Love and Revenge part 15

4 Sep


Mr. R hugged Mrs. R and told what’s happening, I am not able to understand anything. They are small kids and maa. And how can I say this truth to maan, but he has every right to know about this. Wo tuth jayega devi wo bacha. Itni choti umr mein itna kuch jhelna padh raha hain.

What truth uncle asked maan with serious voice.

Mr. R turned back and saw maan and arnav. He closed his eyes for not seeing them before speaking anything. He don’t now how to tell maan about those things which only he knows.

Maan beta come told Mr. R. He is trying very hard to divert the topic. Maan and arnav went towards him. Maan understood that Mr. R wants to divert the topic but maan is adamant to know what is that Mr. R is talking about.

Uncle plz tell what is the matter? Asked maan.

Mr. R sighed, he has no other option he has to tell maan and support him in each and every possible way and at the same time he has to protect geet from those monsters.

Maan I will tell you everything before that bring your papa’s mobile told Mr. R.

Maan nodded and went to his room and gave that mobile to Mr. R. First of all maan is confused why uncle is asking papa’s mobile and second what is there in that mobile.

Maan, you might be thinking that in that accident your dad might have unknowingly slipped his mobile? Maan just nodded yes. No son your told something to you, he recorded something which is very important.

What is that uncle? Asked maan.

Mr. R switched on the speaker there comes the voice of maan’s dad. Maan beta, I know what you are thinking and by the time the mobile reaches you me and your dadaji will not be there.

Hearing his dad maan’s eyes became moist. Maan’s dad voice is trembling, maan felt terrible. Maan I am warning you to be careful beta, this is not an accident as you are thinking but it’s a murder. Your bade papa and bade maa want our property and they planned to kill all if us. Be careful beta take care of all beta. I am sorry maan I am leaving a big responsibility on you and take care of yourself beta. I will there as your support always.

There the record ended and maan’s dad throwed the mobile far so that no one can see it. Then all of them heard the blast sound. No one knows that his dad recorded all this. In the middle they heard dadaji’s shouting, jao geet just go from here.

Tears rolled down and no one is able to talk anything. Maan is in shock, his own bade papa and bade maa did, that too because of mere property. Arnav looked at his friend, his brother maan who is in tears, he is not able to see him like that. Arnav touched his shoulder but maan jerked. It came like a shock to arnav.

Khushi, maa mumbled maan.

Maan beta called Mrs. R. Maan is not listening to anyone. So many things are going on in his mind. He has to search for his sister and maa but where. Mrs. R came towards maan and cupped his face.

Maan listen to me beta, listen cried Mrs. R.

Maan looked at her blankly without any emotions on his face. He can see the motherly love and maan hugged Mrs. R and cried. Seeing their son in that position brought tears in their eyes.

Why maa? Why they did like this? They killed papa and dadaji, I don’t know where is khushi and maa. How can I say this to dadimaa? How can she tolerate all this? Cried maan in Mrs. R’s embrace. Geet who is watching all this from the terrace broke down completely. In front of her eyes they died. Its dadaji who pushed geet out of car and asked her to escape. Geet is crying loud seeing maan in that position.

Here maan is also in the same position. But he composed he broke the hug and made a straight face.

Maan beta, I know everything happened so fast and we will search for khushi and sagita. I am sure they are safe somewhere told Mr. R.

No uncle I will search for them. But uncle I need a small help from you? Asked maan.

Yes beta, tell me we are there with you told Mr. R patted his cheek. But he can see some fire in his eyes and pain in his eyes. His face is expressionless.

Uncle plz sell KM told maan.

Mr. R looked at him with shock. Yes uncle, with that money we will start a construction company and dadimaa is also a architect told maan.

Maan but maa wont be able to… before he completes dadimaa interrupted.

I will take care of that vishal (Mr. R) told dadimaa. Maan and others looked at dadimaa.

Maa but..

Plz vishal beta, I have to take care of my family and I can do anything for them told dadimaa.

Ok maa, but you are selling KM, I will help you financially told vishal.

No uncle.. but before maan completes vishal cut him.

