all the matters. So geet agreed aishu to stay at home only for today. Aishu nodded happily, geet went to her room to get ready for office as she had to attend the clients today for the presentation.

Geet went to her office, rano and aishu are at home. Aishu is practicing her dance with the help of sam as geet is not there at home. Maan is busy in hospital so he didn’t come to meet aishu. Later geet came back in the afternoon as the meeting got over and her aishu is also at home, so she decided to spend sometime with aishu and take her out for shopping.

Geet took aishu for lunch, after that she took her for shopping. Aishu is all excited to send the time with her mumma, after coming to delhi she saw geet is always serious and even shouted on her for dancing. Today she took her for lunch outside.

Mumma I want icecream asked aishu pointing towards icecream corner.

Geet smiled and took her to parlour, she made aishu sit on the chair and she went to order icecream. But before she order anything, icecream is on their table making geet confused and aishu excited.

Excuse me I didn’t order anything told geet looking at that man confused. That man turned back and looked at geet smiling. Geet is shocked to see its maan who brought icecream for them. Though aishu saw maan but didn’t react as her mumma will get angry if she come to know she is learning dance. Maan winked at aishu without geet’s knowledge. Aishu smiled widely at him.

Aishu come we should go now told geet, but aishu made a baby face and showed her icecream is not finished yet. Geet sighed in helplessness. Maan looked at geet lovingly moving away from them, geet didn’t look at him for once this made him sad but composed himself and looking at them till they left ice cream parlour. Aishu is running here and there and geet is following her.

Aishu was about to fall on the ground when geet caught her immediately. Maan saw her falling and ran towards them but stopped seeing aishu in geet’s arms securely. Maan is looking at them longingly, geet sensed maan near her and turned aside, their eyes met. She can see his longing for her and love for aishu. Geet averted her gaze immediately and went to dresses mall for aishu.

Aishu is making geet’s life hell by not liking any dress.

Aishu, what ever I am showing you are not liking anything. Tell me what you wany? Asked geet placing her hands on hips.

Aishu’s eyes caught a white color frock and she liked instantly.

Mumma called aishu and pointed towards that dress. Geet smiled and asked the sales girl to pack that dress. Geet selected few more dresses and went to pay the bill. By the time she reached bill counter maan already paid their bill.

Ma’am your bill is already paid, here is your purchase told that man and gave their shopping bag. Geet looked at maan who is standing outside the shop and flashing his smile. Geet is getting angry with every passing second. Geet took the baggage and left from there hurriedly with aishu.

Geet went to parking lot and drove back to home. When geet reached home she sighed. They rested for some time. Aishu got up in the evening and saw her nani is making her fav pakodas.

Nani pakoda exclaimed aishu excitedly. Rano smiled at her and filled plate with pakodas and gave to aishu. Aishu is having pakodas happily.

Later pari took aishu to her dance class, unknown to them even geet is also following them. when pari with aishu entered into maan’s house geet stood there speechless. Even her maa lied to her, this is the reason she never entertained in coming to delhi again but this job of hers made her come to delhi.

Geet barged into maan’s house angrily and the scene which she saw in front of her made her froze in her tracks. Maan and aishu are dancing, a smile playing on their lips. Maan took aishu in his arms and kissed her forehead.

My aishu is dancing very well, so ready for competition asked maan.

Aishu nodded excitedly but her face became sad suddenly making geet and maan frown. Geet want to reach her daughter and take her in his arms.

Friend, I am tensed. What if I loose in the competition? Asked aishu sadly.

You will never lose aishu, because its your father who is with you thought geet, but next second her face hardened and scolded herself for thinking like that.

No dear, don’t think like that. If you win you will be happy and if you lose also you should be happy because you will get to learn and understand more and after that you will make sure that you will not commit that mistake again. Don’t think of winning and losing at the start. Just concentrate on you dance, that’s it told maan smiling and kissed her forehead. Aishu too smiled at him and kissed his cheek.

Geet walked towards them and took aishu from maan. with the sudden entry of geet both maan and pari are shocked and aishu is scared thinking her mother will shout at her.

Pari take aishu with you and sit in the car told geet not looking at them.

Pari obeyed geet and took aishu with her. aishu looked at maan sadly making his heart bleed.

I didn’t expect this from you maan told geet coldly. Maan turned his face away and didn’t talk anything.

You are trying to separate mother-daughter? Asked geet in dis-belief as she never expected maan to do such thing.

Maan looked at geet shocked.

You are thinking like this geet? asked maan not able to bear her accusation.

Don’t act maan, what were you doing all the time meeting my daughter behind my back. And what a tragedy my maa and sister are against me and supporting you told geet.

Why will I try to separate you both geet when I want you and aishu in my life again told maan.

Bas maan I have already told you aishu is my daughter and she will be mine forever warned geet and left from there leaving a heart broken maan. Maan collapsed on the ground and his face shows only pain. He is trying to convince geet but she is not at all ready to listen.

Pari who forgot her mobile there listened geet’s accusations.

No di, enough is enough I cant see you both like this. You have to know the truth, the truth of what mamaji did thought pari and left from there. Geet, aishu and pari reached home. Geet is still angry but didn’t show it on aishu as she is a kid and don’t know anything. She though to confrot rano later about this matter.

