Do i deserve ur love part 22

29 Aug


Rano is totally shattered listening the truth, she want to confront her brother. But how these many days her daughter is in so much pain seeing him around but she don’t know. What a mother she is? Thought rano. How he can do this to his own sister. Its disgusting, because of that shock he died and geet knows it from the start. But she didn’t tell anyone. But on the other hand rano is happy seeing maan, he is indeed a gem. Because of him today they are happy again mainly her geet, her daughter is happy.

On the other hand geet is feeling lite at her heart, now she don’t have any burdens on her shoulder, she told everything to her mom. even though first she is worried about her reaction but maan made it all set. She is very thankful to him. Seems that god is also with them now. Mamaji came there with sweets in his hand, as he couldn’t come for their engagement yesterday.

He entered into the house and smiled at them. When geet saw him first she got angry but then she smirked at him. Mamaji looked at her questioningly but shrugged his shoulders.

Arey rano I bought these sweets told mamaji and handed the sweets to her. Rano smiled at him extra sweetly but soon her smile turned into angry. She throwed the sweets on his face and slapped him hard across his cheek. Mamaji is shocked seeing rano and his eyes turned red with anger.

Rano… roared mamaji.

Shut up just shut up, chi you are my brother ha? Koi apni behen se aisa karta hain kya? Nafrat hain mujhe tumse(do any brother can do to her sister? I have you) shouted rano holding his collar.

Mamaji looked at geet and now he understood the story behind her smirk. He is angry on geet, he never expected geet will tell rano the truth but today everything changed. He knows now rano will hate him and never in her life talks with him. Firstly he got angry on maan because of him geet got courage to tell the truth.

Chi, uske kya kiya(what he did), if u asked for money then he could have give you but tumne kya kiya(what you did). You cheated him and throwed us on the roads to live our life. Tum jaise ghatiya insaan main aaj tak nahi dekhi (I have never seen a disgusting person like you) cried rano remembering mohinder.

Rano, don’t forget that I am your brother told mamaji angrily.

Brother? Do you know the meaning of brother. Aaj se hamara koi rishta nahi, mujhe tumara chehra bhi nahi dekhna told rano and looked at him with disgust. Mamaji was about to raise his hand but maan caught ut and twisted his hand.

(Brother? Do you know the meaning of brother. From today we are strangers, I don’t want to see your face told rano and looked at mamaji with disgust).

Kabardar tumne mere parivaar ko chot pahunchne ki koshish kit ho. Chale jao yaha se aur kabhi galti se bhi yaha mat aana, nahi tho main bhi nahi sakta main kya karunga told maan sternly.

(dare you hurt my family again, just go from here even by mistake also don’t come here. I don’t know what I do told maan sternly)

Mamaji looked at him angrily and told today because of you rano insulted me, I wont leave you. Do remember you will suffer for what you did told mamaji and left from there angrily once glaring at geet.

Geet is really happy from now this so called mamaji wont be in their life. They can live happily. Rano hugged maan and cried.

Why maan, what we did that god has played with us. How can he leave us. Why maan?? cried rano. Maan is just caressing her hair to calm down. Its really hard for him to tolerate, he cant see his maa crying. But today she learned about past and she has to let out her pain. So maan didn’t stop her, geet seeing her mother in that condition she too had tears in her eyes.

Later rano composed herself and stopped crying. She came out of the hug and looked at geet who is in tears. Rano went near her and told no geet don’t cry, today you have to be happy. Now you don’t have to face him. You suffered more than me beta enough of all this now. lets be happy told rano and hugged geet.

Maan smiled at them and he is also happy. Pari who is watching all this hated that mamaji to the core and happy for her mother and sister. She thanked stars for sending maan in their life. Even thought rano is sad knowing about her brother, but happy too for geet. That day all of them spent the day together talking with each other and enjoying themselves. Its evening rano looked tired maan asked her to rest for some time. She went to her room, here geet is in her room standing near the window looking outside and in a deep thought.

Maan came to her room and saw her thinking something. He hugged her from back and placed his chin on her shoulder. Geet first got startled but smiled knowing who it is.

What are you thinking? About me? Asked maan and smiled.

Hmm don’t I have any other work other than thinking about you ? asked geet smiling inwardly.

Maan frowned listening to her, he left her and sat on the bed pouting like a small kid. Geet saw this and laughed whole heatedly seeing his cute antics. Though maan melted seeing her laugh but maintained the pouting. Geet sat next to him and teased awww mera maan ko bura laga and pulled his cheeks.