No maan, you have to agree with it. Maa you forgot that mansion is papa’s dream how can you sell that. So its final that I am helping you financially told vishal.

Dadimaa smiled slightly and patted his cheeks. Maan is silent, elders took the decision and he didn’t interfere in the middle. Dadimaa left from there and went in with heavy heart. Maan turned to vishal and told uncle pls dadimaa, dev ya Vicky no should know what papa told me. Promise me uncle you will never tell them about this.

Vishal looked at him proudly and told I promise beta. Maan and arnav left from there and went to their respective rooms. But arnav is feeling something odd and decided to go to maan’s room. The door is slightly open and he saw maan holding his parents photo close to his heart and crying. But next happened shocked arnav to no extent.

Maan’s eyes turned red due to anger.

Papa, I promise I will fulfill all my duties. These are not my duties now, this is my family and I can do anything for my family. Aaj se jo kuch bhi bura ho I will suffer alone, I will never let our family to suffer. And papa I promise that I will take revenge on bade paa and bade maa. I will destroy them, from today I am not maan, BUT MAAN SINGH KHURANA, I will destroy all those who caused pain to you and our family. They killed you papa. I wont leave them. Its my promise promised maan to himself.

They took our property and I don’t care and I don’t want that money. But I will show them rishab singh khurana ka beta and rajveer singh khurana ka pota kuch bhi kar sakta hain. I will earn that money again and keep my family happy. But dad and dadaji you don’t worry aapka beta kabhi galat kaam nahi karega. And I wont spare anyone coming on my way. Before they think to destroy me I will destroy them told maan with rage in his eyes.

Arnav who heard this got worried and tensed seeing his friend. But he cant do anything maan suffered a lot and is suffering.

Maan, do whatever you want. But I am there for you always, when you need a support I will be there for you. When you need a shoulder to share your pain I will be there for you. Main tumko kabhi akela nahi chodunga maan. Hamesha tumare saath rahunga. Yeh mera waada hain maan. Uncle, dadaji aap maan ka chinta mat kijiye, wo kabhi akela nahi hain.

Unknown to maan and arnav even geet is also behind the door. She too promised to herself she will never leave maan alone. She will be there with him in every step of his life. Then they heard maan again.

Papa, dadaji I have to help dadimaa in business and I can t do medicine. I am sorry papa I promised you that I will become doctor, but I cant do it now. I have to go to architecture field and you will be proud of me I know told maan to his dad looking at the photo and hugged it tight and slept on the bed cuddled himself.

Don’t worry maan, I will fulfill your dream, I will become doctor thought geet and came out behind the door. She saw arnav in tears and she can guess he too heard maan.

Bhai.. called geet. Arnav who is thinking till now came out of his trance and looked at geet. Geet hugged arnav. Before arnav speak geet told bhai I will fulfill maan’s dream I will study medicine. I will become doctor, atleast he will be happy someone from his family studied medicine hain na?

Arnav kissed her forehead and they both left from there. From that day, from that second everything change. Maan changed, he is not anymore the old maan. As per his promise he became MAAN SINGH KHURANA, the ruthless, stubborn business man born in him. He never thought that his life will take such a turn but it happened. Dadimaa, maan, dev and prem shifted to KM. with the help of Mr. R they started a construction company. They faced losses at the first but neither maan or dadimaa loose hope.

They got small contracts at first, they took  every small and big contract came on their way. Slowly they succeeded. They got big projects due to their quality of service and KHURANA CONSTRUCTIONS is now the top most construction company in India. Even there is a branch in London too for foreign clients. This is the success of good over bad. Maan and dadimaa worked very hard for it. they worked day and night but didn’t get tired they want to prove themselves and finally they proved. Dadimaa was a great helping hand for maan, her ideas, her each and every step made KC a top most company.

Thought they were busy in business but never neglected dev or prem. They spent a quality time with them. This made dev and prem respect them more and more. Arnav was always a support tp maan. After 5 years maan told dadimaa to take rest and from now on he will take care of business. She had established the company and now its time for maan to concentrate only on business.

