Love and Revenge Part 14

28 Aug

Maan’s bade paa, Rudra Singh Khurana, he is elder brother of Maan’s dad, Rishab singh Khurana. Rudra is not so intelligent, he always wastes money in gambling. He always asks dadimaa or rishab for money. He got married to sapna from the same village hoshiyarpur.

She is a greedy women, she came to the rich family so that she can enjoy her status as a khurana bahu but when she came to know about rudra she was very dis-appointed. After few years Rishab got married to sangita, she is sweet girl and she is liked by everyone in the family. She use to help rishab and dadaji in the business. Dadaji and rishab use to take care of business and rudra use to sit at home. It irked sapna and she filled rudra mind with venom and he was so enraged and thought that if he don’t care of business, then the whole property will go to the name of Rishab. He couldn’t think more than that. Sapna just wants whole khurana property into her name.

But later she came to know that Rudra and his sister pooja are not maan’s dadaji’s son and daughter. They are his elder brothers children who died in an accident when they were just 2 years old. But maan’s dadaji never differentiated between them, he loves all the 3.

But they thought they are just acting, what if they throw out of the house. This worried Rudra and he want to do something for the property. So he discussed some plan with his wife sapna. They both set with a plan and waiting for a opportunity to execute the plan. Seems that even god is also with them. Rishab, sangita, khushi came to hoshiyarpur for holidays. Maan, dev and prem are in delhi with arnav as maan and arnav are having some exams. But khushi is so adamant to visit dadaji and dadi. So they left 3 brothers in arnav’s home. and maan promised they will come after a week, till then their exams will be completed.

Khushi with her parents went to hoshiyarpur. A week passed and khushi is missing her brothers a lot mainly maan, his pampering and all she is missing.

Mom, when will vj come asked khushi.

They will come day after tomorrow  beta told mom.

Khushi made a sad face and thought more 2 days, no I will call them and will ask them to come today. Immediately she took sangita’s mobile and called to RM. Mr. Raizada picked the call.


Hello uncle, how are u? asked khushi.

Arey khushi beta, I am fine how are you? Asked Mr. Raizada.

Uncle I need to talk to vj told khushi sadly.

Ok beta I will call maan now told Mr. Raizada. Khushi smiled, soon maan took the phone from Mr. Raizada.

Hello princess, how are you? Asked maan.

Khushi almost in the verge of crying told Vj you pls come today I am missing you. Hearing her sad voice, maan got worried.

Princess why you are crying? See you don’t worry we will come day after tomorrow  told maan.

No vj, pls come today told khushi sadly.

Just then dev came who heard their convo. He wanted to tease khushi. Hehehe khushi, we know you cant stay away from us for more days then why you went to hoshiyarpur, we told na after bro’s exams we will go.

Now khushi started crying. I am.. sob.. sorry.. you 3 plz come soon told khushi. Now dev too got alert hearing her cry. Maan shot him an angry glare.

Princess I have last exam tomorrow then immediately we will come ok? You are a good girl na you should not cry, dekho I am scolding dev tried maan to console her.

Vj, I will come to bus station told khushi smiling listening to her vj.

But princess you never come to Bus station na asked dev.

You teased me na, I will tell to dadaji and he will scold you for sure. When he is scolding you how can I miss that told khushi smiling cheekily.

Maan and dev didn’t help but smile at her cute antics. They talked for some more time and cut the call. Next day maan gave his last exam of 10th class. Without wasting time, they 3 packed their bags and geet too accompanied them. Here khushi is very excited to meet her brothers. Rudra and sapna got a exact time to execute their plan.

Its almost time for maan and others to reach hoshiyarpur. So they started from home with khushi leaving dadimaa and sangita at home. Here geet, maan, dev and prem reached hoshiyarpur and waiting for dadaji. Dadaji, rishab and khushi reached bus stop. Khushi got excited seeing them. She ran to them and all the four hugged, geet is just watching them with a smile and a slight pain. If she is with her parents then today.. but she immediately wiped that thought because she has Mr. and Mrs Raizada, arnav and anjali with her. She is happy with them, when she is with them she never remembered her family. All the four came out of hug, dev, prem and khushi ran towards their dad.