Maan didn’t help but smile at her and hugged her. Geet too hugged him back.

Maan today I am so happy and I am feeling lite. I was scared for mom, but she understood everything and confronted mamaji. But he wont harm mom na maan? I am scared told a worried geet.

Geet nothing will happen, I am there na nothing will happen, I wont let him enter into our lives again told maan and kissed her hair.

Geet smiled and tightened the hug. They both stayed in the same position for some time feeling each other. They came out of hug and maan kissed her forehead and looking at her lovingly.

I just cant wait for more to make you mine told maan and slammed his lips on hers. Geet is though shocked by his sudden action but loved it and she too responded him with equal passion. Maan brought her close to him holding her waist. Geet snacked her hands round his neck digging her nails in his hair. Maan is nibbling her lower lip making her moan his name. he bite her upper lip and it started bleeding. Maan licked her blood making geet blush furiously. Geet opened her mouth allowing maan to enter and maan entered her mouth both are kissing each other as if there is no tomorrow. Their tongues are playing with each others and tasting the secrets. They both are in their own world and lost in each other. After like ages they broke the kiss due to lack of breath. Geet’s face is crimson red and maan bend down to her neck and kissed her neck. Geet moaned in pleasure.

His hands went to her back and opened her dori, geet gasped and hugged him tight. Maan kissed her shoulder and opened the zip. Maan slip her kurti off her shoulder exposing her milky white skin. He made her lie on the bed and came on top of her. Geet’s heart beat became uneven due to his proximity and closed her eyes. Maan smiled at her flushed face and captured her lips, they both kissed for some time and maan got up. Geet frowned not feeling him and she opened her eyes to see a smirking maan. geet blushed and hid her face in her palms. Maan smiled at her and kissed her forehead and told I will leave now geet. take care of maa and yourself.

Geet looked at him and nodded. Maan bid her good bye and left from there. Later the whole day went well and maneet talked at night and slept peacefully.

Its just only 15 days left for their marriage. All got busy with the preparations. They booked the hall, decorations, caterers and many more. All the ladies are busy in shopping  and gents are looking out marriage preparations. All are busy and no one has time even to breath. Everything is going very well. but here maan and geet are craving for each other to get a single glimpse. Seems like god listened to them and they both went for shopping to select geet’s lehenga and maan’s sherwani. Hayeeee both are so excited to meet each other.

They decided to meet an hour before in McD. So that they can talk with each other and spend some time. Geet wore red color suit and maan came in casuals anyways he is looking hot. They both met in McD and first they hugged each other. Awww how they missed each other its almost 10 days they didn’t meet and craving to get a glimpse. Finally today they met and its just only 3 days left for sangeet and mehendi.

Maan and geet went in and talked about all the things going on, about preparations and all. Maan is just listening to her and smiling seeing her excitement. Geet looked him who is smiling at her. Geet pouted and asked why you are smiling?

Maan nodded in a no and asked to continue. Later they both went to mall for shopping. Sales women welcomed them and asked them to sit. Showed the lehenga’s geet is liking all and don’t know which one to select. She looked at maan making baby face. Maan nodded his head at her antics. He saw a red color with dark green color border  lehenga which is beautiful work on it. Geet who saw hat instantly loved that one. She took that one and went to trail room for trying it out. Maan waited and waited but geet still didn’t come out. Maan went there and knocked the door.

Geet what happened, why its taking so much time? Asked maan.

Geet slightly opened the door and peeked out. Maan raised her eyebrows asking what?

Maan once come in na? asked geet.

Ummm ok.. told maan and went in. But the sight in front of him made him root at the spot. His geet is looking angelic in the lehenga. She is not less than a angel who came for him. He is staring at her without blinking. But here geet is struggling with the dori. She turned back facing her back to him. Oops her bare back is making him loose his senses.

Maan pls tie the strings na asked geet. Maan rised his hand and touched her bare skin at back, geet jolted with his touch and held her dupatta near her chest to control her erratic heartbeats. Maan is moving his fingers on her skin and finally finally with great difficulty tied the strings. He hugged her from back and bit her ear lobe and whispered you are looking breath taking geet.

Geet blushed and turned back and hid her face in his chest.

Geet you are making difficult for me to control told maan huskily.

Geet broke the hug and pushed him out. Its cheating geet pouted maan but geet closed the door blushing. Later she changed and came out. She asked sales women to pack this lehenga. Maan and geet went to select maan’s sherwani. Geet found a green color sherwani matching to her lehenga and maan too liked that one. Their shopping completed, they had lunch in a restaurant and went back to their respective homes.