Maan walked towards his gym and doing his work out angry on himself for not gaining geet’s trust.

Kuch bhi hojaye geet, I will get back my wife and my child. I am ready to bear anything thought maan.

Next day morning, it was aishu’s dance competition. Geet is not ready to come but seeing aishu’s face she cant deny her. They all got ready and went to school. Performance have started one by one and its turn of aishu. When aishu started with her dance, in her each and every move she can see muskaan. The same dance which muskaan did for maan to surprise him.

Still you didn’t forget this maan? why maan why you are making it difficult for me. I hate this helplessness. I don’t deserve your love maan, I really don’t. please don’t force me to come to you maan thought geet. when aishu’s dance completed there was a huge round of applause. Suddenly geet turned back as she is feeling instant gaze on her. She saw maan averted his gaze when she turned back and is clapping smiling at aishu.


Precap: Maan: You should have told aishu that her father is DEAD geet.

               Rano slaps Geet

Do i deserve ur love part 32

8 Mar

Now I will see geet, how much you want your daughter not to meet her father but this time I wont listen you, father-daughter duo meet for sure thought rano and left from there to meet someone. Rano took taxi from aishu’s school and went to meet her son-in-law maan. She very well knows after what happened yesterday maan might be lost in their past and blaming himself for what happened.

When rano stepped inside maan’s house, she saw nothing is changed. Not even a single thing, everything is as per geet’s and muskaan’s choice. Rano smiled sadly and went to maan’s room, she didn’t find him there.

May be he is in muskaan’s room thought rano and went to muskaan’s room which is filled with her toys and her pictures. Maan sat near the bed his face in his palms. Whole night he didn’t sleep, he sat in muskaan’s room feeling dejected, not knowing how much he has to suffer more. He want to hug his daughter aishu and shower her all his love but here he cant tell her he is her daddy.

“Daddy” such a beautiful word. “I love you daddy” whenever muskaan says this to maan, his heart swelled with happiness and proud. But one day he lost her, he is not murderer. How can he kill his own child, he tried everywhere for money. He was ready to beg raj because nothing is important for him other than his muskaan, but nothing worked.

After geet left him, one day raj came to maan’s house to return his money. Then told everything what happened. He didn’t cheat him but it was geet’s mamaji who blackmailed him not to give money to them. That was the main reason for his rejection of giving money on his engagement day when he came for money. But what is the use of knowing the truth or getting money now, so maan immediately rejected to take money, but raj was adamant and said he is his friend and help him to reach geet and tell everything happened. Raj deposited the money in maan’s account.

Once he was famous for his dance school and he did programs in everywhere possible in India he got into bollywood so easily and in no time he became successful choreographer. Maan made sure that his name don’t come out as he don’t want any media hype.

Days to years passed, one fine day he met geet again. Her love for maan changed into hatred to such extent that she didn’t tell about his own daughter. The past is flashing in front of him, which is making him more and more depressed and making his life more dark. He sensed someone opened the door allowing the sun light to enter in the room making the darkness fade away. Maan looked up with his heavy eyes and saw rano there.

His heart overjoyed to see his MIL, whom he treated as his mother there.

Maa a whisper came out of his mouth making rano cry seeing her sons state. Why he is suffering for her brother’s deeds.

Rano came and sat next to maan, hugging her son tight trying to take away his pain and give him some relief.

Maan beta, what is all this? Cried rano.

Maa, aishu is my daughter is the first thing maan asked. Mujhe kyun nahi bataya maa cried maan in her embrace.

Maa, am I that cruel that no one told about this. How I survived these many years I don’t know maa. Mujhe meri geet ko wapas la do maa. I want my geet cried maan resting his head on her lap. Even rano is also crying with him.

Maan, we should tell truth to geet told rano wiping her tears. Maan instantly lifted his head and stared at her.

No maa, geet cant handle this. Life long she will feel guilty thinking she is responsible for what happened told maan.

Maan, till how long we will hide this from her. day by day her actions are getting worst. I will never ever forgive bhai for this cried rano.

What is there to forgive maa, we lost our muskaan and he met with an accident and is bed ridden now. chakar bhi hum kuch nai kar sakte maa told maan.

Rano wiped maan’s tears and told finally why she came here.

Maan, I want to tell you something told rano.

Maan looked at rano.

Maan you should be aishu’s dance teacher as she is so much interested in her school competition told rano.

Maan is first thrilled then hesitated thinking how can he? What if geet comes to know about this.

But maa’ maan was cut by rano.

Maan, this is the only way to meet your daughter and I cant see you in pain. Tum kuch bhi kaho maan mai zaroor geet ko sach batakar hi rahungi. Please fulfill your daughter’s wish requested rano.

Even thought maan is hesitant thinking geet don’t like it. But his heart is saying to accept so that he can see his daughter daily. Maan smiled slightly at rano which is enough for her to know maan is ok with this idea.

Maan, be ready in the evening to meet your daughter told rano and kissed her forehead. Maan got up from the floor so as rano. He hugged and thanked for trusting him and allowing him to meet his daughter. Maan forgot all his worries and pains and is so excited to meet his aishu. Rano left from there smiling as her first plan to unite father-daughter is successful.

