Archive | September, 2012

Rishtey part 1

28 Sep

Part 1:

Maan came out and smiled at annie.

Maan, her marriage is after a month. She needs leave for 2 months told naina.

Sure, why not. You can go annie, and if you need any help then you can contact any of us told maan.

Thanku so much sir thanked annie, then she saw the wedding card in naina’s hand. Annie is confused when she didn’t give her wedding invitation to anyone then how cum it is with naina.

Naina, this card?? Asked annie.

Ohh this one, maan’s cousin marriage in India told naina.

What??? Literally annie shouted.

Huh!! What happened ? asked naina confusingly. Annie looked at maan wide eyes and closed her mouth with her palm.

Annie are you ok? Asked maan.

Sir are you attending this marriage? Asked annie.

No, I don’t want to told maan. Listening this annie is hurt and tears formed in her eyes.

Sir, it’s a request please come for the marriage, atleast for dadimaa told annie.

Dadimaa?? Asked maan confusingly.

Yes sir, I.. I am your cousin and its my marriage told annie and smiled sadly. Maan and naina are shocked. Pls sir come to India for dadimaa, she wants to meet her elder sons family. Few months back she got heart attack sir. We almost lost her, its her last wish to meet you all sir. Pls sir pls come for dadimaa’s sake cried annie. Maan’s mama and Naina’s parents listened and felt bad for her.

Priya came forward and kept her hand on annie’s head and told we will come for sure beta, its my dream that my children should get the love from Khurana’s. we will come beta.

Annie smiled through tears and thanked her. Thanku ma’am, thanku very much.

Annie beta, I am your badi maa told priya and smiled.

Annie is over whelmed and hugged her. Badi maa whispered annie. Maan felt happy seeing his mother happy. Even now he is not to go to India or not. But his mother promised then no back off.

Annie came out of the hug and told I will be waiting for you badi maa, sir.

Though she came to know that maan is her brother but she is not having guts to call him bhai, she is afraid of his anger, after all she is employee in KC and knows about maan’s temper.

I will go now badi maa. Good night wished annie and left from there. Maan immediately called someone and ordered something. Naina looked at him and smiled. She dragged him to her room and closed the door. Priya and naina’s parents smiled at their kids and they know naina will somehow convince maan to go to India.

What was that maan? Asked naina.

What?? Asked maan sitting comfortably on couch.

Don’t act maan, why you asked security to follow annie? Asked naina.

Maan didn’t answer. Naina came and sat beside maan. Maan you should go to India told naina.

Shut up naina told maan irritatingly.

Maan, you cared for annie right? You just came to know she is your cousin. And you sent security behind her for her safety. When you care a lot, then why don’t you go to India and meet your family once? Asked Naina.

I don’t have any family naina. Mama, my princess, you, uncle and aunty are my family which I know told maan with pain. I know that mama and papa had a love marriage without knowing anyone. For that they gave punishment for these many years.

Just one chance maan, they invited you all. If you wont go they may feel bad told naina making maan understand.

Just then someone barged in and came to naina and hugged her tight.

Happy Birthday di, many happy returns of the day wished that girl.

Naina smiled and thanku her. Thanku so much princess.

She then looked at maan and complained. Maan bhai, you didn’t wake me up. See I am so late to wish di and she made a baby face.

Maan rolled his eyes and told when you are sleeping like Kumbakaran how can I wake you up.

Awww bhai, its too much. I wont sleep much told maan’s princess, his sister Tamanna making funny face.

Ya ya true, you just sleep at 11 pm and wake up at 11 am told maan sarcastically.

Maan don’t tease my princess warned naina hugging her. Tammy smiled at her widely and sticked her tongue out.

Maan’s phone rang and its from his security. They informed annie reached home. He nodded and cut the call. Di, can we go for a drive on new car whispered tammy.

I too want but your brother na. huh!! Complained naina.

Hey I am going for a drive now, do anyone want to join? Asked maan. Hearing this they both got so excited and hugged him tight. Maan smiled and they 3 went on a long drive on the new sports car. They enjoyed talking with each other and pulling each others leg. But maan is in deep thinking. At early morning 4 am they went back to naina’s house. Maan and tammy has their rooms in that house. They are more like family rather than friends.

When tammy and naina were about to go in maan stopped them.

Tammy, we are going to India the next week told maan and left from there. Tammy looked at him confused and looked at naina, who looked happy and is smiling.

Di why we are going to India? Asked tammy.

Not we princess, you, maan and mama are going told naina.

Tammy frowned and asked why??

Come in I will tell you everything told naina and they both went to naina’s room. Both changed and lied down on the bed. Naina told everything happened few hours back. Ohh tammy is happy and excited to meet her family atlast.

From the next day both the girls went for shopping and almost purchased half of the mall. Intelligent girls they sent the bill to maan. Poor he, he is literally shocked to see the bill. After the meeting at the office he went to home and saw these 2 crazy girls are packing things.

Excuse me, are you going for any world tour? Asked maan.

No bhai, we are going to India na. so all this shopping is for that told tammy innocently.

Great, do you need to buy anything more? Asked maan.

Maan, today we both are so tired. We will do the rest tomorrow told naina.

Maan is like what??? Still there is left?? Impossible guys. You almost completed my card complained maan.

They smiled shamelessly at him and sweet coated him with their beautiful talks. Maan gave up and gave his card to them for the rest of the shopping and smiled at them. You 2 never change. My wife should not be a shopaholic like you both.

In other place:

A girl in her 20’s is running as fast as possible. Her mother who is waiting at railway station is worried about her.

Hey babaji, keep my beti safe prayed her mother.

Ji, you don’t worry. Our daughter will come soon told her husband who is watching her from past 15 min. who is in tension.

How can I not be worried? She has to come long back and didn’t come upto now, even she is not lifting her phone complained that lady.

Just then the girl who is running came to her mother and hugged her. Maa. I came.

Where were you till now? asked her mother angrily as well as tensed.

She broke the hug and told sorry maa, I went for shopping and I was late she told and made a baby face.

GEET, you never change na? yesterday you did so much of shopping, then again today? Asked her mother angrily.

Maa, I forgot few things told geet looking at her dad for helo.

Arey rano ji, leave it na, see the train is starting told mohan geet’s dad.

Rano got into the train hurriedly and here geet hugged her papaji and thanked him for saving her.

Miss you papaji, you better complete your work fast and come soon told geet.

I will geet, you don’t worry. I will there in annie’s marriage before a week told mohinder and kissed her forehead.

Geet smiled and bid him good bye and got into the train.

In Australia:

Forgot it bhai, my bhabhi will do shopping more than me told tammy and smiled at him.

Tammy beta called priya.

Ji maa, coming shouted tammy and ran out.

Maan, I am very happy with your decision told naina and smiled at him.

But I will miss you told maan and hugged her. Naina had tears in her eyes. They never away from each other and here maan, tammy and priya mama will be away from her for a month.

Maan broke the hug and looked at her. He smiled and wiped her tears and patted her cheek.

Come soon maan told naina with chocked voice.

Hey, don’t cry ok. I will call you daily and if u need me then call me immediately. And ofcourse we will chat through skype call. And my dear co-partner of KC, don’t take stress too much based on work. I will manage everything told maan.

Maan, do don’t think of work I will handle everything. You just go and enjoy there warned naina and maan nodded like a obedient child.

Precap: maan in India, Hoshiyarpur.


MG FF: Rishtey

26 Sep


A man in his mid 25’s is driving his car in a high speed. He never drove car with high speed. But today he did a very very big mistake. He checked his watch and murmured only 5 min left. He drove more fast. If he is late he is definitely admitted in the hospital. He imagined himself in the hospital with bandage all over his body. No no no I will reach in time. Plz save me mama’s babaji that man prayed.

Finally he reached his destination, while driving the car he didn’t put his googles but while getting out of the car he put his googles on and checked himself in the rare view mirror.

Dude, you are looking hansome complimented that man himself.

He felt a hand on his shoulder, he turned back and looked at that person who is hell angry on him. That man made a puppy face and murmured a sorry. But the other person is not ready to accept his apology and glared at him.

You are late today, how can you be late today? Its my birthday MAAN SINGH KHURANA told that person.

Maan made a sorry face and kissed her cheek. I am sorry baba, come lets go inside told maan.

First you tell me what gift you brought for me,  then I will think whether I can forgive you or not told that girl.

Oops I forgot to bring your gift NAINA told maan.

Naina, best friend of maan and is very good at heart. When maan’s parents came to Australia for the first time. Its naina’s family helped them. Maan and naina are best friends from childhood, partners in crime, naughty and doing crazy things always. They have no secrets, no affairs. Must say these two are acha bachas. But cant stay without fighting with each other, they fight for small small things mainly naina, she is more crazy than maan. And today its naina’s birthday and MAAN SINGH KHURANA is famous for what? Ofcourse in doing his work and forgetting his surroundings. Today also the same thing happened. And not to forget naina is black belt in karate, so maan imagined himself in hospital the next day in case he reached late.

How dare you forget my gift? I told to my friends this time maan will give something special to me told naina making a very very sad face.

Ufff my dear drama queen stop all this and come we will go in aunty, uncle and mama will be waiting for us told maan and dragged her in.