2 days passed and it’s the day of mehendi and sangeet. All is set for that and it is held in geet’s house.


Precap: Mehendi and sangeet.

               Chori chori chupke chupke.


61 Responses to “Do i deserve ur love part 22”

  1. Jeba Rahman August 29, 2012 at 9:55 am #

    awesome update.
    loved maaneet moment.

    • jyothi09 August 30, 2012 at 4:18 am #

      thanku jeba.. 🙂 glad u liked the update..

  2. padma August 29, 2012 at 10:01 am #

    lovely part,i think mamaji will create problem later on

    • jyothi09 August 30, 2012 at 4:17 am #

      thanku akka.. 🙂 hmm wait and see.. 😛

  3. trs1391 August 29, 2012 at 10:02 am #

    superb love it awsemmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm

  4. dona86 August 29, 2012 at 10:10 am #

    awesome ….

  5. ammu5 August 29, 2012 at 10:17 am #

    loved da update

  6. drashti10 August 29, 2012 at 10:19 am #

    Awesome update dear!!!!
    Loved Rano confronted mamaji!!!!
    Loved maaneets moents!!!!!
    Precap is interesting plzzz cont soon!!!!

    • jyothi09 August 30, 2012 at 4:17 am #

      Thanku dear.. 🙂 glad u loved the update..
      will continue soon.. 🙂

  7. ramneek kaur August 29, 2012 at 10:25 am #

    Loved it
    finally rano knws yhe truth
    nd mamaji deserves more den one slap
    bloody cheap cald himself bro
    nd happy for geet family
    romance full on
    kahi bi shuru

    • jyothi09 August 30, 2012 at 4:16 am #

      Hii neek.. thanku 🙂 glad u liked the update..
      hmm yes he deserves.. really he is cheap.. haha maneet hain na.. 😛

  8. Sneh August 29, 2012 at 10:29 am #

    amazing update
    luved the way maan threw that mamaji out
    update soon
    waiting eagerly

    • jyothi09 August 30, 2012 at 4:15 am #

      thanku dear.. 🙂 will update soon dear..
      dear ur name in IF???

  9. ritzy09 August 29, 2012 at 11:13 am #

    awesome update…Maamaji is a real cheepo….Maaneet love each otehr so much I wonder what MU broke them like this

  10. prasu prrk86 August 29, 2012 at 11:32 am #

    wow so romantic (prrk86)

  11. mayapari August 29, 2012 at 12:21 pm #

    Awesome di

  12. DrRose August 29, 2012 at 12:31 pm #

    that was an awesome part
    loved it ..maaneet’s relation progressing… good
    that maamaji will be up to something.. loved rano’s slapping him
    ahann loved maanet moments
    waiting for their mehndi …

    phew finally am here jyo

  13. tia August 29, 2012 at 2:00 pm #


    • jyothi09 August 30, 2012 at 4:14 am #

      hey tia.. 🙂 was waiting for ur comment dear.. 😀 finally u r here.. thanku for liking the update.. haha.. ha yaar do teen slap milna chahiye, but dont worry.. uske wajah maneet ka romance mila na.. *wink* hayee precap: me confused..

  14. Shri August 29, 2012 at 2:10 pm #

    fabulous and romantic update

    • jyothi09 August 30, 2012 at 4:12 am #

      thanku shri.. 🙂 next one will be more romantic.. *wink*

  15. divya August 29, 2012 at 2:23 pm #

    woo nice… chalo rano dint breakdown.. n maan hai na with them… shopping was fun..

    • jyothi09 August 30, 2012 at 4:11 am #

      thanku divya.. maan hain tho chinta kyun. 😛 haha why it wont be fun after all it is maneet’s shopping.. 😀

  16. tanvi04 August 29, 2012 at 2:24 pm #


  17. ruhakhan August 29, 2012 at 2:37 pm #

    wow finally dat mama is out of der lives
    aww maaneet were so cute
    do update soon

    • jyothi09 August 30, 2012 at 4:10 am #

      yes dear he is out.. thanku.. 🙂 will update soon..

  18. spvd August 29, 2012 at 3:33 pm #

    part 22
    nice part…………
    that man is so low………..
    cont soon dear………………….

    Deepa (spvd)

    • jyothi09 August 30, 2012 at 4:10 am #

      thanku deepa.. 🙂
      yeah he is indeed low.. will continue soon

  19. Meena August 29, 2012 at 3:33 pm #

    awesome loved it

    • jyothi09 August 30, 2012 at 4:09 am #

      thanku meena.. 🙂 glad u liked the update..