Day passed so slowly for maan, he cancelled all his appointments for that day and is waiting for the clock to strike 3pm. Now the time is 2:30 pm and maan is already waiting for aishu near school where stil one hour time is there for aishu to complete her classes. Anxiety is all over written on his face. He is rubbing his hands and looking over the entrance gate again and again.

He saw rano getting down from an auto, maan saw her and smiled. Rano paid to the auto driver and walked towards maan.

Maan when did you come? Asked rano.

Half hour back told maan and smiled. Rano didn’t tell anything knowing how excited he is. The time passed and finally aishu came out running to her nani. Rano smiled and took her in her arms. Maan smiled at them.

Nanii kissed aishu on her cheek.

Meri bachi kaisi hai, aapko ek surprise hai told rano.

What nani? Asked aishu excitedly.

Rano turned towards maan and told he is your dance teacher aishu.

At first aishu got so excited and is smiling widely. But soon her face became gloomy. Maan and rano didn’t miss the sadness in her face.

What happened beta? Asked rano.

Mumma gussa karegi told aishu sadly, even with aishu maan too became sad knowing why geet hates dance. She hates everything which relates maan.

We will not tell to mumma now, when your program finishes that time we will tell. Ok? Told rano.

Par nani, you told we should not lie to anyone? Asked aishu innocently.

We are not lying beta, we are not telling to your mumma that’s it rano convinced aishu and she accepted happily.

Aishu looked at maan and smiled.

Hello aishu wished maan.

Hello baby, I am maan introduced maan himself.

I am aishwarya told aishu and smiled at him again.

Maan talked with aishu animatedly telling her different things while going to his house. Aishu loved maan instantly and she too talking with him. Rano told she has some work and she will be back in an hour or so. Maan just nodded taking aishu inside.

Maan made aishu sit on the couch and he went to kitchen to bring juice for her.

Aishu, this is for you told maan and gave her juice. Aishu had it as she is feeling hungry too.

What should I call you? Asked aishu looking at maan with her innocent eyes. Maan’s heart screamed to call him as dad but outside he just smiled and told whatever you like.

Aishu patted her chin thinking.

I will call you as friend told aishu and smiled at him.

Maan kissed her forehead and he took her to his dance room, where he and muskaan use to practice dance before.

Days passed to weeks. Aishu daily visit maan and learn dance for her school competition. They use to play on Sundays and maan use to take her to park. Rano lied to geet that she is taking aishu to music classes as she has music competition in her school and aishu is very excited to participate. Though she felt bad for lying to geet but she want to unite father and daughter first.

Aishu became so close to maan, that in the evening maan use to pick her up daily and take her with him to ice cream parlour some days, to park or they just go on a ride on his bike. She use to tell everything to him what happened in school. This whole month is not less than a bliss to maan, he forgot everything about his past and just enjoying with his aishu. Even adi and pinky too observed change in him and they are happy for him. sometimes maan takes both rohan and aishu outside so that both friends enjoy.

On the other hand sameera shifted to the same apartment as of geet, so that she can befriend with geet. Though geet didn’t talk to her much as she was busy with her office work and all but she liked sam for her chirpiness. Sam used to spend most of her Sundays with geet as she is staying alone there. It is one of such Sunday, rano took aishu for her dance class and geet is busy in cooking while sam is munching an apple and talking with geet.

Geet, next Sunday is my birthday. You and aishu darling has to come. Ok? Told sam.

Ok sam I will come smiled geet.

Sam made a plan to call maan too so that they both can meet. Sam patted for back for her plan and smiled at geet happily.


Precap: Aishu with maan. Will geet sees them??? Shocked

Do i deserve ur love part 31

3 Mar


Hearing the painful past of maneet and their baby sam had tears in her eyes.

Omg.. they suffered so much, having so much pain inside still maan is acting normal. He is really great. So the foundation is maan’s. MF.. MUSKAAN FOUNDATION.

Yes sam, muskaan died because of lack of money. So maan bhai established MF, so that no other kid die because of lack of money. The operation for children will be free in that foundation told pinky.

Pinky, you don’t worry. I will re-unite maan and geet again. Its my promise told sam and there is a determination in her eyes.

But that is not so easy sam, you don’t know how stubborn geet is told pinky but hoping one day her friend and her bhai will unite and live their life happily like before.

Sam turned to pinky.  Pinky there in nothing impossible in love. How much be stubborn geet be, she should bow her head in front of love told sam.

Pinky smiled and hugged her. Sam, I am there with you to help you in the mission unite maneet told pinky.

Thank you pinky told sam and smiled at herself. I too will see how geet wont come to maan thought sam and left from there with heavy heart. That day was a long day for everyone. Here adi is still searching for maan, when he came to know about aishu being his daughter, he is shattered once again with geet’s words.

“You are a murderer maan” those words are ringing in maan’s ears making his state more and more vulnerable. Maan stood on the middle of the road all alone once again lost in his darkness. He don’t know what is there in his destiny, when he is happy with his family god snatched his muskaan, his daughter, his princess from him. When again after 6 years when he came to know about aishu geet didn’t even allow him to take his daughter into his arms. She once again broke his heart with her words which are killing maan inwards.

Tears are not taking a name of stopping. He felt a hand on his shoulder and he knows who is it. He is only person who is there with him in all odds or say in each and every part of his life. He turned to look at adi who came in search of maan.