Naina followed maan half heartedly. Once they both went their whole gang of friends are waiting for them. Naina cut the cake and all of them sung the birthday song. She fed cake to her parents, maan’s mama but not to maan. Because maan forgot her girf remember? All other friends wished her, hugged her but she is least interested. The main reason is that maan didn’t bug her when she didn’t fed him the cake.

Maan went near his friend Rahul and asked him all set?

Rahul nodded and told waiting outside. Maan smiled at him and casually went near naina and told her to come with him. Naina came out with maan and he closed her eyes with one hand.

Maan what are you doing? Asked naina.

Shut up for some time told maan irritatingly. He then took naina with him and removed his hand and shouted in her ears SURPRISE…

Naina opened her eyes and just staring at the car in front of her. Its her favorite sports car that too her fav color. Omg.. omg.. she just cant believe this, maan you are the best exclaimed naina in excitement and hugged him tight. Maan smiled at her childishness and hugged her and wished her.

Happy Birthday Naina wished maan.

Naina broke the hug and asked can I drive?

Not now naina beti, you can do it afterwards came a voice. Maan and naina turned back to see maan’s mama.

Mama.. plz requested naina.

I need to talk to you both, come in told maan’s mom priya. She is serious and tensed too. They both nodded and followed her.  They went to study room and saw naina’s parents too.

What’s the matter? Is anything serious? Asked maan.

Priya gave maan something, he opened it and read it. He looked at priya confusingly. Seeing maan’s expression naina took that wedding card from maan. Oh now she is also confused.

Maan beta, for the very first time we got this invitation from your dadaji. They called us for the marriage of your cousin (sister) told priya.

Maan looked hurt. 5 years when his father died in an accident, no one came for their support but now they called them but why?

Just then a girl came there and called naina.

Naina.. called that girl.

Naina turned back to see annie her friend. She smiled at her and went out.

Naina, its late now. I have to go home now. Ummm will you ask maan sir regarding my leave. I am very nervous to ask him told annie.

Naina smiled at annie and she called maan. Maan..

Maan came out and smiled at annie.

Maan, her marriage is after a month. She needs leave for 2 months told naina.

Sure, why not. You can go annie, and if you need any help then you can contact any of us told maan.

Precap: will maan go to India.

Do i deserve ur love part 24

13 Sep

Haldi function is completed, maan and geet went to their respective rooms to take shower. Smile didn’t leave their face, they both are so excited and happy to start their new life. Maan had shower and came out, changed into vests and pants. Just then pinky there with breakfast for maan. Maan smiled at her and pinky arranged breakfast for him.

Thanku pinky told maan.

Bhai I know that you are getting married and from tomorrow your wife will do all these things, but doesn’t mean that you should be this formal complained pinky listening thanku from maan.

Maan smiled at her complaint and told acha baba I am sorry. And one more thing are you expecting geet will do all these things? Pinky looked at him confused.

Kyun nahi? (why not?) asked pinky.

My dear pinky, does your friend know how to cook? Asked maan rising his eyebrow.

Pinky laughed at him and told poor you bhai, enjoy cooking. And my friend is not that bad too she can make maggie for you and laughed out loud. Maan too joined her laughter.

Hawwww you are teasing my sister told pari entering into his room to give his sherwani.

Saaliji, you are also same right? I pity maa, how she is tolerating you both teased maan and pari made a baby face.

Yeh lijiye, your sherwani. I am placing it on the table told pari still pouting.

Arey saaliji tho bura maan gaye teased maan further but stopped seeing her tears. Pinky placed hand on her shoulder and asked what happened pari?

Pari nodded in a no.

Arey pari, I was just kidding. Sorry yaar told maan getting up.

Jiju take care of my di told pari while tears rolled down her cheeks. I was never away from geet di, but today she is going to start a new life. I am very happy for that but from today she wont be with us na told pari looking down.

Maan looked at pinky and then pari. Maan side hugged pari and told pari, you will never miss geet. You are my family now. You are like my sister, we all will stay together, I promise. Now don’t cry. If geet see na, she thinks I made you cry.

Pari smiled at maan and thanked him.

Thanku so much jiju. You are the best.

Chalo chalo, we will have breakfast I am hungry told maan touching his stomach.

Jiju, so much work is left you have breakfast and get ready. I will take care of your MISHTY teased pari and ran from there leaving a shocked maan behind.

Ha ha humko pata hain ki geet aapki MISHTY hain pinky too teased further. Now all the boys entered into maan’s room and made pinky go out.

Oyy why you all are staring at me? Asked maan making a weird face.

Saale, bachelor party kaha hain? Asked dev.

NO shouted maan.

What no? asked raj.

Bachelor party warty, no way told maan stubbornly.

You don’t come, we will enjoy told yash.

Maan is thinking while having breakfast. Hmm ok, you guys enjoy. Don’t drink much ok? Asked maan.

Ok dude, thanku thanked yash and went to his dreamy land dancing with girls.

Geet sat on the bed with girls around. She is thinking of something when pari nudged her.

Di, come out of jiju’s dreams for some time teased pari.

Geet blushed and slapped on her head warning her. Rano brought breakfast for geet and fed with her own hands. Rano kissed her forehead and blessed her.

Be happy geet, geet hugged rano. Both are having tears in their eyes. Rano broke the hug and told

Chalo, aaj khushiyon ka din hain. Aansu nahi and wiped her tears. Get ready geet, its almost 11 am. You should be ready in 2 hours.

Geet nodded and pinky told don’t worry aunty. We are there na.

Rano nodded and left from there.

Pari took out geet’s lehenga from cupboard and gave it to her. Geet touched it and smiled. Soon she changed and came out. Her hair is open and she is looking cute in that lehenga. Her friends attacked her with makeup kits and jewelary. Geet sat in front of dressing table and allowed her friends to do what ever they want. Few are making her wear bangles, maang tika and all other ornaments. While few are doing her hair.

Finally seems like ages geet got ready and it took almost 3 hours. Geet looked herself in the mirror. Pari and pinky hugged her from back and told you are looking breath taking.

Geet blushed and lowered her eye lashes.

I will be back told pinky and rushed to maan’s room.

Here maan too got ready in his sherwani and applied gel to his hair and looking hot and handsome exposing his chest with first 3 buttons open. Pinky knocked the door. Adi opened and asked what?

Is bhai ready? Asked pinky.

Yes told adi.

Ok I have to tie sehra to bhai told pinky.

Ok ya I forgot come told adi and allowed her to come in. Maan smiled at pinky and she tied sehra to maan. Maan got ready and they all are ready to go to marriage venue. Geet and some of her friends are there in house while rano and other elders went to marriage venue before maan reach there. Maan and his friends with pinky got into the car and started their drive to venue.

Within 1 hour they reached the venue and they all got down. Here rano is already waiting for maan. She saw him and smiled and maan too smiled at her. Rano did aarti and put tilak. She then took sweet and fed maan a spoon. Maan took blessing of rano and entered into the marriage hall. It is beautifully decorated with red roses and orchids favorite of both maan and geet. Soon maan is escorted to mandap.

Here geet too got ready and they too got into the other car and drove to venue. Geet is all nervous and excited. She clutched her dupatta tight and closed her eyes. All other friends are busy in their own world.

Babaji, thanku so much. Today is the most auspicious day in my life. Today I will be Mrs. Maan Singh Khurana. Papaji, aaj main bohot khush hu, aap bhi khush ho na? kaash aaj aap yaha hote. Where ever you are you will be happy. I got my happiness in the form of maan. I need your blessings papaji thought geet to herself and closed her seeking her papaji’s blessings.

They reached the venue and all of them got down. Rano came to her and took her inside the hall. Maan felt geet’s presence and turned towards the entrance.They looked at each other .



Dulhe Ka Sehra Suhana Lagta Hai

Dhulhan Ka To Dil Deewana Lagta Hai

That’s it, his breath stuck in his throat seeing his mishty looking not less than angel. Her milky while skin is reflecting more and her pink cheeks and lips and a smile playing on her lips shows how happy she is. She too looked up and saw maan, who is staring at her without blinking. They both are lost in their own world. Geet couldn’t tolerate his continous gaze on her and lowered her eye lashes.

Maan smiled at her and rano took geet to the mandap. Due to heavy lehenga, geet is not able to climd the step, maan offered his hand and geet happily took it and climbed the single stair near the mandap and they both stood side by side.


Soon panditji arrived and started chanting mantras. After few minutes, panditji asked them to exchange vanamala. Pari handed one to maan and one to geet.

Soon they both exchanged the vanamala and smiled at each other. Panditji asked them to sit. They both sat side by side and panditji chanting mantras once again. The havan was lit, maan and geet folded their hands infront of havan praying for their future.


Panditji asked maan to fill geet’s maang. Maan took a pinch of sindoor and filled geet maang. Geet closed her eyes living the moment.


Maan looked at her lovingly. Then he took mangalsutra and tied around her neck. Geet had tears in her eyes, seeing that maan nodded in a no.