How are my children? Asked dad.

Fine dad they both replied.

He hugged both dev and prem, he is feeling some thing odd today. He don’t want to leave his children. All the children got into one car. Geet came into dadji’s car as prem and khushi started their fight got the seat. Dad smiled at her and started the car. Maan’s car is following them. Just then rishab’s mobile rang, he stopped the car aside and picked the call.

Ji aap kaha ho? Asked sangita with a tensed voice. Here maan’s car went across rishab’s car and maan is now ahead. He looked back why his dad stopped the car, but rishab seeing him looking back signaled him to go ahead. Maan smiled and asked driver to start the car.

Sangita, tum itni pareshan kyun ho? Sab kuch thik hain na? asked rishab.

But the other side, sangita didn’t answer anything and the phone got dis-connected. Rishab got worried and tried to call again but the phone is switched off.

Rishab kya hua? Asked dadaji.

Pata nahi papaji, sangita kuch pareshan lag rahi hain, hame jaldi jaana hain told rishab and started the car.

Suddenly the whole atmosphere got tensed, there is some uneasiness, some fear but don’t know what is that. Here dadimaa is running, her face is covered with tears. She is coming in the same way where maan’s car is coming. Maan saw his dadimaa is running and he asked to stop the car. He immediately got down and ran towards dadimaa. Due to running dadimaa is out of breath and she was about to fall. Maan ran to her and held her shoulders.

Dadi.. dadi.. what happened? Asked maan worriedly.

Dadimaa is breathing heavily. Maan took her near car and made her sit. Even dev, prem and khushi got down from the car and came towards dadimaa’s side. Maan gave her some water and she calmed down.

Maan, save your dadaji and papa told dadi.

Dadimaa what happened? Asked maan. But khushi felt something is wrong and when she turned back, some one closed her mouth and took her away. But due to the tension no one observed khushi.

Suddenly they heard a blast and on the other side geet is running crying bitterly. All went blank and dadimaa collapsed. She knows what might happened. Geet came running to maan and told maan, papa and dadaji and she too fainted. Maan told driver to take dadimaa and geet to hospital with dev and prem.

Suddenly he noticed khushi is missing but he didn’t tell to anyone as all are tensed. Maan ran back and saw the whole car has turned into ashes. He collapsed on the ground and cried bitterly. His papa and dadaji are no more. Maan cried cried and cried. A 16 years boy it is very hard for him to accept the truth. He thought it’s an accident, how can he think that its not an accident but a murder. Still he don’t know about this cruel world. But he is mature enough to understand if and only if he knows the true colors of people mainly his bade maa and bade paa.

He don’t know what to do, he found his dad’s mobile on the ground. Its like he throwed the mobile on the ground before. But maan don’t know that, he couldn’t guess its all pre-planned. How can he when he don’t know the real faces of his bade paa and bade maa. He took the mobile and immediately called to Mr. Raizada.

Hello rishab bolo asked Mr. R.

Uncle.. uncle cried maan.

Mr. R got alert hearing his crying. Maan beta, what happened. Why you are crying? Asked Mr. R

Uncle papa and dadaji accident tried maan to tell something but he couldn’t complete due to crying. Mr. R sensed something is wrong and without wasting time he made his way to car and started to Hoshiyarpur.

Maan you don’t worry, I am coming beta, I am coming tried Mr. R to console maan. Due to low battery the maan’s mobile got switched off. Maan then stood up and searching here and there for khushi, but he didn’t find her. Here on the other hand Rudra and Sapna are celebrating their success. But they don’t know that maan, dev, prem and dadimaa are still alive. They had send their men to kill the whole family. Rudra went to his sleeping sons and thought from today you both are the owners of Khurana property, you will get the best and smiled evilly at his success of the plan.

Maan felt dejected by not finding khushi, when he went home he didn’t find her mother.

Maaa shouted maan in anger, pain and grief of loosing his loved ones and not finding his mother. But he is sure, his conscience is saying that his maa and khushi are alive somewhere and waiting for him. He went to hospital, he is tired due to this sudden turn of events. How happy he was when he came here, but now just in matter of minutes everything has changed.