Maan hugged adi not able to control his pain, maan completely broke down and fell on his knees crying bitterly. Adi too is crying with maan, how destiny is so cruel to his friend.

Maan sambhalo apne aap ko told adi wiping maan’s tears.

Maan stood up and looked at adi with pain.

What is happening with me adi, I am not able to understand. Before my muskaan left me and then geet. Now my another daughter is 5 years old and I don’t know she exists. Adi uss din main apni muskaan ko aakri baar nai mil paya ab darr lag raha hain ki meri aishu ka yeh pehli mulakat aakri na ho jaye cried maan.

Maan aisa mat socho, you and geet will be happy once again I am sure told adi consoling his friend.

Maan smiled sadly and told you saw geet today na adi and you are still thinking geet will come to me. adi don’t have any words to say, but he has to do something so that geet comes to know the truth that maan is innocent. Adi dropped maan to his house and be offered maan that he will stay with him but maan asked him to go home saying he want to leave alone for some time. Adi didn’t pesture much as maan is so shattered and he needs to be alone for some time.

Here geet went to her room and closed the door not even hearing the call of rano. She thumped on the bed crying bitterly. Pari followed geet with aishu in her arms. When rano asked what happened to geet. Then pari said how they met maan jiju and how rude geet was.

Rano is angry on geet, 6 years passed even now she is angry on maan for no reason. Just for one mistake of maan she is punishing him for his life time. This is the heights of ridiculous.

Come out geet shouted rano going towards geet’s room.

Maa please leave me alone, I don’t want to talk anything now shouted geet back.

Cry geet cry, how much you want you cry because the pain you gave to maan is much more bigger than your tears told rano cursing her fate and her daughters.

I lost my muskaan because of maan maa cried geet.

Even maan lost his muskaan geet, she is yours and maan’s daughter not alone yours told rano and left from there haring no response from geet.

Here geet is crying and crying thinking about muskaan.

I cant forgive you maan, you are the reason for my muskaan’s death and I wont allow you to meet aishu. She is mine only mine and this time I cant lose her because of you thought geet and wiped her tears. That day no one is able to sleep, all are lost in their own thoughts.

Next day morning, geet woke up and she heard some music from aishu’s room. She rubbed her eyes and went to her room to see her dancing on the bed with her music system on. Geet got angry seeing that and switched off the music system splitting fire on aishu.

Aishu, how many time I told you don’t dance. I told you I hate dance and I don’t want you to repeat it again shouted geet. Aishu started crying hearing her maa’s shouting. Rano rushed to aishu’s room hearing geet’s shouting and saw aishu crying. Rano hugged aishu rubbing her back to calm her grand daughter. She shot an angry glare on geet. Geet left from there not able see her daughter crying that too because of her.

Aishu aise rote nahi, dekho good girls don’t cry tried rano to convince her.

Nani, I love dancing why maa don’t allow me asked aishu innocently.

Rano don’t know what to answer. How can she answer that her mother will remember her father because he is also a dancer. Rano still remember how muskaan use to dance with maan with her small small steps. Maan and muskaan’s bond is so special. Maan loves muskaan more than geet, his day starts with muskaan and ends with her, pampering her and fulfilling all her dreams. But one day he lost her. Here aishu is waiting for her nani’s answer but how can she tell so she kept quite and made her ready to school.

That day rano dropped aishu to school. Aishu is dull all the day as in her school annual day is coming soon and she want to participate in dance competition but her mother don’t allow her. Rano cant see her grand daughter all sad and an idea popped in her mind and smiled at herself.

Now I will see geet, how much you want your daughter not to meet her father but this time I wont listen you, father-daughter duo meet for sure thought rano and left from there to meet someone.

Precap: What rano is thinking?

Sam-geet meet..

Rishtey part 6

28 Feb


Tch tch, what happened geet? your nose is red, are you angry on me? asked maan innocently.

Geet who is holding cricket bat throwed on maan. maan caught it and smiled sweetly at her.

Aww thankyou so much geet, I was about to ask you told maan and started playing with children.

Geet went to annie and others who are watching their fight silently.

Tammy, tumko pata hain, your brother is one the dhust danav I have ever seen shouted geet angrily. But the 3 girls laughed out loud.

I just hate you pouted geet. Maan who listened this shouted. The feeling is mutual geet, so chill and laughed out loud. Geet fumed more and pouted looking at her sisters who are not even supported her. Maan is busy in playing with children. After some time children are tired and they ran to their respective houses. Maan saw geet is still angry on him and he loved teasing her.

Geet I want to tell you something told maan as he walked towards her. Geet looked at him so as others.

Your name is geet means song which is sweet. But see your attitude always shouting and fighting with others. Your name should not be geet but devil geet teased maan. Geet looked at him in anger and pouted seeing annie and tammy laughing. She stomped her foot and left from there cursing maan. seeing her pouting face maan laughed out loud.

Here geet went to dadi’s room and sat beside her.

Dadi, your grandson is very bad. I hate him complained geet making crying face.

Why what happened? Asked dadi seeing her face.

See dadi he is calling me devil geet complained geet.

Ohh why so? Asked dadi.

Don’t know dadi but he is very very bad told geet making baby face.

Geet, chodo yeh sab. He is my grandson ek baat poochu geet ? asked dadi.

Ha dadi told geet.

Will you marry my maan asked dadi smiling.