  20. monika August 29, 2012 at 3:50 pm #


  21. dia0n August 29, 2012 at 4:11 pm #

    lovely …

  22. nats0109 August 29, 2012 at 4:35 pm #

    superb updt
    glad dat rano nw know d truth
    n love maneet!!

    • jyothi09 August 30, 2012 at 4:07 am #

      thanku dear.. 🙂 yeah she came to know the truth..

  23. ayesha August 29, 2012 at 5:00 pm #

    Amazing update:……
    Loved it….waiting fr maneet wedding….
    Maybe geets mamaji is involvd smhow in the mu btwn maneet in present….
    Waiting fr next part….

    • jyothi09 August 30, 2012 at 4:07 am #

      thanku dear.. 🙂 glad u liked the update..
      maybe.. u will come to know..

  24. crazydream August 29, 2012 at 5:33 pm #

    Rano did the right thing. She disowned her brother n gussa nikal diya uss par. Maan supporting them. Loved the Room scene. Maaneet getting close. They can’t stay away fem.each other for long. Marriage is near. Going to shopping . Maan selecting Geet’s dress n teasing her im trial room. Loved Maaneet scene.

  25. fffan123 August 29, 2012 at 6:08 pm #

    Maneet are very cute. Loved the update.

    • jyothi09 August 30, 2012 at 4:06 am #

      yeah.. 🙂 thanku dear..

  26. Mishti13 August 30, 2012 at 12:35 am #

    nice update
    thanks for pm
    cont. soon

    • jyothi09 August 30, 2012 at 4:06 am #

      thanku dear.. 🙂 will update soon..

  27. Laraib Yousuf August 30, 2012 at 1:08 am #

    waiting for the truth

    • jyothi09 August 30, 2012 at 4:05 am #

      thanku dear. 🙂 u will know the truth soon..

  28. freya10 August 30, 2012 at 2:32 am #

    superb part

  29. payal August 30, 2012 at 4:48 am #

    Nice part..Geet & Maan going to marry soon..I hope Mamaji don’t come back..

  30. srirad August 30, 2012 at 5:15 am #

    Superb update..
    Glad that rano confronted to mamaji..Hope mamaji will not come their life
    Maaneet moment so romantic
    Precap sound interesting
    Eagerly waiting for next

  31. ratna August 30, 2012 at 6:28 am #

    Jyothi……thank u for the awesome update…..glad Rano threw mama out of the house…..but worried what he will do next…..loved Maaneet scenes and their shopping….waiting for the wedding…..plz continue…..TC 🙂

  32. sonom August 30, 2012 at 4:52 pm #

    superv update 🙂

  33. mounicasharma August 31, 2012 at 4:01 am #

    hayeeeee what a romantic update darling..too too good..
    iam sorry first of all becoz iam starting my maan’s jaap again becoz i loved maan in this very very much…
    wow rano wow very good job..mamaji ka dhajjiya uda di rano ne…agrrrr how dare u to say those words to my maan…jao jao tu kuch nahi bhigad saktha mere maan ka…jab tak mona…
    and hayeee maan knows how to console her…see he became romantic to bring geet to normal mode n maan babu what’s that yar…u naught doing all naughty naughty things..kissing n al..hayeeee darling u never leave a chance to make me blush na…
    awwww maan cant control himself now….geet dont do that na..poor boy..u urseklf called him inside trail roon n pushed him out…awwww but that scene was tooo toooo cute…
    cant wait for maaneet’s wedding..cont soon darling..muazzzzzzz
    ur kiddo

  34. Kiran September 1, 2012 at 9:47 am #

    beautiful update….loved Maaneet moments…..mamaji bahut besharam hain….after knowing everything why don’t Rano throw him out of house or why don’t Maan do something….

  35. Amy September 1, 2012 at 10:27 am #

    Awesome Update
    Continue Soon
    Thank You So Much For The PM

  36. Jasminerahul September 2, 2012 at 6:44 am #

    Thanku 4 updating this in ur blog.Lovely part.Finally Rano reacted.Loved Maaneet moments.Geet looked gorgeous in d lehenga.No wonder.Maan could ind a shervani matching 2 her lehenga.Cool.Waiting 4 d wedding ceremonies 2 start

  37. nivedithaind91 September 2, 2012 at 2:20 pm #

    Awwww.. Maaneet romance was soooooo cute !!! Better get them married soon !!! 😉

  38. punam2712 September 5, 2012 at 5:06 pm #

    thank god mamaji isout of their lives
    they can happily celebrate all the rituals

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