He found dadimaa and geet are alright, because of stress they fainted and nothing more. But the question is how should he tell them about his dad and dadaji. But for dadi, there is no need to tell she guessed everything when she saw maan, the pain in his eyes said it all and geet too know. But how should he tell about khushi.

There is silence all around. No one dared to talk, infact they don’t know what to say now. All of them stood there in a silence, maan didn’t dare to utter a word, he knows he will broke down for sure. But here he has to tell, he cant be silent. For the first time maan is feeling helpless, why this happened? How can they live without parents. He don’t know where his mom is? He is feeling like screaming out loud. No he should be strong for his family, his dadimaa, his brothers.

He walked towards dadimaa and held her hand and made her stand.

Ghar chale dadimaa told maan. Geet looked at him blankly so as maan. They reached home, its not home now. it seems like they are in some hell, mainly dadimaa. After coming home dadimaa broke down completely. But all are kids there how can they control her, dev and prem is not able to understand anything. Mr. R came home at the right time. He found dadimaa and understood everything what might have happened in the accident. He lost his friend, the mere thought brought tears in her eyes but he has to be strong for the sake of this family, no this is now HIS family.

Mr. R went to dadi and called her maa. She looked at him in pain. Dev went to maan and asked bro, why dadi is crying?

Oh god, how can they tolerate the truth thought maan. But some or the other day they have to know.

Dev papa and dadaji ka accident hua told maan.

How bro? how are they now? asked dev. Maan nodded his head in a no. dev looked at him in horror yes ofcourse he understood. Khushi and mom kaha hain bro? asked dev.

Khushi went towards papa’s car and maa ran is before dadi and she also… maan couldn’t complete because he is lying. He don’t want anyone to know about khushi, but he has to tell Mr. R now maan needs his help. Even though what maan told is illogical but they believed because they are in no position to think of anything.

Days passed, months passed they went to Delhi and living in RM. Mrs. R took care of them. One day Mr. and Mrs. R are in the garden talking with each other. Just then arnav and maan are coming towards them but they didn’t notice maan and arnav.

Mr. R hugged Mrs. R and told what’s happening, I am not able to understand anything. They are small kids and maa. And how can I say this truth to maan, but he has every right to know about this. Wo tuth jayega devi wo bacha. Itni choti umr mein itna kuch jhelna padh raha hain.

What truth uncle asked maan with serious voice.



Precap: some more truth.

Sorry If the update is confusing, i tried to express the emotions of maan. And by now you understood what happened in the past. 🙂


33 Responses to “Love and Revenge Part 14”

  1. trs1391 August 28, 2012 at 9:24 am #

    HOW CAN RUDRA SAPNA DO SOMETHING LIKE THIS JUST FOR PROPERTY THE KILLED THE ONES who took care of rudra when he lost his parent bas…. bi…. rudra sapna just hate them

  2. maaneet0887 August 28, 2012 at 10:41 am #

    just hate them yaar how can that rudra do this for them….but awesome ud dear….

  3. ffdeewani August 28, 2012 at 1:39 pm #

    Amazing part jyothi…its such a bitter truth…poor Maan how he had handled everything is way beyond hard to imagine..his entire life was crashed in a matter of just seconds….how can one stoop so low for just money…Its really a dreading and horrible past…no wonder why Maan is a angry young man and keeps aloof from everything to save his remaining family and love…who are his life now…me toh all teary..teary after reading this update

  4. shoba August 28, 2012 at 1:47 pm #

    awesome update yaar…
    they were so cunning people to spoil their family

  5. shabnam August 28, 2012 at 5:36 pm #

    yeah dis is too much to bear…awesome update

  6. divya August 28, 2012 at 6:28 pm #

    omg.. so their bade papa n maa did this… it true that a women a house either heaven or hell.. sapna did dat nly… n rudra killed his own father n bro… how cheap… poor maan .. he hs gone through so much at such a small age.. bt goid dat Mr Raizada was there with him….