Saat Pheron Se Bandha, Janmon Ka Ye Bandhan

Pyaar Se Joda Hai Rab Ne, Preet Ka Daaman

Hain Nayee Rasmein, Nayee Kasmein, Nayee Uljhan

Hont Hain Khamosh, Lekin Keh Rahi Dhadkan

 Dhadkan Dhadkan Dhadkan Dhadkan

 Mushkil Ashkon Ko Chukana Lagta Hai

Dhulhan Ka To Dil Deewana Lagta Hai

 Palbhar Mein Kaise Badalte Hain Rishte

Abh To Har Apna, Begaana Lagta Hai

 Dulhe Ka Sehra Suhana Lagta Hai

Dhulhan Ka To Dil Deewana Lagta Hai

They both stood up for pheras. They did seven pheras around the fire, promising each other to be there for each other in every ups and downs of the life. They completed the pheras and took elders blessings. Rano kissed their forehead and blessed for their happy life.


Next ritual was bidaai, it was very emotional, geet hugged both rano and pari and cried. Maan felt bad seeing his geet missing her happy. But he promised himself, soon she will be with her full family.


Main Teri Baahon Ke Jhule Mein Pali Babul

Jaa Rahi Hoon Chod Ke Teri Gali Babul

Khoobsurat Ye Zamaane Yaad Aayenge

Chah Ke Bhi Hum Tume Na Bhool Payengey

 Dulhe Ka Sehra Suhana Lagta Hai

Dhulhan Ka To Dil Deewana Lagta Hai

Dulhe Ka, Sehra, Suhana Lagta Hai

Dhulhan Ka To Dil Deewana Lagta Hai

Even pinky got emotional seeing geet, she suffered a lot in her life. Finally she is settled and she have full confidence on her maan bhai, he will keep geet always happy, no matter what.

Rano wiped geet’s tears and told Khush raho beti, aaj se tum apna naya zindagi shuru karne jaa rahi ho. Sambhalke, mera aashirwad tumare paas sada rahega.

Geet hugged her maa once again. Rano went over maan and told maan beta, meri beti ka khyal rakhna. Thoda gussa bohot ata hain par dil ki achi hain.

Maan smiled and told aap chinta mat kijiye maa, main geet ki aankhon mein ek bhi ansu nahi aane dunga. Yeh mera waada hain maa.

Rano smiled with tears and blessed them. Maan and geet got into the car and started their new journey of their life.

Precap: ……..

Love and Revenge Part 16

11 Sep

P.S.: I m sorry if there are any mistakes regarding medical issues, its purely fictional. Pls take it in a fictional way…. 🙂


Maan and geet opened their eyes thinking of their bitter past in their respective rooms. Both are sweating  and they took a glass of water and gulped it in one go. Maan went towards his cupboard and took their family photo. He hugged it close to his heart and stood there for a long time. Here in sangita’s (maan’s mom) room she is tossing in the bed not able to sleep. She wants to talk to maan but maan is busy with his work and all.

She just got up and sat on the bed thinking something. Here maan also lied on the bed but is not able to sleep, he thought of doing some work. He took his laptop and a file and decided to go to his study room. He went out of his room and was about to go to the study but he saw the lights on in mom’a room.

Maa is still awake? Thought maan and went near her room to check on her once. He found that the door is opened which made him confused. Maan entered into the room and saw his maa in deep thoughts.

Maa.. called maan.

Hearing maan’s voice, she jerked and looked at him and smiled.

Maa, is everything alright? Asked maan worriedly moving towards her. Maa smiled at him and told I am fine maan, not feeling sleepy. Come sit here.

Maan smiled slightly and sat beside her. He kept the laptop and file aside.

Maan you are working at this hour? Asked maa.

Yes maa, wo I am not feeling sleepy so thought of completing some pending work told maan.

Maa caressed his hair and told maan don’t stress much, you can work later. Rest is also needed maan told maa.

Maan nodded and told ha maa, par aaj papa ka bohot yaad aaraha hain. Sangita had tears in her eyes but controlled she should not be weak. She should be strong for maan, for this family.

Maa hugged maan and told your papa will very proud beta. I am sure he will be very happy seeing you successful and strong. I am sorry son, I didn’t do anything to you as a maa.

Maan broke the hug and wiped her tears and told never say that again maa. You are everything to me. The hope of seeing you again made me strong. The hope of meeting my sister again made me strong.

Sangita looked at maan with proud in her eyes and kissed her forehead. Maan rested his head on her lap and closed his eyes feeling pleasure and relief. Now maan is in the most safest place in the whole universe. Sangita is caressing his hair and maan slept peacefully forgetting about everything.

Sangita took the file which maan kept aside and read the file. After sometime she kept the file aside and slept in the sitting position. Both mother and son are sleeping peacefully.

Next day morning, maan woke up and saw his maa is sleeping uncomfortably. He got up and made her sleep on the bed comfortably and covered her with quilt. He went to his room o freshen up and went for his workout.

At 8’o clock all are ready at the breakfast table waiting for maan. Soon maan arrived and all of them are having breakfast. The whole family is together and happy. After breakfast when maan was about to get up sangita called him.


Ha maa..

I am coming to office with you told sangita.

Office.. but wh… before maan ask anything sangita got up and stopped him by raising her hand in air. She turned to maan and told I am not listening anything. I am coming to office with you and yes arrange the meeting with head architects told sangita sternly. Authority is oozing out with her each and every word. Maan and others are taken aback with her stern voice.

I will coming in 10 min told sangita and went upstairs. Maan looked at dadi shocked. Dadi chuckled at his reaction and told now you came to know from where all this arrogance and authority came from.

Maan nodded understanding her statement.

Bro, all the best wished prem and giggled.

Why?? Asked maan.

See mom once, how she is? Now I think she will be more strict than you in office told prem and laughed out loud.

Maan rolled his eyes at his nautanki brother. Haha, everyone is not a joker like you right? Retorded khushi.

Oyyy.. shup kar warned prem.

Why?? Darr gaye?? Laughed khushi.

Prem Singh Khurana and scared (oyy prem yeh maan ka dialogue hain.. don’t copy him haa). What a joke laughed prem.

Khushi glared at him and was about to retort back dev inturrepted.

Maan bro, I need a small help from you told dev.

Yes dev, tell asked maan.

Plz prem and khushi ko zara sambhalna, they are not at all concentrating on studies complained dev and smirked at both.

Prem and khushi gulped sensing a big trouble has erupted. Maan glared at 2 and warned listen you both in the study at 8pm. Understood?

They both pouted and nodded in a yes.

Maan, he loves his siblings but don’t want any negligence in their studies and career. So he is strict when it comes to them. But he is ready to give anything to them. Even prem, dev and khushi wont have any problem. But being younger khush tries to do some emotional drama. But whom she is fooling MSK, never.

Then they saw sangita is climbing down the stairs with a elegant cream color saree and a matching ear rings. She is now looking exactly like Sangita Rishab Singh Khurana. Maan smiled at her maa and they both left to office bidding good bye to everyone. Dev left to hospital and prem and khushi left for college.

Soon maan and maa reached office, both got down the car and entered into the lift. They reached 10th floor and walked towards maan’s cabin. All of them are dumbstuck to see maan’s mother, the same attitude maan got and even more. When the staff wished them they just nodded.

They entered into the cabin and maan asked sangita to sit on the MD’S place.

Maan its your place beta told sangita.

Maa, whenever you come to office its yours told maan and made her sit. Sangita is proud of his son. Soon Naina arranged the meeting with head architects in conference room. When sangita and maan entered into the room they all wished them. Soon the meeting started. Maan asked sangita to speak.

Good morning everyone. Directly coming to the point, I have seen that some of them are not working efficiently.

Maan and others are shocked.

Sangita maintained a straight face and took a file which maan left in sangita’s room yesterday. She placed the file on the table and asked can I know who designed this ??

Sasha got up and told its me ma’am.

Well miss.


Ok miss. Sasha, did you go through all the details of the land asked sangita.

Yes ma’am ofcourse I did told sasha.

Sangita got up and almost shouted then how can you do such a blunder?

Sasha looked at her confused and told ma’am its actually a shopping mall in the city. The land is very good and even clients are happy with the designs.

Ok Miss. Sasha, can u tell me something, when the soil is soft and which cant bear heavy weight. Then how can you construct 7 floors. Do you think the building will withstand?

Sasha looked at her with wide eyes. She didn’t see which type of soil is it for the first time. Maan took the file and studied. Yes its true. Oh crap, I was about to read this file yesterday and forgot thought maan.

I am sorry ma’am, I forgot to study the type of soil told sasha and admitted her mistake. Sangita can see the sincerity in her eyes. She calmed down and told Ok miss. Sasha this will be the last chance you are getting. If you repeat it again then you will be out of this office warned sangita.

Sorry ma’am I will never repeat it and thanku ma’am fo giving me a chance again told sasha and lowered her head in shame. How can she forget such a big thing thought sasha.

Ok told sangita and left from there. Maan stood up, sasha I never expected such type of negligence from you shouted maan in anger.

I am sorry MK apologized sasha.

I want the designs by today evening warned maan and left from there. Adi who witnessed all went to sasha and tried to console her.

Sasha, its ok. Relax and re-work on the designs told adi.

Sasha nodded and told I don’t know how it slipped from my mind. On top of that dad is in hospital, he is not well.

Sasha is anything serious? Asked adi.

Dad suffered with a heart attack 2 days before and he is under observation. Surgery is needed told sasha.

Sasha, how come maan don’t know about it? Asked adi.

Adi, MK is busy these days I didn’t get a chance to inform him or apply for a leave told sasha.

Sasha, you better go to the hospital. I will talk with maan told adi.

No adi, its ok I have to complete these designs anyway. Dad will be fine told sasha and left from there.