Dadi shouted geet and stood up. I think you are joking. Mein aur uss chimpanzee se shaadi no way dadi. I want my prince charming but not that chimpanzee shouted geet making dadi laugh out loud.

Dadi you are laughing at me pouted geet and left from there too. She went to her room and lied down on the bed complaining to her babaji.

Dekha babaji aapne, see how all are teasing me. I will go back to delhi she pouted and looked up.

Hey geet, what are you doing here when all are waiting for you outside asked tammy coming in.

The brother of yours I just hate him, how dare he tease me pouted geet making tammy laugh.

Tammy came and sat beside geet. Geet I am sorry on behalf of bro told tammy getting emotional.

Hey what happened to you yaar? I was just joking told geet wiping her tears.

Tammy smiled slightly at her and told no geet you don’t know anything. After so many years bro is laughing and smiling. After dad’s death everything changed, bro joined business and naina di helped bro. if naina di is not there then we would have never came here and she is the one who knows bro in and out. Today I don’t regret coming here geet because I am able to see my bro happy again.

Geet felt bad for tammy and her respect for maan increased. He is very responsible and loves his family a lot. Tammy saw geet lose in some thoughts.

Arey yaar, I came here to call you and see you are lost in your thoughts. Come lets go told tammy getting up.

Where? Geet asked confused.

Geet, did you forget we have to go to temple told tammy.

Oh yes I forgot. Just 5 minutes I will change and come told geet.

Ok come fast, we will wait outside told tammy and left from there. Geet immediately got changed and ran outside to see all are waiting for her and maan is annoyed as he don’t like waiting. But when he saw geet, he is just lost in her beauty. She is looking beautiful in the while color salwar suit and her hair open. For a second he lost in her but composed himself.

Annie, anita, geet and tammy left for temple in jeep and maan is driving. Today he has become driver for these ladies. He is cursing his fate as he don’t have any other work to do here other than to roam. How happy he was with his files and laptop but now he don’t have net access in his mobile and laptop. He made a annoyed face and is driving to the temple. But soon his expressions are changed when he saw the beauty of village. Being in abroad from start he don’t know anything about village, but now he is really enjoying the atmosphere.

But maan stopped the car in the middle making the girls confused, they all saw maan and his gaze. There they saw their dadaji and some village people arguing discussing on something which made maan curious as there was a lawyer there. Maan got down of the jeep and walked to them without dadaji’s knowledge followed by the girls. Listening their talks maan came to know that they are talking about some land issue.

Geet is more curious and stepped into the discussion. She took the documents from lawyer and read them. Due to the technical terms over there she didn’t exactly understood what is the matter.

Geet you go from here told dadaji. Geet nodded and left from there with the documents with her. Maan took those papers from geet and read them. Being a business tycoon he understood the situation and it is not that complicated too. But he was little hesitant to talk with dadaji after today’s incident. But somehow he walked ahead. Dadaji saw maan but didn’t talk anything. He saw those papers.

Excuse me Mr. Lawyer called out maan. Hearing maan’s authoritive voice every one became silent and looked at maan. Lawyer looked at maan.

Yes? Asked lawyer. Maan gave those documents to lawyer.

Mr ?? asked maan.

Arjun Joshi told lawyer.

Mr. Joshi, what is the problem here? As per documents every thing is clear and you can go to court and solve the issue right? Then what is discussion going on here? Asked maan.

Actually Mr?

Maan Singh Khurana

Mr. Khurana, the opposite client is creating an issue on this land issue. Their village has sufficient water but even then filed a case against your dadaji. They want to construct a dam here but so many farmers will lose their land. We tried to explain them but they are adamant told maan.

Look Mr. Joshi, we can win this case easily. You just get the proves that many people are dependent on this land and submit it in the court. Then the problem is solved told maan. Lawyer looked at him in awe and nodded.

Lawyer turned to dadaji and told the same. Khurana ji, agar hum aisa kiya tho we can win this case told lawyer. Dadaji nodded and felt proud of maan. Maan once looked at dadaji and left from there feeling satisfied. Geet looked at maan and followed him fast while others are walking slowly towards jeep.

Yaar can I ask you something? Asked geet to maan.

Hmm came as maan’s reply.

Along with your construction business why don’t you practice law, dekho you solved this problem so easily told geet innocently. Maan at once looked at maan and made a weird face.

Are you really a doctor? Asked maan.

Yes told geet proudly but again asked why?

Tum itni bewakoof ho, how did you pass in the exams? Asked maan.

Geet looked at him angrily. He will be always ready to taunt her.

Tum apne app ko samajthe kya ho? Shouted geet in anger. But maan pulled geet towards him in a jerk, geet decided to blast on him but next second she hugged maan tight in fear. There a car passed by rashly. If maan didn’t pull geet then she might have hit by the car.

Girls rushed towards them. Geet came out and looked at him in fear.

Are you fine geet? asked maan. Geet just nodded and soon came into her sherni mood. Geet sat on the driver’s seat and ordered others to have their seat.

Geet let me drive told maan calmly.

Maan, don’t argue get into the car soon ordered geet and maan didn’t argue much seeing her anger. Geet took a stone and kept it with her. She accelerated and drove the car in full speed. She is chasing that car and soon when she saw the car stopped in the middle and the people from that car stood outside. Geet smirked and took the stone. Geet too stopped the car and thrown the stone on that car breaking its window glass. Geet was fast enough to drive the jeep in normal speed so that those people might not recognize who it is?