Arnav took incharge of his dad’s business. Here maan and there arnav are going great, they had no hurdles inbetween. Which made them more and more success. Here dadimaa and arnav’s parents are proud of their kids. Geet, dev, prem and anjali were also successful in their career. Geet was sent to London by maan for studies. They loved each other, but never expressed their love. From the day he came to know the truth he is cold with geet. Because he knows she can read his eyes and he don’t want to show any emotion to any one and become weak.

If he becomes weak then, he cant take care of family. But whom he is cheating his love, his mishty and his soul. Thought he never cared for geet, but the fact is he did. Each and every thing which is happening in her life maan kept a track. Its not that he doubts her but for her safety, as per maan’s dad words geet saw the person who killed his dad and dadaji, if they came to know that she is geet then they may harm her and he cant loose his mishty.

But he never tried to understand geet, maan is always bossy. But the situations made him like that. Each and every day he is suffering, the pain of his dad’s death. The pain of not finding his sister and maa. The pain of being away from his love. The pain of not caring for anyone. The pain of being alone is eating him alive. He is tired, he is tired of fighting alone from past 10 years. But at the same time he don’t want anyone to suffer, he wants others to be happy. Dadi thought that he will be normal once he is succseeded in his life. But no he didn’t change, this worried dadimaa. She is so worried about maan.

Day by day his suffering increased but he never shared with anyone and he is becoming more and more angry. Even his friend adi who are college mates and is working under maan is also afraid of talking with him. The person who talks with maan freely is anjali. She never cares of his anger. Maan never mind, infact he is happy atleast she don’t care if he is angry. Geet, even when she tries to talk with him he never cared. That doesn’t mean he hates her but he is afraid. Afraid of showing any emotions. He can see the pain in her eyes, his heart pierced but he didn’t showed any emotions.

But he is happy one day, the day he found his sister and mother. They are back into his life and he said yes to dadimaa for marrying geet. But geet is angry, they confronted they talked and they became one. Finally his love, his sister and his mother is back in his life. His dad’s wish is fulfilled. He is successful now, but will his love, his sister and his mother will be with him forever. What is the play of destiny now. no one knows. But maan singh khurana writes his own destiny. His game started now. THE MAAN SINGH KHURANA’S GAME STARTED NOW. No one can stop him now. Its true, unknown to anyone the destiny has involved geet, arnav and khushi in this game. Will they survive. Will these 2 friends be able to save their family.


Precap: may be maneet’s marriage.


Hii here is part 15. Hope you liked it. This is all about maan’s life from past 10 years. From next update the present starts. Plz atleast comment on blog friends. REGULAR READERS PLZ ATLEAST YOU GUYS COMMENT. TELL ME SHOULD I CONTINUE MY WORKS OR NOT TELL ME FRANKLY.




36 Responses to “Love and Revenge part 15”

  1. trs1391 September 4, 2012 at 4:20 pm #

    love it awsem maan life he and dadi worked hard for to regain track of life and yes lovers suffered but finally they are going to be one and don’t think of stopping any work i love all your ffs

  2. adsshri September 4, 2012 at 4:21 pm #

    fabulous part dear maan undergone lot of struggle and nw succeeded in his life with lot of strrugle nw he has everything even his maa,sis and love nw waiting for nxt

  3. ramneek kaur September 4, 2012 at 4:38 pm #

    Grrat going
    feeling pain of maan
    he much he suffered
    jusy because of.monry
    cheap family
    bt loved maan attitude
    nd precap seems interrsting

  4. amrinder dhami September 4, 2012 at 5:39 pm #

    too gud ,now d past is over n m egarly waiting for d present track n maaneet marrige,jst loved d update pls update d nxt part soon

  5. divya September 4, 2012 at 6:45 pm #

    kitna painful part tha… u made me cry… sob sob sob… really maan suffered a lot…. he had leave his dream his love his happiness… all bcoz oc them… bt maan will definately tk revenge… m really proud of this maan…. omg maaneet marriage… wooo