Adi sighed and went to his cabin to continue his work.

Here in Raizada Mansion, Geet got up late, she is not feeling well from past 2 ways. She is throwing up and feeling dizzy. She is not feeling like eating anything. She freshened up and went downstairs only to see anjali talking on phone.

Bhai, when you are coming? Asked anjali.

When you are coming what do you mean? I am in office that means I will come in the evening told arnav confused.

Lo aagayi geet di, bhai now a days she is sleeping more and see her face how pale it is? Told anjali.

Geet rolled her eyes and sat beside her. She is still feeling dizzy, she closed her eyes. Geet took the phone and told bhai, I am going to hospital now, can you come to hospital in the evening. I am going by taxi now.

Geet when you are not feeling well, then take rest na? told arnav.

No bhai, I have meeting with chief doctor told geet.

Ok fine, I will come in the evening. Acha I have meeting now. Ask anjali not to call for 2 hours I will be in the meeting told arnav.

Ok bhai. Bye.. told geet and cut the call.

Geet got up and took her bag to go to hospital. Suddenly the door bell rang. Geet opened the door and is confused to see the police outside.

Miss. Geet Singh Raizada?? Asked the police inspector.

Yes?? Asked geet confused.

You are under arrest ma’am told the police.

Geet is shocked and confused and asked excuse me? Can I know the reason?

You and your chief doctor are doing some research and it is also completed few days back right?

Yes.. so?? Asked geet.

Your chief doctor has put a case on you saying that without his permission you have signed a contract with one of the lab to continue the further research told inspector.

Geet is utterly shocked to hear this. She knows the research is confidential and she didn’t even share it with dev. Excuse me inspector, I think you heard it wrong. I didn’t do anything like that told geet.

Sorry miss. Raizada, here are the contract papers. Inspector showed those papers to geet, yes it is her signature. But the question is when did she sign? She just stood there blank. She saw anjali snatched the papers from inspector. She is also shocked. Her geet di never do such things, then what is this? What is happening? No one is there at home. Both geet and anjali stood there shocked.

Before they react anything, the inspector took geet with them. Anjali cried and shouted for geet but nothing helped. Geet is gone. Anjali rushed inside and tried to call Arnav but his mobile is switched off. God he told before not to call him for 2 hours. She tried calling maan but he kept his mobile in silent as maan and sangita are discussing about a project and told not to disturb them.

Going to arnav bhai’s office will take 1 hour. Its better I go to maan bhai’s office thought anjali and rushed to the car. She asked driver to go to KC. Anjali is crying bitterly. She is continously trying arnav’s number but no luck. Finally after 20 min drive she reached maan’s office. She asked in the reception about maan, she told maan and sangita are in a meeting.

I want to meet him immediately told anjali.

But ma’am you cant sir told not to disturb him told receptionist.

But anjali didn’t listen anything, she rushed towards maan’s cabin. She opened the door and fell down. Here maan and sangita who are discussing over a project saw the door opened and they got angry. But seeing anjali all in tears they became alert and they saw her fell down on the floor. Maan immediately got up and ran to her. Maan made anjali stand.

Maan got worried seeing anjali in that state. He made her sit on the couch and gave her some water. Sangita sat beside anjali and caressed her hair. Anjali gulped water and looked at maan.

Anjali what happened? Asked maan.

Bhai.. wo.. geet di.. anjali is so much shocked that the words are not coming out.

Hearing geet’s name maan became alert.

Anjali relax and tell me asked maan, though he is impatient but anjali’s condition is also not good.

Bhai, geet di is arrested told anjali finally.

It came like a blow to maan and sangita is shocked.

Anjali what are you saying? Asked maan shocked.

Anjali told what all happened in RM. Maan and sangita are left speechless. Before anjali continue further maan took his mobile and called to his Lawyer and asked him to come to office immediately.

Here geet is taken to police station. They asked her to sit, but geet is feeling dizzy. First of all she is weak and on top of that all this is taking a toll on her. She sat on the chair and held her head tight.

Maan, bhai whispered geet. Here maan is restless, his geet needed him and he cant waste time waiting for lawyer. Today is Friday and he have to act fast, Saturday and Sunday court holiday.

Maa, will you plz talk with lawyer and come to police station asked maan.

Maan, you go I will take care of everything, as soon as lawyer comes we will apply for bail told maa.

Anjali you be here. I will inform to Arnav. You don’t worry geet will come soon told maan.

Bhai, careful. Di is not feeling well from 2-3 days told anjali.

I know the reason anjali, don’t worry told maan and rushed to parking lot. He reached station within no time and went in. He saw his geet is sitting just like a motionless person.

Precap: What will maan and arnav do now?

Will geet get bail??

will be waiting for ur comments..

plz plz comment friends..

Destiny and Love Part 28

10 Sep

Maan and guru went to mall to buy gifts for preeti and geet. But the mall is filled with police. Then they came to know that some Politician is coming and these people are his security. And he is on the hit list so ACP personally taking care of security. Maan and guru went to a jewellery shop and thinking what to buy. Then they both decided to buy a diamond necklace. They both selected for preeti and geet and felt satisfied. When they came out of the shop they saw a politician entered with full security. Maan and Guru waited till he went in. Then they were walking towards exit but they both saw a person with police uniform and rooted on the spot. They are not able to believe their eyes. At the same time even that person saw maan and guru. But showed no emotion. Maan felt guilty and guru is angry. But that person didn’t care and walked past them and didn’t care to even talk with them.

Attitude tho dekho iss ladki ki whispered guru angrily.

No guru its my mistake and I have to apologize to her told maan.

Maan what you did is wrong I accept that, but you told all those in anger and frustration and yes you should apologize her for that. But what she did is wrong and I can never forgive her for that told guru and looked at her angrily who is looking after the security once again.

Guru whats the matter? Asked maan.

I will tell you everything, first we will go home told guru.

But guru, without meeting her how can we go? Asked maan, once he looked back expecting her to come to them. But alas nothing like that happened.

Maan, plz come we will go told guru and once again glared at her and they both left from there, guru with anger and maan with heavy heart. Maan and guru are in the car and maan is driving. Maan is thinking something and suddenly he asked.

Guru, how cum she is a police officer, she studied MBA with us asked maan.

I too don’t know maan, from 1 and half year I am not in contact with her told guru.

Hmmm replied maan and the rest of the drive was silent.

Maan and guru reached KM, when they both were about to go to study room, the land line phone rang. Maan picked the call.


Can I speak to Mrs. Sanjana Singh Khurana? Came a voice.

She is in her parental house, you can call there, Can I know whom I am talking with? Asked maan.

ACP Lavanya Joshi speaking told lavanya.

Maan’s eyes widened in shock. Joshi its really you? Asked maan.

Sorry Mr. Khurana, its ACP Lavanya Joshi told lavanya angrily.

Maan closed his eyes and the way she is talking he can easily guess she is hell angry on him.

Sorry ma’am mumbled maan.

Its ok Mr. Khurana and yes plz it’s a request bring back Mrs. Khurana and her son Abhinav told lavanya.

Maan is confused and asked Why??

Lavanya don’t know how to say and at the same time Veer entered KM and he smiled at maan.

Khurana its not safe for her to stay there told lavanya.

Excuse me, what the hell you are speaking? Yelled maan. Do you know what you are talking. When you don’t know where is she then how can you say that its not safe to stay there? Asked maan angrily.

Veer and Guru looked at maan who is now fuming and yelling.

Tumko tumare gussa ke alawa kisi ki baat ko suntan nahi ho na khurana, kindly give phone to Dr. Veer asked lavanya.

Look Joshi, I want to know whats happening? Asked maan controlling his anger.

At the same time sanju and abhinav in her arms entered KM, she is looking very tensed and feared. Veer went to her and took abhi from her and she sat on the couch still worried and sad.

Joshi, bhabhi is back but she is tensed told maan.

Oh crap, give phone to her told lavanya.

Bhabhi, ACP.. before maan completes sanju snatched the phone from maan.

Hello lavanya cried sanju.

Ma’am are you alright? Asked lavanya.

I am fine sanju and what you told is correct. I am telling you ACP Lavanya, you can arrest Mr. Roshan Rathode and I will be the witness and yes I want security for my family. And mainly for my sister Geet. She will be attending college soon and I don’t want to risk her life told sanju.

I am sorry ma’am and yes I will arrange security right now. thanku ma’am told lavanya.

Here veer and maan are shocked to listen to sanju. Sanju cut the call and took the glass of water which is on the table and gulped it in one go.

Sanju, what happened? Why you are asking ACP to arrest your dad? Asked veer.

Bhabhi, did they try to harm you? Asked maan.

I want to be alone for sometime told sanju without looking at them.


Plz veer.. requested sanju. Veer nodded and took sanju to their room. Abhi is with Maan and is sleeping. Guru saw the tension on maan’s face and placed his hand on his shoulder. Maan looked at him and smiled slightly.

Maan, don’t worry everything will be fine told guru.

But maan is thinking something and not able to find out what happened. Why sanju bhabhi lavanya to arrest her dad. How bhabhi and lavanya know each other. Many questions are going in his mind but he don’t have answer for any. Suddenly abhi got up and looked here and there. He looked at his maan chachu, seeing him opening his eyes maan tried to smile at him. Abhi again looked here and there like searching for someone.

What happened champ? Searching for anyone? Asked maan.

Abhi nodded in a yes and told ma.. ma..

Oh your maa is not feeling well dear, she is resting told maan.

Abhi frowned and started crying. Maan is taken aback and he is very poor in handling children.

Abhi what happened? Why you are crying? Asked maan.

But abhi is just crying and maan is expecting 1 and half old boy to speak. Maan you are expecting abhi to speak? Asked guru controlling his giggle.

Maan glared at him and told what to do now?

We will take him to sanju bhabhi told guru.

Ok.. told maan. When they both were going to veer-sanju room, they heard geet shouting for abhi.

Abhi… shouted geet.

Hearing geet’s shout maan, guru and abhi turned back literally closing their ears. Seeing geet abhi stopped crying and gave her a wide smile. Geet ran to them and took abhi in her arms.

Hey abhi.. exclaimed geet and kissed allover his face. Abhi too kissed her cheeks wetting it. Geet smiled at him widely and asked where is mama abhi? Asked geet.

Hearing mama abhi started crying again. Geet got tensed and asked abhi beta why you are crying? Shhh you are a good boy na don’t cry tried geet to console him.

Abhi stopped his crying and told ma.. be..

No one understood what abhi told. Seeing them confused abhi repeated again.

Maa.. be.. beat.. told abhi again.

Someone beat mama? Asked geet. Abhi nodded in a yes. Geet’s eyes widened in shock and asked who beta?

Na.. na.. told abhi.

Your nanu? Asked maan this time. Abhi again nodded in a yes.

Maan’s blood boiled imagining that someone beat his bhabhi. Geet feared seeing his anger.

Maan..  calm down, we will ask di what happened tried geet to console maan but maan is nowhere to listen. He went near veer-sanju’s room and knocked the door. Sanju who is lying on the bed with tears in her eyes jerked hearing the loud knock on the door. Veer who sat beside her got up and opened the door only to see angry maan.

Maan… before veer say anything maan stopped him and told I want to talk with bhabhi.

Sanju wiped her tears immediately and told come maan.

Veer and maan entered into the room and without any late maan asked bhabhi what happened in your dad’s house?

Maan nothing…

Don’t lie bhabhi warned maan.

Before sanju say anything they heard a voice calling someone.

Ma’am.. came a voice.

Sanju looked at the entrance and looked at her painfully. Sanju got up and went to her and apologized to her.

I am sorry lavanya apologized sanju.

Ma’am its all right, there is nothing wrong in you. As a daughter you will react in the same way told lavanya and smiled at her.

Are you calling me as his father asked sanju disgustingly.


No lavanya, I was never their daughter. Its just my illusion told sanju painfully.

Lavanya can feel her pain and hugged her and consoled her. Ma’am pls everything is going to be fine. Pls calm down when you have your family with you then why you are worried? Asked lavanya.

Sanju broke the hug and told yes lavanya you are right. This is my family and I don’t need anything else.

Lavanya smiled at her and wiped her tears. Sanju turned back and saw veer and maan who are now confused. She smiled at them sadly and told veer, maan I want to say something to you.

They both nodded.

Wo.. I am not Mr. Rathode’s biological daughter, they adopted me as they have no children told sanju with a chocked voice.

Veer and maan are shocked to hear this and they can feel her pain. How much sanju is suffering and how she might be feeling when she came to know the truth.

Veer hugged sanju and told shhh sanju, calm down. We are there with you na. shh.. consoled veer.

Maan and others left from their room to give some private space. Geet who heard all this is in tears now. She made abhi sleep in her room as sanju is not in a state to take care of her child. She need some time to over come her grief.

Lavanya looked at maan and guru, she was about to go from there she felt a hold on her hand. Lavanya turned back to see a guilty maan.

Lavanya I need to talk to you told maan.

I don’t need to told lavanya.

I am sorry joshi, I am so sorry apologized maan.

I don’t care Khurana and who am I and why you are asking me sorry. You should not apologize to a middle class girl like me told lavanya, anger building up in her.

Maan come lets go, we don’t need to talk who don’t care our emotions told guru.

Lavanya shot an angry glare to guru and taunted him. Its so funny see who is here talking about emotions. When you didn’t believe your own sister and don’t know where is she?

Joshi mind your language and its waste of talking with you. You didn’t thought anything when you cheated him and now talking about emotions and feeling retorted guru.

Before lavanya speak anything, they heard geet’s voice.

Anna, dare you talk anything about her warned geet angrily.

Geet is climbing down the stairs and lavanya is really shocked and surprised to see anju oops geet here. Geet came to lavanya and hugged her. Guru never expected this from geet. From childhood geet is afraid of lavanya because of her short tempered nature and today she is hugging lavanya.

Geet.. gasped guru.

Geet broke the hug and looked at guru with angry eyes.

How are you akka? Asked geet.

Lavanya smiled sadly and kissed her forehead.

How are you and what are you doing here? Asked lavanya.

Wo.. I work in KC and.. and.. shied geet.

Geet is my fiancé told maan proudly looking straight into geet’s eyes. He can see the love for him in her eyes and even angry absolutely not on maan but on guru.

Lavanya looked at geet raising her eye brows. Geet nodded shyly. Lavanya hugged geet and exclaimed in joy.

I am very very happy for you anju (geet), very happy. Lavanya couldn’t control her happiness and she hugged maan too. Ohh maan is very happy. I am so happy khurana exclaimed lavanya and broke the hug. Finally you got your true love.

Maan nodded and told I am lucky to have geet in my life. And looked at geet lovingly.

And yes khurana dare you show your anger on my sister. This time I am not gonna spare you understood? Warned lavanya.

Maan looked at her with guilt and murmured a sorry.

Hey khurana chill. Its allright. Yeh tho tab ki baat hain. I forgot everything, its just to tease you. Itna din hogaya khurana tumko chodake, mazaa tho lena hi hain na. who will get a chance to tease you khurana and when we got the chance we have to utilize it na told lavanya and smiled cutely.

Maan is now even more guilty for hurting her and is not able to face her.

Where were you these days? Asked maan.

Lavanya smiled and told I was in Banglore, just a month back transferred to delhi.

Then why you didn’t come to meet us? Asked maan.

Lavanya smiled sadly and told after college I never in contact with anyone.

Can I ask you something? Asked maan.

Lavanya nodded. Tomorrow is rakhi, will you tie me this year. Once when you came to me to tie rakhi I hurted you but not now. I am sorry for that told maan.

Hey Khurana,I told na I am not angry on you told lavanya and turned back controlling her tears. Wo.. actually tomorrow I am going for some meeting, I wont be able to come. Sorry Khurana. Lavanya, a only daughter to her parents and most pampered and a short tempered girl. Geet never talks with her but due to some incident, geet respected her more and she is more concerned and worried for lavanya about her future. Though geet is younger than her and acts like child sometimes but she know lavanya in and out.

Hearing lavanya maan felt bad and thought her duty is also important. But geet didn’t miss to see the pain in lavanya’s eyes.

I have to leave now, have lots of work. Bye.. told lavanya without turning back.

Maan nodded and guru sighed. He just don’t want lavanya to be near. He hates him for cheating on his friend (not maan). Geet hugged lavanya and whispered akka, thinking of past events will give you only pain. Plz try to come out of that. We are here for you. Plz once call your parents they are waiting for your single call.

Lavanya broke the hug and told no anju (geet), NEVER. Saying so she left from there. Geet saw her going and sighed and nodded in a no. Maan and Guru looked at her confused like what is going on. Geet looked at guru with anger.

Anna, do you what the hell you are talking with her. Don’t forget that she is our cousin and you have support her not taunt her. You know nothing about her, so stop talking non-sense yelled geet and left from there.

Maan and Guru looked at her with wide eyes. They never thought that their geet will get angry too that too because of lavanya whom she never liked thought guru.

Geet in her room sat beside abhi who is now sleeping peacefully. What should I do now? Akka is not listening to anyone, should I talk to him. But I don’t know his number and don’t know where does he stay. Anna will not listen anything. He is still thinking that lavanya akka has cheated his friend. But that’s not true. God what should I do now chided geet herself. Just then she felt a hand on her shoulder. She jerked suddenly.

Geet are you fine? Asked maan who came to talk to her. He knows his shona very well. She is angry on her brother and geet getting angry is very rare thing.

I am fine maan told geet smiling at him.

Don’t lie geet, I can easily say that you are worried about something told maan sternly.

Geet looked at him lovingly and hugged him tight. Yes its true she is worried for sanju, for lavanya. She don’t know what happened to sanju and even though she knows what happened with lavanya she cant tell to anyone because of the promise.

Yes maan I am worried confessed geet.

Maan broke the hug and cupped her face and asked what happened?

I cant tell you maan, don’t take me wrong. I promised lavanya that I never tell anything about her told geet feeling guilty for not sharing it with maan.

Geet look at me asked maan.

Geet looked at him. Geet I respect your each and every decision. I too have to talk with lavanya, she is my best friend and sister and I want to see her happy told maan.

Geet smiled sadly and told happy? She can never be happy again in her life maan except any miracle happen.

Maan looked at her confused. Geet, just tell me one thing where is her fiancé? Asked maan.

I don’t know maan answered geet. Maan is silent. He understood something went wrong and geet is hiding it from him. Geet did you take medicines? Asked maan.

Geet looked at him nervously and nodded in a no. Maan shot an angry glare to her for which geet gulped.

I am sorry maan told geet and made a puppy face. Maan smiled at her antics and kissed her cheek. Take care shona, I cant take risk with your health. Geet nodded cutely and maan gave her the medicines. Geet lied down on the bed beside abhi and held maan’s hand.

Maan.. called geet.

Hmmm replied maan looking at her.

Mujhe darr lag raha hain maan told geet.

Why shona? Asked maan.

Don’t know maan, I am feeling something is gonna happen. I am not feeling anything right told geet. Maan pulled geet and made her sit between his thighs and hugged her from back. Geet rested her back on maan’s chest and relaxed.

Geet I am there na, I will take care of everything. You don’t stress much. Ok? Told maan and kissed her ear lobe.

Geet moaned and nodded in a yes. Maan wants her to be relaxed, so he starting kissing her shoulder. Geet is feeling light under his touch and closed her eyes. Maan hugged her more close to him and geet slept in his arms peacefully.


 Maan what’s wrong with you, why you are behaving like this? Did I do anything wrong? Asked geet with tears in her eyes.

Shut up geet just shut up and stay away from me. I don’t want to see your face again. GET LOST roared maan.

Geet sitting on her bed looking lost, her eyes are red but not due to crying but because of ANGER. Geet smirked and thought


Precap 2:

Maan: Geet ke naam ke saath Maan Singh Khurana ka naam jud gaya hain. Geet ko kuch bhi bolne se pehle yaad rakhna tum kisse baat kar rahi ho. Saying so maan took geet with him to KM.

Geet: don’t you dare to touch me Mr. Khurana. For the outside world I am your wife but inside our room we are known strangers.

Do i deserve ur love part 23

6 Sep


2 days passed and it’s the day of mehendi and sangeet. All is set for that and it is held in geet’s house. Geet is in her room getting ready and same with maan. He is getting ready in his room and is thinking about geet.

Geet wore baby pink color suit with a matcing jewellary. And a blush crept on her cheeks listening to the teasings from their friends.

Geet you are looking gorgeous, jiju couldn’t take of his eyes fom you teased one of her friend.

Arey di, what you are saying. Jiju tho always lost in di teased pari which made geet shy and blushed hard.

Oyy hoyee without makeup only your face become red told one of her friend.

Hey will you all shut up or should I send you all out of the room warned geet.

But how can they miss the chance they continued their teasings. And finally geet got very and she is looking like an angel who is made for maan. she looked herself in the mirror  and smiled. This is all for you maan thought geet and blushed. Later geet’s friends took her down for mehendi and made her sit on the center of the stage.

Here maan got ready in a cream color sherwani and looked handsome. Adi and pinky entered into his room at the same time and smiled at him.

Bhai, geet will be flat seeing you teased pinky. Maan shied hearing her.

Maan you are blushing dude teased adi. Shut up adi and lets go, its getting late told maan.

Ohh someone is waiting so eagerly to see his bride told adi and winked.

Maan is embrassed, adi hugged maan and told I am very happy maan. And yes keep my sister happy.

Maan smiled and told I promise.

Adi and pinky smiled and prayed to god to keep them happy always and they all left from there to geet’s house. Geet’s house is filled with relatives and friends, ful of masti, teasings and laughter.

Soon maan, adi, pinky and their friends arrived and maan’s students too. Rano welcomed them with open arms. Maan took blessings from her and she kissed his forehead. His eyes are searching for geet. But he couldn’t find as all ladies has surrounded her. But they ladies got the news that dulha has arrived so they all turned back to see maan and maan got the glimpse of his mishty, his life. He is mesmerized by her beauty and stood there rooted. All the girls teased geet seeing maan so hot and handsome. Geet saw maan and is lost in him. Same is the case with maan.

Mehendi girl started applying mehendi on geet’s hand and maan is just admiring her, he is falling in love with her all over again. Here some ladies are singing and dancing. All are enjoying in their own way.

Girls formed one group and boys one group. All are in teasing mode. Girls and boys sang in unison.

Ye Kudiyaan Nashe Di Pudiyaan
ye Munde Gali De Gunde
ye Kudiyaan Nashe Di Pudiyaan
ye Munde Gali De Gunde
nashe Di Pudiyaan
gali De Gunde

Maan took the chance and sang seeing geet.

Maan: o Mehndi Laga Rakhna
doli Saja Ke Rakhna
mehndi Laga Rakhna
doli Saja Ke Rakhna
lene Tujhe O Gori
aayenge Tere Sajna (maan rised his collar and winked at geet)
mehndi Laga Rakhna
doli Saja Ke Rakhna

Now how geet back off. She sat there and a girl is applying mehendi and geet sang.

Geet: o Sahra Sajake Rakhna
chehra Chhupake Rakhna
sahra Sajake Rakhna
chehra Chhupake Rakhna
ye Dil Ki Baat Apne
dil Mein Dabake Rakhna
sahra Sajake Rakhna
chehra Chhupake Rakhna

The mehendi girl asked geet the name of her would be. Geet looked at maan and whispered maan.

Maan looked at her and asked what?

Geet nodded in a no and smiled sweetly at him. And the others are singing songs. Finally geet’s mehendi is finally completed. Rano came to geet and saw her mehendi and kissed her forehead. Geet smiled with tears in her eyes. Rano nodded in a no and wiped her tears.

Aaj khushiyon ka din hain geet, aansu ki koi jagah nahi told rano. Even rano too got emotional and hugged geet. Maan saw that and thought of changing the atmosphere. He came in the middle of the dance stage and all of them whistled and clapped. Listening to the sudden noise, rano and geet turned to dance floor and saw maan there with a smile on his face. As maan got geet’s and rano’s attention he started.

Maahi ve maahi ve, that’s the way maahi ve

Maan: Tere maathe jhumar damke
Tere kaanon baali chamke hai re

Maahi ve

Tere haathon kangna khanke
Tere pairon paayal chhanke hai re

Maahi ve

Nainon se bole rabba rabba
Mann mein dole rabba rabba
Amrit ghole rabba rabba tu soniye

Jind maahi ve soni soni aaja maahi ve
Everybody say soni soni aaja maahi ve – 2

Geet smiled at him and pari and pinky pulled geet on to the dance floor. Maan pulled geet towards him without disturbing her mehendi. Maan sang seeing geet.

Maan: O teri aankhen kaali kaali
Tera gora gora mukhda hai re

Maahi ve

Teri rangat jaise sona
Tu chaand ka jaise tukda hai re

Maahi ve

Tere gaal gulaabi rabba rabba
Chaal sharaabi rabba rabba
Dil ki kharaabi rabba rabba tu soniye

Jind maahi ve soni soni aaja maahi ve
Everybody say soni soni aaja maahi ve- 2

Geet hugged maan listening to him. She remember all the moments spent with maan, their first meet. Their fight, maan saying sorry. Pari in his dance school and their friendship. Maan celebrating geet’s birthday and the his confession. Geet looked at him and maan kissed her forehead promising he will be there always no matter what.

Suddenly all of them stopped singing when they heard a sweet voice. All turned towards geet who is singing for maan.

Geet: Aaye ho meri zindagi mein, tum bahar banke-3
Mere dil mein yunhi rahna…

Mere dil mein yunhi rahna, tum pyar pyar ban ke.
Aaye ho meri zindagi mein, tum bahar banke.

Ankhon mein tum base ho, sapne hazaar ban ke-2
Mere dil mein yunhi rahna…
Mere dil mein yunhi rahna, tum pyar pyar ban ke
Aaye ho meri zindagi mein, tum bahar banke.

Maan looked at geet lovingly and geet is lost in him and in his love. Geet never expected that she will be happy in her life again. But one day maan came accidentally and changed everything. Now geet’s life is with maan. if maan is not there then there is no geet. her every dream is with maan. Her every second in her life from now on is with maan. she cant imagine her life without maan now. Tears formed in rano’s and pari’s eyes and they know the each and every meaning of those words.

Mere saathi mere sajan, mere saath yun hi chalna-2,
Badalega rang zamana, par tum nahi badalna.
Meri mang yun hi bharna, taare hazaar ban ke-2
Mere dil mein yun hi rahna…
Mere dil mein yun hi rahna, tum pyar pyar ban ke
Aaye ho meri zindagi mein, tum bahar banke

Listening to geet maan promised himself that he will never make geet sad. She has suffered enough in her life now its time for happiness. I will never change geet, I will be the same maan which you loved. I will fill your maang with sindoor of my name. Not only today geet, but each and every morning. Its my promise geet.

Agar main jo rooth jaoon, to tum mujhe manana-2,
Thama hai haath mera, phir umr bhar nibhana.
Mujhe chod ke na jana, wade hazaar kar ke
Mujhe chod ke na jana, wade hazaar kar ke
Mere dil mein yun hi rahna….
Mere dil mein yun hi rahna, tum pyar pyar ban ke
Aaye ho meri zindagi mein, tum bahar banke

Kabhi nahi chodunga geet main tumko. Tum meri zindagi ka anmol hissa ho aur tum hi meri zindagi ho. Main meri jaan ko kaise chod sakta hu geet. kabhi nahi, I will be there with till my last breath. If you are tired then I will be your strength. Agar tumko gussa aya tho main tumko manaonga. tumari khushi meri khushi hain, main tumko kabhi bhi takleef mein nahi dekh sakta hu geet. aaj tumari wajah se mujhko ek parivaar mil raha hain geet. Main tumare saath har waqt, har such, har dukh tumara saath deta hu geet. Yeh tumare maan, GEET KI MAAN ka waada hain geet thought maan and placed his hand on her head as he is promising her.

Geet saw the glow in his eyes and the determination in his eyes and smiled. They both hugged and the hall which silent after geet’s song is now filled with claps. All the people who came there blessed maan and geet for their marriage life. Rano is very proud of maan. she knows if maan is there in geet’s life then she need not to worry for anything.

The mehendi and sangeet function is completed and all of them enjoyed a lot. And all the guests had dinner and left one by one. Later rano, pari, geet, maan and their friends are left. They all headed to dining hall to have dinner. They all are talking and cracking jokes while eating. Maan looked at geet and winked. Geet looked at him and shied and thinking what is that for?

And after that all of them retired to their rooms as all are tired and tomorrow is haldi and they have to get up early. But maan and geet are thinking about each other and are not able to sleep. Suddenly geet’s phone buzzed. She took her mobile and saw that the msg is from maan. she smiled and opened the msg.

Msg: Mishty, tomorrow be ready at 5’o clock I will be coming in your room.

Geet’s eyes popped out thinking what he is going to do and that too tomorrow morning. Haldi is at 7 then why at 5 thought geet but she understood nothing.

Thinking about that geet dozed off and maan is dreaming about his mishty. The time moved very slow for maan and geet. But for others it moved very fast. Its just 15 more for 5 am. Maan got up and got ready.

Geet heard a knock on her door. She got up lazily and opened the door. She totally forgot about maan’s msg. when she opened the door she found pinky there.

Pinky tu inti subah kyun ayi ho? Asked geet lazily.

Arey tum chup hojao, someone will come whispered pinky. Bhai you go in I will come in 15 min told pinky turning to maan and left from there.

Its then geet remembered maan’s msg. Maan happily came in and sat on the bed. Geet immediately closed the door and looked here and there.

Maan aap iss waqt yaha? Pls jayiye yaha se? told geet worriedly.

Relax geet no one will come told maan cooly.

Maan plz jayiye yaha se told geet again.

Maan pulled geet towards him and made her sit on the bed. Geet looked at him with wide eyes very innocently.

Geet main chata hu ki main tumko sabse pehle haldi lagaon told maan.

Geet is overwhelmed and smiled cutely at him. Maan is fida seeing her smile and kissed her red cheeks.

Par haldi kaha hain? Asked geet.

Maan thought for a while and took haldi from the cover without getting to know geet and applied on her cheek. Geet is surprised and touched her cheek. Oh this man already prepared everything thought geet.

Geet took some haldi from that cover and applied to maan. Maan smiled at her and they both shared an eye lock. Maan kissed her forehead and told just few hours geet then you will be mine forever.

Geet blushed and hid her face in his chest. After some pinky rushed in a asked maan to go from there as rano aunty is coming to take geet for haldi. Maan nodded and left form there giving geet a flying kiss in return he blushed.

Rano came to geet’s room to take her for haldi function, but she noticed some haldi on her cheek and guessed what might have happened and smiled. She caressed geet’s hair and took her out. The haldi function started, first all of them applied haldi to maan and then to geet. Maan thoroughly enjoyed each and every ritual. He is so happy seeing many people around. Maan took rano’s blessings. Here geet is blushing like never before. All are hell bent in teasing her. Maan smiled seeing her cute antics. Some times she made baby face, some times she looked at her friends angrily, some times she looked up and cribbed to her babaji. Maan want to kiss her but controlled and enjoyed the rituals with his geet.

Precap: Shaadi and no need to tell I guess.

P.S.: I am extremely sorry if there are any mistakes in the update and the rituals, thanks to neha and hinal for helping me. But I don’t know much about these all so pardon me.

Hey hi friends how r u? well I am giving back to back updates of all the FF’S from past one week and I am hell tired. Well I will update after a week break. Hope u don’t mind.

Next update which one you want after one week:

Distance brings us closer

Destiny and love

Do I deserve ur love.

Destiny and Love part 27

5 Sep

This update I want to dedicate to 2 of my special friends: Anu akka, you asked for some maneet moments and reaction of family. Hope I reached your expectation if not sorry. And Rose di.. who waited for this update from yesterday. Sorry for late di and see I gave some present scenes also.


I love you maan sir confessed geet her feelings.

Maan is very very happy, he is over moon. Finally geet confessed her feelings. Today is the most happiest day in his life. He got his love, she too loves him. He immediately came out of the hug and cupped geet’s face.

I love you geet confessed maan and hugged her tight. Geet is happy and she is at peace now. she is in her love’s arms and the most safest place in the whole world. Thought she was nervous to confess her feelings but now everything is back to normal.

I missed you geet, I missed you a lot murmured maan.

Geet broke hug and told maan sir plz never leave me alone and go. I cant live without you.

Never honey I will never leave you, how can I leave my life told maan and kissed her both cheeks. Geet smiled widely at him. Maan is happy and felt contended seeing her smile. Maan is looking at her lovingly. Both are lost in each other. They are happy in each others embrace and don’t want to leave this moment. Maan hugged geet dearly and kissed her hair. Geet found peace in maan’s arms. She felt this is the safest place in the whole world. Maan is also in peace seeing his love in his arms. He is truly happy today, they are lost in their own world. Both are calm geet placed her hand on his heart and hearing his heart beat. She smiled and kissed his heart and thanking god for sending a man like maan in her life. After the dev incident she almost forgot to believe in people but today she is head over heels in love with MAAN SINGH KHURANA, her MAAN SIR.

After like ages they came out of the hug. Maan kissed her forehead, eyes and both the cheeks. Geet shied and lowered her eye lashes. Maan smiled at her and told geet, we should leave now.

Geet nodded and looked at him. They both entwined their fingers and left the office. Maan saw driver is waiting for him. He turned to geet and told geet, get into the car I will drop you.

Its ok maan sir I will go by taxi told geet.

Geet, don’t argue its late. I will drop you told maan.

Sir its just 8’o clock and I can go told geet.

Maan rolled his eyes and whispered If you come with me now then its ok or else…

Or else what you will do? Asked geet stubbornly.

Or else I will take you in my arms in front of all told maan huskily and smirked.

Geet opened her mouth in ‘O’ and looked at him with wide eyes.

Close your mouth geet nahi tho… teased maan.

Geet immediately shut her mouth and looked at him angrily, ofcourse it’s a fake anger. So what you decided, will you come on your own or…

Chaliye, I will come told geet and pouted and cursing under her breath. Rakshas, dhust dhanav always bossing around. Just now I confessed and started bossing and teasing me. I hate him cursed geet.

I am listening told maan.

Geet angrily looked at him and walked away and settled into the back seat. Maan smiled at himself and he asked driver to leave. Maan got into the driver seat and asked geet to come front. She looked at him and then got down of the car and sat in the passengers seat. Maan smiled at her cute pouting face, he just then and there want to taste those rose petals. But he controlled and drove the car to geet’s house. Its just 15 min drive. Soon they reached the house and geet got down of the car.

Andar ayiye na invited geet.

Maan smiled at her and he too want to spend sometime with her.

You go I will park car and come told maan. Geet nodded and went in. Maan parked the car and thought of calling home and inform not to wait for dinner. He dialed KM’s number. Sanju picked the call.

Hey bhabhi, maan here.

Bolo, why you are calling now and plz don’t tell me that you wont come for dinner as you are held up with some meeting told sanju angrily.

Its true that I am not coming for dinner told maan.

I know you never change, I pity geet how will she manage huh!! Told sanju.

Oho bhabhi, listen to me first told maan patiently.

Bolo.. told sanju.

First of all don’t get angry much, my niece will be also be angry like you. And secondly I am at geet’s place now. and its me and geet who is having dinner not any client told maan.

Oho… kya baat hain devarji your first date ahh?? Teased sanju.

Maan rolled his eyes and told I just called to inform I am not coming for dinner. And I informed that and now bye.

Devarji yeh tho cheating hain, boliye na pls pls pls requested maan.

Sorry bhabhiji, this is punishment for you for not listening me fully and unnecessarily scolding me told maan.

Hawww.. exclaimed sanju.

Arey maan, bhabhi se baad mein baat karna enjoy your date dude told veer who is beside sanju and cut the call. Maan smiled and cut the call and went in. He entered into the house and found geet nowhere. He heard sounds from kitchen, he went to kitchen and found her making black coffee and on the other hand she is eating chocolate.

Ufff this girl thought maan. Maan is feeling thirsty and opened the fridge to have some water. But his eyes popped out to see the state of the fridge. God it is almost filled with chocolates. My god thought maan and took a bottle and had water.

Sir, black coffee gave geet.

He took it and settled comfortably on the couch. Geet too came and sat beside him. Geet placed her head on his chest, maan smiled and held her by her shoulder. Maan completed his coffee and found geet is silent which is unusual.

Geet what happened? Asked maan. Geet looked at him and nodded in a no. But maan can see the pain in her eyes. Geet got up and told I will prepare dinner sir. When she was about to go, maan held her wrist and pulled her towards him. Due to the sudden pull geet landed on his lap. Maan made geet look at him and asked what happened geet?

Geet hugged him tight and cried her heart out. Maan didn’t stop her, he want to take all her pain out. He is caressing her back. How much pain she held inside and acting all normal. After some times she stopped crying and came out of hug. Maan wiped her tears and kissed her cheeks. Geet is relaxed in his arms.

Are you ok? Asked maan.

Geet lowered her eye lashes and told tomorrow is raksha bhandan and this is the first time I am away from my brother.

Maan can see the pain in her eyes. Even raksha bhandan has a worst experience in maan’s life. He misunderstood someone. Maan closed his eyes and thought I am sorry, I am really sorry. Plz come back. Maan, think about geet. she is important to you now.

Geet do you want me to talk to your brother asked maan.

No.. that was an instant answer. I don’t want to go there again told geet with anger. I am just feeling bad that’s it. I am ok now, I have you told geet.

Maan smiled at her and pecked on her lips. Geet then realized their position and shied. She got up and told wo.. wo.. I will prepare dinner. Maan nodded. Geet prepared dinner and they both had feeding each other. After dinner they cleaned the table. Geet is very tired and maan saw that. Maan took geet in his arms and made his way to her bed room and made her lie on the bed.

Maan kissed her forehead nad wished good night. Maan was about to go, geet held his wrist. Maan turned back and looked at her questioningly. Geet got up and kissed his cheeks. Maan is surprised yet happy. He smiled widely at her. But seems that geet understood maan and told sir you don’t have to take any permission. And she kissed his lips. Maan is really happy and he too kissed her. After some time, he wished her good night and left from there. This is the most happiest day for maan. He happily went home and by that time all of them slept off. He directly went to his room and changed into the his tracks and lied on the bed.

He closed his eyes with a smile on his face, but he saw the crying face of geet when she told about the raksha bhandan. He opened his eyes and are moist. He went upto his cupboard and opened it. He took out a pic and smiled at that. It’s the pic of maan, guru and other girl who is pulling their hair. I am sorry for hurting you dear, plz come back to your friend. I am sorry and I found my love. If you see her you will be very happy told maan and kissed that pic and placed it back.

He again lied on the bed and drifted to sleep. The night is so peaceful to all and all are very happy.

Next day morning:

Maan got up and freshened and went to dadimaa’s room. He knocked the door.

Maan there is no need to knock the door told dadi. Maan smiled and went in.

Good morning dadi wished maan and sat beside her on the bed.

Good morning maan, and you are early today? Asked dadi.

Wo.. wo.. I need to talk to you told maan.

I am listening told dadi.

Actually wo.. wo.. fumbled maan.

Maan is that really you teased dadi.


Then tell me what is the matter which is making my grandson to fumble teased dadi again.

Maan sighed and told dadi geet accepted my love.

Dadi looked at him surprised like when he confessed his love?

Wo.. actually when we celebrated geet’s birthday that day I proposed her told maan and smiled.

Maan, you didn’t tell your dadi about this complained dadi like a small kid.


I am joking maan, I am very happy for you beta. I cant wait geet to come in this house told dadi.

Dadi, she want to complete her studies after that…

No problem maan, we can wait. And I am happy you are caring for her told dadi and kissed his forehead.

Devarji aapne humo bhi nahi baataya companied sanju who has come to call dadi for breakfast.

Bhabhi why you are roaming here and there, didn’t doctor told you to rest and for heavens sake its your 8th month and you should not stress much scolded maan and made her sit on the bed.

Sanju looked at dadi making baby face. Maan is right sanju beta told dadi.

I am getting bored sitting at one place told sanju making cry face.

Sanju from now on I will handling cases from home told veer coming in.

And I will be working from home told maan.

Are you both crazy no need you both go to office told sanju. Hey babaji if these 2 are at home then I cant go out of my room also. No it should not happen thought sanju.

No way sanju, you wont listen to dadi we know that told veer.

Veer maine kaha na..

Ha wahi tho humne kaha na we will work from home told maan.

Yeh dono ko tho main.. angrhhhhh thought sanju. Chalo today we will have break fast here itself told dadi. All of them nodded. All are settled for breaskfast.

Maan, bring geet here once told dadi.

Maan nodded and told ok dadi, I will ask her to come evening.

Some one is so eager to meet her teased sanju.

Maan just smiled and they had breakfast talking with each other. After break fast maan called geet.


Hey geet, going to office? Asked maan.

Yes have to go na told geet.

No need, from today I am working from home told maan.

Why? Asked geet.

Me and bhai decided to work from home, sanju bhabhi is not taking care of herself told maan.

Why what happened to di? Asked geet.

Geet don’t worry she is absolutely fine and yes dadi wants to meet you told maan.

Ok fine, should I go to office or not? Asked geet.

No, come to KM and I will also inform adi and sasha to come here told maan.

Ok fine, I will be there in one hour told geet.

Ok bye see you soon told maan.

Bye.. told geet and cut the call.

After one hour or so geet came to KM and went to dadi’s room. Good morning dadi wished geet.

Dadi smiled at geet and wished her back. Geet sat beside dadi.

Geet beta thanku very much thanked dadi.

Geet looked at her confusingly. Maan told me everything beta told dadi. Geet shied and hugged her. Beta don’t leave maan, he will be very happy when you are in his life. You both are made for each other.

Maan sir is my life dadimaa, meri zindagi ka anmol hissa, then how can I leave him told geet. dadi had tears in her eyes hearing to geet.

God bless you beta wished dadimaa and kissed her forehead.

Thanku dadimaa told geet and hugged her again. She then saw the time and gasped. What happened geet? asked dadimaa.

Dadimaa, its already late and maan sir will surely scold me. I will go now dadimaa, I will come during lunch told geet and hurriedly left from there.

Dadimaa smiled and murmured pagal ladki. Geet them worked with maan. After noon all had lunch together. After lunch veer and sanju gave Bangles to geet and told welcome to Khurana Family geet.

Geet is overwhelmed and hugged them with tears in her eyes.

They broke the hug and veer wiped her tears and nodded in a no.

Veer bhaiya called geet. veer looked at her.

Wo.. wo.. I brought something for you told geet.

What geet? asked veer.

Today is raksha bhandan and you are like my brother can I tie rakhi to you? Asked geet hesitantly.

All others are surprised and happy too. Veer is very happy and asked her to tie rakhi. Geet happily took out the rakhi from her bag and tied to him. Veer kissed her forehead and blessed her. All of them adored their relation. Maan is happy seeing geet happy.

Days passed and its almost month veer and maan are working from home. sanju cribbed sometimes that she is getting bored but veer and maan are adamant and they didn’t allow her to go out. But geet is there with her. They both saw movies and geet took sanju to garden for walk and entertained with her non stop bak bak and sometimes complaining about her workhalic maan sir.

Then sanju delivered a sweet little boy. And they named him as Abhinav Veer Singh Khurana. He is pampered by all. Veer and sanju and very happy. Even maan too, geet is so so excited. When geet took Abhinav in her arms she became like a kid and played with him. But the sad thing sanju, veer with Abhi had to go to Australia after 2 months. Geet hugged sanju and cried a lot. They both became so close and it became very difficult for them to leave. Somehow they convinced geet and they 3 left for Australia.

On the other side, thought maan is strict in office, but he became naughty and leave no space to tease geet. Geet is all sharam se pani pani. Their bond grew stronger and they understood each other very well. All are very happy and geet resumed her last sem but didn’t take help from maan. she worked for 1 and half year by now and with her salary she paid her fees. Maan and dadi are very proud of her.


Geet’s operation is successful. Maan, guru, veer are taking care of her. Sapna and her husband vinay has to go to banglore due to some important work. Preeti and Vicky are her entertainers. Finally it’s the day of geet’s dis-charge and geet is jumping in joy. But they took geet to KM and guru is very happy with that. Geet settled in guest room.

Again its Raksha Bhandan, this time guru is there with geet. geet is very happy and she want to buy rakhi for guru. Guru want to buy a gift for geet.

Maan and guru went to mall to buy gifts for preeti and geet. But the mall is filled with police. Then they came to know that some Politician is coming and these people are his security. And he is on the hit list so ACP personally taking care of security. Maan and guru went to a jewellery shop and thinking what to buy. Then they both decided to buy a diamond necklace. They both selected for preeti and geet and felt satisfied. When they came out of the shop they saw a politician entered with full security. Maan and Guru waited till he went in. Then they were walking towards exit but they both saw a person with police uniform and rooted on the spot. They are not able to believe their eyes. At the same time even that person saw maan and guru. But showed no emotion. Maan felt guilty and guru is angry. But that person didn’t care and walked past them and didn’t care to even talk with them.

Attitude tho dekho iss ladki ki whispered guru angrily.

No guru its my mistake and I have to apologize to her told maan.

Precap: Maan: I am sorry jo…

              Girl(angrily): I don’t care Khurana and who am I?

              Guru: Come maan let her go. And guru turned to that girl and told You are not less than sameera..

               Geet: Anna, dare you talk anything against her.

Ok friends, this is the new entry and she is Asst. Commisioner of Police. And she plays an important role. And a twist coming soon before that there will be maan’s past. Do you want maan’s past if brief (2 or 3 updates) or in short (1 update).

P.S.: That ACP is not sameera… she is other girl…

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