  7. ayesha August 29, 2012 at 8:59 am #

    Awesome update….
    Lvd it…
    So painful….just fr money n property people can fall so low…..
    Poor maan n his siblings….feeling sad d them….
    Waiting fr next….

  8. drashti10 August 29, 2012 at 10:13 am #

    Awesome update dear!!!!! How can some 1 stoop so low for d sake of money n property!!!! Poor Maan n his siblings!!!!! feeling sad 4 dem!!!!
    precap is interesting!!!! plzzz cont soon

  9. ramneek kaur August 29, 2012 at 10:17 am #

    How cheap
    feeling soo bad for maan nd his family
    dey suffered sooo much
    For dem money is soo imp

  10. ammu5 August 29, 2012 at 10:26 am #

    painful past

  11. ritzy09 August 29, 2012 at 11:21 am #

    money makes family foes……Poor Maan…actually feel bad for entire fmaily but maan being the eldest had to grow up

  12. prasu prrk86 August 29, 2012 at 11:39 am #

    awesome update

  13. sehzadisomia August 29, 2012 at 11:52 am #


  14. Niharika August 29, 2012 at 11:53 am #

    Tragic incident!!! how can someone be so selfish…

  15. DrRose August 29, 2012 at 12:38 pm #

    ahh that was so touchy part
    but i liked it .. too much emotional part jyo…
    waiting for some more truth

    much love Rose

  16. Tia Kashyap August 29, 2012 at 1:55 pm #

    omg some peolpe r so disguisting.. grr
    only 4 money they can go to any extent …
    babaji aise bande bnana chod doh….
    precap- waiting……………..

  17. ruhakhan August 29, 2012 at 2:27 pm #

    oh dis all happened in deir past
    wat more truth
    do update soon

  18. Shri August 29, 2012 at 2:33 pm #

    fabulous dear…
    maan uncle and aunt are disgusting…….waiting for mor

  19. dia0n August 29, 2012 at 3:09 pm #

    awesome part

  20. spvd August 29, 2012 at 3:23 pm #

    part 14
    OMG poor Maan and his family………..
    those evil people…………..
    cont soon dear…………………….

    Deepa (spvd)

    • jyothi09 August 29, 2012 at 3:35 pm #

      Hii deepa, dear is it now comfortable to read now.???

  21. Meena August 29, 2012 at 3:32 pm #

    awesome update
    loved it
    maan and his family has suffered much
    continue soon

  22. soumi paul August 29, 2012 at 3:58 pm #

    great update
    loved it

  23. fffan123 August 29, 2012 at 6:02 pm #

    Absolutely loved the update. Getting a clear idea about Maan, Khushi, Dev and Prem’s past. Update the next part soon.

  24. Mishti13 August 30, 2012 at 12:35 am #

    great update
    thanks fro pm

  25. freya10freya August 30, 2012 at 2:32 am #

    nice part

  26. payal August 30, 2012 at 4:41 am #

    Oh!!God how can people stood low for property!!
    I hope Maan find out truth…

  27. srirad August 30, 2012 at 5:24 am #

    Amazing update
    Rudra and sapna are evil..
    Poor maan suffered so much..
    Precap sound interesting..thanks for pm

  28. ratna August 30, 2012 at 6:37 am #

    Jyothi…..omg ….what a painful past…..what level people stoop to in their greed…..such a lovely family was shattered…..plz continue…..TC 🙂

  29. sonom August 30, 2012 at 4:52 pm #

    loved it awsome update

  30. Kiran September 1, 2012 at 10:20 am #

    imagining people kidnapping their own family daughter for property is very shocking….interesting update…..thanx for pm….

  31. Amy September 1, 2012 at 10:27 am #

    Superb Update
    Continue Soon
    Thank You So Much For The PM

  32. Pooja September 7, 2012 at 2:43 pm #

    finally m here reading ur updates sorry for late comment. my phone was dead for a whole week due to rain.
    cuming to update
    its painful to know dat in such a tender age maan lost his father nd his grandfather in front of his eyes. rudra nd sapna r d disgusting creature i have ever seen. due to both of dem evryoe had been suffering

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