  6. DrRose September 5, 2012 at 4:16 am #

    that was an amazing part jyo… totally loved it

    so much emotional part… maan is so sweet… and geet wanted to fulfill man’s dream so she chose to be a doc.. aww that was so mature of geet….

    precap… wow.. waiting for their shaadi

    i love your ALL works jyo.. so dare you stop ffs …

    love yaa

  7. padma September 5, 2012 at 4:28 am #

    lovely update …
    i felt Maan atleast tell his feelings to Geet:)

  8. ratna September 5, 2012 at 4:42 am #

    Thank u for the awesome update and PM
    the past was so painful…..poor Maan and his family
    waiting to see what Maan does now….plz continue
    i love all your FF’s…..plz dont stop
    love you……tc 🙂

  9. pamil September 5, 2012 at 5:03 am #

    beautiful dear
    maan and geet both has gone through so much
    hpe they will get happiness soon

  10. remyapillai September 5, 2012 at 5:20 am #

    superb and painful one..
    she became Dr. to fulfill his touching..

  11. srirad September 5, 2012 at 5:52 am #

    Amazing update..
    Poor maaneet suffered so much in past
    Precap sound interesting
    Eagerly waiting for next
    Continue soon:)

  12. surbhi September 5, 2012 at 6:31 am #


  13. ffdeewani September 5, 2012 at 7:20 am #

    Hi dear,

    It really is a wonderful update with all the emotions brought it very beautifully…should say very well written.

    I was literally crying knowing Maan’s condition at such a young age. This update really had many revelations. In the recent updates, came to know he wanted to become a doctor but now knowing the true reason of it I am all shocked….poor soul he has suffer so much in his life, which all turned him to be rude, arrogant and what not…I guess bottling up everything is just making things worse as you said….me toh very, very sad knowing it. Knowing Geet did medicine for Maan was so touching and lovely…I feel she is the only medicine which can bring Maan out of his depression or say from being reserved and feeling alone with everything around…hope he comes out of this completely soon.

    Really luved Arnav’s role and him being support to Maan in his tough time, though not completely, but I feel his presence defo has helped Maan…just luv their bond too.

    All said, me waiting very eagerly for the next update….as if u r defo gonna give us whats in the precap…it will just be amazing to read…and I wouldn’t mind anything else running in your mind apart from this also…as I just luv everything u write…so please update the next part soon…will be waiting.

  14. drashti10 September 5, 2012 at 7:48 am #

    Heyy jyo awesome update dear!!!!….. this part ws really emotional!!! it ws veryy touchy….. it made me cry!! 😦 😦
    Mr.R made him listen d wrds recorded by Maans dad!!!…. So Maan decided to do d business….
    Arnav nd Geet heard Maans talk…nd Geet decided to fulfill Maans dream…..Loved Geet vryy much… Maan nd dadi worked hard nd made d company no.1
    Loved Arnav he always supported nd helped him……
    plzzzz cont soon dear… w8ng 4 d nxt part eagerly!!!

  15. neha September 5, 2012 at 7:57 am #

    nice , but painful update

  16. spvd September 5, 2012 at 8:10 am #

    part 15
    awesome dear……….
    poor Maan……….
    but hes strong now…………..
    cont soon dear………………

    Deepa (spvd)

  17. Kiran September 5, 2012 at 8:35 am #

    wonderful update…..

    so this was Maan’s past…terrible….people stoop so low that they kill their own brother for money and property…..
    now Maan’s game start to take revenge….
    thanx for pm…

  18. prasu prrk86 September 5, 2012 at 10:00 am #


  19. soma September 5, 2012 at 10:24 am #

    awesome n beautiful update………..

    loved it very much………….

    jab tak maa singh khurana n arnav singh raizada zinda hai tab tak koi unke family ko chhuna toh dur ki baat………bude nazar se dekh bhi nehi sakte…………..kuch buda nehi hoga………..

    thank u sooo much fr d lovely update n also fr d pm……….