Maan and others looked at geet in shock. Once they crossed the other car and saw that they are in safe distance burst out into laughter.

Geet that was awesome girl told tammy laughing out loud.

Aur nahi tho kya? They took panga with geet told geet with attitude.

She is such a kid thought maan and smiled at himself. Soon they reached temple and went inside to pray for god.

Precap: Oops geet hurted her leg…

Love and Revenge part 19

23 Feb

Maan took geet to his room and carefully laid her on the bed. Geet smiled at him, maan caressed her face and told sleep for some time geet. I will just come now. But geet held maan’s hand. Maan looked at her and can see the pain in her eyes, the fear of loosing their baby. Maan too lied down next to geet, pulled her close to him. Geet snuggled more to maan, placing her head on his chest feeling the warmth. She is still in shock of losing their baby. If dev didn’t come on time then the doctor might have aborted their child long back. The mere thought sent shiver through her spine and geet’s hand securely rounded her stomach like saving their baby from all the odds. Maan hugged her tight, Geet our baby is fine. No one can harm our baby told maan trying to console her but she is lost in her own world.

Geet, look at me asked maan cupping her face.

Geet looked at him with tearful eyes, Maan, th.. they tried to kill our baby. Why maan? why it is happening with us. First it was you who tried to stay away from me, when I got you then some one is trying to harm our baby. Why it is happening with me. I am tired maan, fighting with all odds. Till when I have to fight. I want to go away from here to save our baby cried geet clinging onto maan. Maan closed his eyes in pain, somewhere he is the reason for all her pain. If he didn’t sent her away from him she might be happy all these years. But he is worried sick because of geet’s safety and had to act rude with her and hurt her in all the way. When they thought everything is back to normal some one tried to harm their baby. Something happening to baby boiled maan’s blood.

The question which geet asked him ringing in his ears and he too is having same question. Will they ever be happy in their life again and live a happy life with no tensions and revenge thing. He shrugged all his thought when he heard the sobs of geet.

Maan cupped her face and made her look at him. He kissed her eyes wiping off those tears.

Geet, I know what you are going through. And I am the reason behind it told maan looking at her with guilt. I promise you geet, everything will be fine soon and we will have a happy life. I wont let anything happen to you, our baby or our family. I will keep them safe from everyone. I promise mishty told maan and kissed her forehead. Geet just rested her head on his chest due to tiredness. The whole thing happened from today morning have taken a toll on her. And her pregnancy harmones are also not helping her. She is getting hyper but is controlling herself and closed her eyes feeling her love close to her.

Maan slowly caressing her hair and patting her to sleep. He don’t want to see her in pain anymore, she has suffered enough. So decided to take geet away from this environment for few days at least. Only maan and geet, geet needs him the most. If he is here then he cant give more time to geet. So decided to take her out somewhere and for few days arnav and dev will manage the things. And he has to double the security and have to arrange personal body guards to everyone. Mainly for khushi, prem and anjali as they are college going.

Maan looked at geet who is now sleeping peacefully hugging him tight. Maan caressed her face, pecking on her lips. He made her sleep on the bed and he got up glancing at geet, making sure that she don’t get up. He went out of the room to see arnav, sasha and dev are talking something.

I don’t know arnav, what they are talking about? When I went to talk with doctor about dad, there I saw the doctor and some guy talking with each other. Then I heard geet’s name and got alert. I just came to know that they are planning something against her told sasha.

Can you recognize that guy, sasha? Asked arnav.

Wait, I have his pic. I took without knowing anyone told sasha and fished her mobile in her bag. She showed the pic to arnav and maan who is listening their convo came there to know who the person is.

When maan saw the photo, he went to deep thought thinking he saw him somewhere but not able to remember where he saw. He thought to talk with police once and keep a track on this person. Arnav never saw that person before. But thought to ask khushi, she might be knowing. Because she knows her bade papa and his family.

Is khushi at home? Asked arnav.

I think’ yes she is coming told maan and pointed towards entrance where prem and khushi are coming from terrace.

Khushi came in and smiled at them and sat beside maan. He kissed her forehead and asked how is college?

Good VJ, finally I am able to continue my studies told khushi smiling at him.

Bhai, yeh padhai kam aur batein jyada karti hain complained prem.

Aur tum padhai aur batein kam and ghoomna jyada karte ho. Hain na? asked maan making him realize who has helped him to study during his exams. Prem smiled at him sheepishly.

Bhai, hum dono tho architects hain. But she is fashion designer, who will help her if she don’t study asked prem and patted his back for such a intelligent question. But his happiness is short lived.

I think I run a company. Hain na prem? Asked arnav.

Prem made a baby face and nodded for a yes for which khushi giggled. They talked for some time. After that prem left from there.

Khushi, we need to ask you something? Asked maan.

Ji VJ?

Maan showed the photo to khushi and asked do you know who he is?

Khushi saw the picture and recognized him. He is her so called cousin, who didn’t even treated her like a human when she was in their house.

VJ, he is Rohan told khushi.

Rohan? Asked maan.

Ha bade papa’s elder son told khushi, her face color changed. Those horrible days of her life flashed in front of her. Maan stiffened hearing it and looked at khushi who lost the color of her face.

Sasha left from there as she has to attend her dad, who is gonna dis-charged today. Maan hugged khushi side ways and calmed her.

Shhh..  don’t think of the past dear, we all are there with you now. Relax shhh convinced maan.

Khushi calmed down and smiled slightly at him. Maan caressed her hair and asked to go to her room. She nodded and left from there.

Bhai, I arranged a camera in senior doctor’s cabin. If he again comes to meet him then we will come to know told dev.

Dev, I don’t want you to be in any type of risk told maan concerned.

No bro nothing will happen. Those who tried to harm my family, how can I leave them told dev with rage.

But careful dev warned maan.

Sure bro don’t worry told dev. Maan nodded and left from there thinking something. He want to get rid of them as soon as possible mainly geet needs rest, she should not stress at this time. And he cant take geet out of country as a case is filed against her. So he decided to go to farm house.

Maan called arnav to his study.

Bolo maan.

Arnav, I am thinking to take geet to our farm house, as she needs rest now told maan.

That’s good idea maan, and change in the surrounding also help her told arnav.

Yes, we will be back in a week. Arnav I have talked with security agency and increased the security and also arranged personal bodyguards for prem, anjali and khushi. I want you to talk with them when they come here and ask them not to allow any outsiders to meet them in the college told maan.

Ok, I will talk with them. You don’t worry. From now I will be extra careful with them told arnav. Maan nodded.

Maan, you be careful and take care of geet. she needs you the most now told arnav worried for geet and at her state. She is undergoing emotional turmoil.

I will told maan. they talked about the things for some time and arnav left to RM leaving geet with maan. when maan went to their room, he saw geet is still sleeping and cuddled up like a baby. He smiled and went near her. He kissed her forehead and tried to wake her up.

Mishty, get up dear. Have some food tried maan to wake up geet. Geet moved little held his hand and placed it under her cheek and slept again. Maan chuckled, his hands slowly went under her kurti touching her stomach. He is tickling her now. Geet opened her eyes wide and glared at maan.

Maan stop it.. please told geet in between her laughter.

But maan is tickling her more as he is enjoying her smiling after a long time. He want to see that smile on her face forever.

Maan see I got up, now please stop told geet. Maan stopped finally, smiled at her. Geet pouted and got up not looking at maan.

Is my mishty is angry? Asked maan.

Geet nodded ever so cutely. Awww now what should I do? Asked maan patting his chin.

Geet looked at maan from corner of her eyes. Maan pulled geet towards him holding her waist. It happened so suddenly that even geet didn’t realize when she fell on maan. Their bodies are glued, maan tucked her hair strands which are falling on her lips and disturbing him.

Farm house chale? Asked maan huskily caressing her exposed skin sensuously.

Ummm moaned geet losing herself in his touch.

Then get ready fast told maan kissing her cheek. Geet smiled and got up. Maan asked nakul to bring dinner to their room, while maan went to talk to his mom and dadimaa. He informed them that they are going to farm house for a week or 2. They agreed and told him not to worry.

After dinner geet packed few cloths of maan’s but she don’t have her any cloths in KM.

Uff ab main kya karu? Thought geet.

She saw maan entering into the room. Maan called geet.

Yes jaan.

I don’t have any cloths to pack told geet sadly.

Maan hugged her from back and told jaan, when I am with you what is the use of cloths. Waise tho I don’t mind seeing you without any’.

Geet is all now sharam se pani pani. She whacked his arm and gave an angry glare.

Boliye na maan asked geet again.

I told anjali and your bag is already lying in the car told maan sadly. Seeing his sad face geet felt like pulling his cheeks. He is looking like a small kid who lost his favorite candy or a doll.

Maan main aapse ek baat bolu asked geet.

Ha bolo na, agar main nahi tho kaun sunega teri bak bak told maan.

Hawww geet opened her mouth in a exact O shape.

Geet close your mouth or else *maan smirking* I wont mind entering your mouth winked maan. Geet closed her mouth.

Chalo chalo we are getting late told geet.

Geet ek kiss dedo na requested maan. Geet smiled and gave a flying kiss and told ab chale.

Maan made a angry face. yeh bhi koi kiss hota hain kya thought maan. Don’t worry geet once we reach farm house’. Maan left his thought there itself to control himself.

Geet and maan got into the car. He don’t want anyone to disturb them, so maan is driving the car while geet is as usual busy in her non-stop bak bak. Maan smiled seeing her happy again.


Precap: Ufff naughty maan and angry geet. What a combo sirji’ *wink*

Rishtey Part 5

11 Feb

Maan, geet, annie, anita, tammy enjoyed their time with maan’s bua. Maan is feeling so happy to see his family. He always heard from his dad that his family is so big and he hurted all of them. Maan who was all lonely till today and don’t know how a family will be is now experiencing their love and care. He forgot all the pain which he suffered after his dad’s death. Till today his mom, tammy and naina was his life but now there are so many people who care for him and love. All these relations were with him from long but he don’t know and today when he came to know the value of relations, value of RISHTEY he felt so happy, a unknown happiness engulfed in him.

Next day morning was as usual busy, all elderly ladies were busy in kitchen and the girls were in their masti mood tammy too joined them. Maan had a smile on his face seeing his little sis happily enjoying with them. Suddenly the whole hall became silent, there comes maan’s dadaji from the morning walk. When maan saw him a small fear engulfed in him thinking will dadaji accept him or not. Thinking the same he and tammy went near dadaji, who now sat on the couch.

Dadaji called maan, dadaji looked up at them. Dadi came there with a coffee. Ji, yeh hamare Veer ke bache told dadi. Listening that dadaji stiffened a bit. He looked at maan and tammy blankly. They both bent to take blessings from dadaji, but he just got up angrily. Tammy feared seeing his angry face. He left from there giving an angry glare to maan and tammy.

Seeing his angry face tammy is literally shaking, everyone treated as princess but now she is facing someones anger. Though maan is famous for his angry but he was always a loving and caring brother. She is having tears in her eyes. Maan saw that and closed his eyes knowing how sensitive tammy is when it comes to something emotional. When they lost their dad it took 2 months for tammy to come back to normal.

Maan took tammy to his room, by now she is crying.

Bhai, we will go back I don’t want to stay here told tammy crying and hugged maan.

Princess look here asked maan and cupped her face. You know na dad hurted dadaji and others and came out of this house and married mom. So obviously dadaji will be angry on dad right? And he has right to show his anger on us told maan and kissed her forehead.

Tammy is little convinced but still sad seeing her dadaji’s anger. Will you talk with naina, shall I call her? asked maan.

Tammy nodded for a yes. Ok, I am calling her told maan and took out his mobile to call her. she is the one who can handle tammy when she is emotional or upset.

Hey maan, how is everything? Asked naina picking up the call.

Hii everything is fine, tammy wants to talk to you told maan and gave the phone to tammy.

Hello di came a voice of tammy which is sad, naina got alerted hearing her sad voice and understood why maan called now.

Hey princess how are you? Asked naina.

Di I want to come back told tammy.

What happened dear ? asked naina.

You know dadaji is angry on us and explained how angry he was. Naina heard everything silently.

Ohh so my princess is sad for that asked naina for which tammy nodded. Hmmm tammy dear, you should give some time for them and I know my tammy is strong and she will win her dadaji’s heart soon told naina trying to convince her. Tammy thought for a while and smiled at maan cutely.

Yes di I will told tammy happily. Maan sighed in relief seeing her smile. He can face everything but not his sis tears.

Tammy yaar, come fast shouted geet from outside.

Naina di, geet is calling me. I will talk to you later told tammy and gave the mobile to maan, she ran outside. Maan smiled at her.


So, how is everything there? I think you must be angry by now asked naina.

Yes, but I am here because of maa ad except dadaji all are talking to us nicely. So happy to see all of them now told maan.

Wow, that’s great. Hey maan, need to attend meeting now. I will call you in the evening told naina.

Ok no probs. Bye take care told maan.

You too bye told naina and cut the call.

Maan comes of the room to see geet, tammy and annie are talking and cracking jokes around. Its been long since maan is standing. Priya came to maan and asks about morning incident.

No maa, I am not angry. Its our responsibility to win dadaji’s heart told maan and smiled at his maa. Maan decided to go for a walk, but when he saw girls are playing cricket there. He is amused to see their playing skills. They are playing with small kids in the village. Geet was caught out but no she is not accepting and stood there making baby face to give her one another chance. An idea popped in maan’s mind to tease geet.

Maan went there and gathered childrens attention there.

Hello pyaare bachon, mera naam hain maan. kya main aapke saath cricket khel sakta hu? Asked maan.

Bachon, you should not allow him to play. From many years we are playing and I am the caption and I allow no one to play fumed geet.

Iss ghar ki bada beta hu main, so I have right to play retorted maan.

Ohh hello, I came first to this house. So I am first and you cant play that’s it told geet angrily.

Anita, annie and tammy are listening to their argument silently. They decided not to interfere. When geet and other children again started to play game, maan sat on the bench and he is facing geet’s back. Maan who is having chocolates in his pocket took them out. When geet is ready for bating, when a boy is bowling. He stopped in the middle and looked at maan with a smile on his face. Geet got confused and looked back. When geet is turning back, maan kept the chocolates inside his pocket and sat there innocently as if nothing happened.

Oyy why you stopped shouted geet. that boy again went back for bowling. Again maan took out the chocolates and that boy stopped. This happened for 2-3 times. Finally geet is frustrated and looked back this time before time and red-handedly caught maan bribing children with his chocolates. All the children ran to maan and took chocolates from him.

Bhaiya, you are only our caption told children. Maan smiled at them and winked at geet who is now fuming at him.

Geet, tumko bhi chocolate chahiye? Asked maan laughing out loud.

Geet gave an angry glare at him. maan is still laughing holding his stomach.

Tch tch, what happened geet? your nose is red, are you angry on me? asked maan innocently.

Geet who is holding cricket bat throwed on maan. maan caught it and smiled sweetly at her.

Aww thankyou so much geet, I was about to ask you told maan and started playing with children.

Geet went to annie and others who are watching their fight silently.

Tammy, tumko pata hain, your brother is one the dhust danav I have ever seen shouted geet angrily. But the 3 girls laughed out loud.

Precap: Ufffff geet totally mad at maan and thinking to take revenge.

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