    continue nxt prt soon plz………

    eagerly waiting………………

  20. mounicasharma September 5, 2012 at 11:28 am #

    awesome awesome update darling but maan’s past is very very sad..
    poor maan suffered a lot…
    vishal is such a nice man…he knew every thing n helped maan n his family finally..thankgod warna they would have sold km which was maan’s dad’s dream..
    i hate kutti kaminis bade papa n badi maa..chii how can they be so criel..they killed them becoz of bloody money..ha money can do anything….
    i really felt bad for maan infact me crying..the way he hugged n cried mrs.R was awww…mummmy me crying imagining my maan’s face..darling you made me cry..
    even geet listened that n she decided to study for sweet na..she loves him so so much na…thankgod they are together in present n iam so happy for that..
    even arnav is such a good friend na..he was supportive n stood for maan…
    waiting very very eagerly for maaneet’s wedding..
    cont soon u loads..muaazzzzzz
    ur kiddo:)

  21. freya10 September 5, 2012 at 12:40 pm #

    nice part

  22. Sneh September 5, 2012 at 1:21 pm #

    amazing update
    maan has undergone so much at such a young age
    but still standing strong for his family
    knowing that maan wanted to be a doctor
    but gave it up to establish a business
    maan has really undergone a lot
    but geet became a doctor to fulfill maan’s dream
    geet’s really maan’s strength in every way
    even arnav played a very big role in this story
    finally maan found his sis n mother
    now he agreed to marry geet
    now maan wont leave the ppl responsible for his father n dadaji’s death
    now maan wil show them what maan singh khurana really is
    now the game really begins
    update soon
    waiting eagerly

  23. ruhakhan September 5, 2012 at 1:26 pm #

    oh so maans dad recorded everything
    and maaneets marriage sachhi
    do update soon

  24. soumi paul September 5, 2012 at 2:30 pm #

    superb update
    loved it
    maan’s life is full of struggle………………………………..
    let’s see how maan takes revenge

  25. tia September 5, 2012 at 2:33 pm #

    babaji wt an emotional update yaar
    me scrying crying n crying
    my maanu suffered alot in his young age
    i hate those disgusting peolple
    aise relative se acha insaan akela hi hai…
    bt glad to know that my maaneet will b one
    hayee lv my msk N MSK KA REVENGE
    precap- hope so.. waiting
    lvd it
    it was an awesome update jaani

  26. Amy September 5, 2012 at 2:33 pm #

    Continue Soon
    Thank You So Much For The PM

  27. dia0n September 5, 2012 at 6:06 pm #

    awesome part

  28. Niharika September 5, 2012 at 6:17 pm #

    Very crucial part as we can to know the past of Maan, waiting to see the present

  29. janvi September 5, 2012 at 6:43 pm #

    gr8 part..
    update soon dear..

  30. payal September 5, 2012 at 11:18 pm #

    nice part..MAAN lost his dad for money..Geet stay with him..

  31. Mishti13 September 5, 2012 at 11:21 pm #

    awesome update
    hope geet and him get together soon
    thanks for pm
    cont. soon

  32. ritzy09 September 6, 2012 at 8:27 am #

    very nice summary Jyoti…it explains what hapenned and why very clearly…very eager for Maan’s game to start and for present life to begin

  33. druhi September 6, 2012 at 6:29 pm #

    it changed hm…made him MSK….

  34. fffan123 September 6, 2012 at 6:58 pm #

    Lovely summary. Let the game begin.

  35. Laraib Yousuf September 7, 2012 at 12:20 pm #

    sorry for late comment awesome update
    sorry can’t help in pms don’t know how to do it
    and also hell busy in collage stuff
    some time i hate my teachers for giving sooooo much work grrrrr
    i wish i could help

  36. Pooja September 7, 2012 at 2:53 pm #

    awsome part di

Leave a Reply

Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in: Logo

You are commenting using your account. Log Out / Change )

Twitter picture

You are commenting using your Twitter account. Log Out / Change )

Facebook photo

You are commenting using your Facebook account. Log Out / Change )

Google+ photo

You are commenting using your Google+ account. Log Out / Change )

Connecting to %s

Ruchs' DEN!!!!

Writing, my first crush!!

Maaneet lover

All about loving Maaneet


Just another site


The greatest site in all the land!

%d bloggers like this: