Love and Revenge Part 16

11 Sep

P.S.: I m sorry if there are any mistakes regarding medical issues, its purely fictional. Pls take it in a fictional way…. 🙂


Maan and geet opened their eyes thinking of their bitter past in their respective rooms. Both are sweating  and they took a glass of water and gulped it in one go. Maan went towards his cupboard and took their family photo. He hugged it close to his heart and stood there for a long time. Here in sangita’s (maan’s mom) room she is tossing in the bed not able to sleep. She wants to talk to maan but maan is busy with his work and all.

She just got up and sat on the bed thinking something. Here maan also lied on the bed but is not able to sleep, he thought of doing some work. He took his laptop and a file and decided to go to his study room. He went out of his room and was about to go to the study but he saw the lights on in mom’a room.

Maa is still awake? Thought maan and went near her room to check on her once. He found that the door is opened which made him confused. Maan entered into the room and saw his maa in deep thoughts.

Maa.. called maan.

Hearing maan’s voice, she jerked and looked at him and smiled.

Maa, is everything alright? Asked maan worriedly moving towards her. Maa smiled at him and told I am fine maan, not feeling sleepy. Come sit here.

Maan smiled slightly and sat beside her. He kept the laptop and file aside.

Maan you are working at this hour? Asked maa.

Yes maa, wo I am not feeling sleepy so thought of completing some pending work told maan.

Maa caressed his hair and told maan don’t stress much, you can work later. Rest is also needed maan told maa.

Maan nodded and told ha maa, par aaj papa ka bohot yaad aaraha hain. Sangita had tears in her eyes but controlled she should not be weak. She should be strong for maan, for this family.

Maa hugged maan and told your papa will very proud beta. I am sure he will be very happy seeing you successful and strong. I am sorry son, I didn’t do anything to you as a maa.

Maan broke the hug and wiped her tears and told never say that again maa. You are everything to me. The hope of seeing you again made me strong. The hope of meeting my sister again made me strong.

Sangita looked at maan with proud in her eyes and kissed her forehead. Maan rested his head on her lap and closed his eyes feeling pleasure and relief. Now maan is in the most safest place in the whole universe. Sangita is caressing his hair and maan slept peacefully forgetting about everything.

Sangita took the file which maan kept aside and read the file. After sometime she kept the file aside and slept in the sitting position. Both mother and son are sleeping peacefully.

Next day morning, maan woke up and saw his maa is sleeping uncomfortably. He got up and made her sleep on the bed comfortably and covered her with quilt. He went to his room o freshen up and went for his workout.

At 8’o clock all are ready at the breakfast table waiting for maan. Soon maan arrived and all of them are having breakfast. The whole family is together and happy. After breakfast when maan was about to get up sangita called him.


Ha maa..

I am coming to office with you told sangita.

Office.. but wh… before maan ask anything sangita got up and stopped him by raising her hand in air. She turned to maan and told I am not listening anything. I am coming to office with you and yes arrange the meeting with head architects told sangita sternly. Authority is oozing out with her each and every word. Maan and others are taken aback with her stern voice.

I will coming in 10 min told sangita and went upstairs. Maan looked at dadi shocked. Dadi chuckled at his reaction and told now you came to know from where all this arrogance and authority came from.

Maan nodded understanding her statement.

Bro, all the best wished prem and giggled.

Why?? Asked maan.

See mom once, how she is? Now I think she will be more strict than you in office told prem and laughed out loud.

Maan rolled his eyes at his nautanki brother. Haha, everyone is not a joker like you right? Retorded khushi.

Oyyy.. shup kar warned prem.

Why?? Darr gaye?? Laughed khushi.

Prem Singh Khurana and scared (oyy prem yeh maan ka dialogue hain.. don’t copy him haa). What a joke laughed prem.

Khushi glared at him and was about to retort back dev inturrepted.

Maan bro, I need a small help from you told dev.

Yes dev, tell asked maan.

Plz prem and khushi ko zara sambhalna, they are not at all concentrating on studies complained dev and smirked at both.

Prem and khushi gulped sensing a big trouble has erupted. Maan glared at 2 and warned listen you both in the study at 8pm. Understood?

They both pouted and nodded in a yes.

Maan, he loves his siblings but don’t want any negligence in their studies and career. So he is strict when it comes to them. But he is ready to give anything to them. Even prem, dev and khushi wont have any problem. But being younger khush tries to do some emotional drama. But whom she is fooling MSK, never.

Then they saw sangita is climbing down the stairs with a elegant cream color saree and a matching ear rings. She is now looking exactly like Sangita Rishab Singh Khurana. Maan smiled at her maa and they both left to office bidding good bye to everyone. Dev left to hospital and prem and khushi left for college.

Soon maan and maa reached office, both got down the car and entered into the lift. They reached 10th floor and walked towards maan’s cabin. All of them are dumbstuck to see maan’s mother, the same attitude maan got and even more. When the staff wished them they just nodded.

They entered into the cabin and maan asked sangita to sit on the MD’S place.

Maan its your place beta told sangita.

Maa, whenever you come to office its yours told maan and made her sit. Sangita is proud of his son. Soon Naina arranged the meeting with head architects in conference room. When sangita and maan entered into the room they all wished them. Soon the meeting started. Maan asked sangita to speak.

Good morning everyone. Directly coming to the point, I have seen that some of them are not working efficiently.

Maan and others are shocked.

Sangita maintained a straight face and took a file which maan left in sangita’s room yesterday. She placed the file on the table and asked can I know who designed this ??

Sasha got up and told its me ma’am.

Well miss.


Ok miss. Sasha, did you go through all the details of the land asked sangita.

Yes ma’am ofcourse I did told sasha.

Sangita got up and almost shouted then how can you do such a blunder?

Sasha looked at her confused and told ma’am its actually a shopping mall in the city. The land is very good and even clients are happy with the designs.

Ok Miss. Sasha, can u tell me something, when the soil is soft and which cant bear heavy weight. Then how can you construct 7 floors. Do you think the building will withstand?

Sasha looked at her with wide eyes. She didn’t see which type of soil is it for the first time. Maan took the file and studied. Yes its true. Oh crap, I was about to read this file yesterday and forgot thought maan.

I am sorry ma’am, I forgot to study the type of soil told sasha and admitted her mistake. Sangita can see the sincerity in her eyes. She calmed down and told Ok miss. Sasha this will be the last chance you are getting. If you repeat it again then you will be out of this office warned sangita.

Sorry ma’am I will never repeat it and thanku ma’am fo giving me a chance again told sasha and lowered her head in shame. How can she forget such a big thing thought sasha.

Ok told sangita and left from there. Maan stood up, sasha I never expected such type of negligence from you shouted maan in anger.

I am sorry MK apologized sasha.

I want the designs by today evening warned maan and left from there. Adi who witnessed all went to sasha and tried to console her.

Sasha, its ok. Relax and re-work on the designs told adi.

Sasha nodded and told I don’t know how it slipped from my mind. On top of that dad is in hospital, he is not well.

Sasha is anything serious? Asked adi.

Dad suffered with a heart attack 2 days before and he is under observation. Surgery is needed told sasha.

Sasha, how come maan don’t know about it? Asked adi.

Adi, MK is busy these days I didn’t get a chance to inform him or apply for a leave told sasha.

Sasha, you better go to the hospital. I will talk with maan told adi.

No adi, its ok I have to complete these designs anyway. Dad will be fine told sasha and left from there.

Adi sighed and went to his cabin to continue his work.

Here in Raizada Mansion, Geet got up late, she is not feeling well from past 2 ways. She is throwing up and feeling dizzy. She is not feeling like eating anything. She freshened up and went downstairs only to see anjali talking on phone.

Bhai, when you are coming? Asked anjali.

When you are coming what do you mean? I am in office that means I will come in the evening told arnav confused.

Lo aagayi geet di, bhai now a days she is sleeping more and see her face how pale it is? Told anjali.

Geet rolled her eyes and sat beside her. She is still feeling dizzy, she closed her eyes. Geet took the phone and told bhai, I am going to hospital now, can you come to hospital in the evening. I am going by taxi now.

Geet when you are not feeling well, then take rest na? told arnav.

No bhai, I have meeting with chief doctor told geet.

Ok fine, I will come in the evening. Acha I have meeting now. Ask anjali not to call for 2 hours I will be in the meeting told arnav.

Ok bhai. Bye.. told geet and cut the call.

Geet got up and took her bag to go to hospital. Suddenly the door bell rang. Geet opened the door and is confused to see the police outside.

Miss. Geet Singh Raizada?? Asked the police inspector.

Yes?? Asked geet confused.

You are under arrest ma’am told the police.

Geet is shocked and confused and asked excuse me? Can I know the reason?

You and your chief doctor are doing some research and it is also completed few days back right?

Yes.. so?? Asked geet.

Your chief doctor has put a case on you saying that without his permission you have signed a contract with one of the lab to continue the further research told inspector.

Geet is utterly shocked to hear this. She knows the research is confidential and she didn’t even share it with dev. Excuse me inspector, I think you heard it wrong. I didn’t do anything like that told geet.

Sorry miss. Raizada, here are the contract papers. Inspector showed those papers to geet, yes it is her signature. But the question is when did she sign? She just stood there blank. She saw anjali snatched the papers from inspector. She is also shocked. Her geet di never do such things, then what is this? What is happening? No one is there at home. Both geet and anjali stood there shocked.

Before they react anything, the inspector took geet with them. Anjali cried and shouted for geet but nothing helped. Geet is gone. Anjali rushed inside and tried to call Arnav but his mobile is switched off. God he told before not to call him for 2 hours. She tried calling maan but he kept his mobile in silent as maan and sangita are discussing about a project and told not to disturb them.

Going to arnav bhai’s office will take 1 hour. Its better I go to maan bhai’s office thought anjali and rushed to the car. She asked driver to go to KC. Anjali is crying bitterly. She is continously trying arnav’s number but no luck. Finally after 20 min drive she reached maan’s office. She asked in the reception about maan, she told maan and sangita are in a meeting.

I want to meet him immediately told anjali.

But ma’am you cant sir told not to disturb him told receptionist.

But anjali didn’t listen anything, she rushed towards maan’s cabin. She opened the door and fell down. Here maan and sangita who are discussing over a project saw the door opened and they got angry. But seeing anjali all in tears they became alert and they saw her fell down on the floor. Maan immediately got up and ran to her. Maan made anjali stand.

Maan got worried seeing anjali in that state. He made her sit on the couch and gave her some water. Sangita sat beside anjali and caressed her hair. Anjali gulped water and looked at maan.

Anjali what happened? Asked maan.

Bhai.. wo.. geet di.. anjali is so much shocked that the words are not coming out.

Hearing geet’s name maan became alert.

Anjali relax and tell me asked maan, though he is impatient but anjali’s condition is also not good.

Bhai, geet di is arrested told anjali finally.

It came like a blow to maan and sangita is shocked.

Anjali what are you saying? Asked maan shocked.

Anjali told what all happened in RM. Maan and sangita are left speechless. Before anjali continue further maan took his mobile and called to his Lawyer and asked him to come to office immediately.

Here geet is taken to police station. They asked her to sit, but geet is feeling dizzy. First of all she is weak and on top of that all this is taking a toll on her. She sat on the chair and held her head tight.

Maan, bhai whispered geet. Here maan is restless, his geet needed him and he cant waste time waiting for lawyer. Today is Friday and he have to act fast, Saturday and Sunday court holiday.

Maa, will you plz talk with lawyer and come to police station asked maan.

Maan, you go I will take care of everything, as soon as lawyer comes we will apply for bail told maa.

Anjali you be here. I will inform to Arnav. You don’t worry geet will come soon told maan.

Bhai, careful. Di is not feeling well from 2-3 days told anjali.

I know the reason anjali, don’t worry told maan and rushed to parking lot. He reached station within no time and went in. He saw his geet is sitting just like a motionless person.

Precap: What will maan and arnav do now?

Will geet get bail??

will be waiting for ur comments..

plz plz comment friends..


32 Responses to “Love and Revenge Part 16”

  1. adsshri September 11, 2012 at 4:57 pm #

    Fabulous part

  2. ramneek kaur September 11, 2012 at 5:08 pm #

    Awsome update
    loved it
    geet preg toh ni
    i love how maan nd his mom behaving in office
    nd how geet got arrestedd
    great giing
    Wht will maan di now


  3. divya September 11, 2012 at 5:40 pm #

    nice part…. finally at peace being with his mother…. woo sangita is no less….. omg geet ko kya ho gaya… 1stly y she is sick… well i think i no y bt den to m confused n maan said he knows d reason… n if wat m thinking is right den being a doc geet shuld know…. n yeh arrest…. now who is behind all this… Maan k bade papa kya???? Hope maan n arnav wil do sumthing on tym….

  4. harshitha September 11, 2012 at 5:52 pm #

    nice part…….

  5. poojaa42 September 11, 2012 at 9:01 pm #

    wow….loved sangitas attitude…..geet arrested nd she s nt well also..s she pregnant…loving continue soon…

  6. trs1391 September 12, 2012 at 1:44 am #

    nice update i think geet pregnant geet arrested waiting for next

  7. maneetmaniac September 12, 2012 at 5:23 am #

    Amazing yet shocking update……loved sangitas attitude….truly a khurana……geet not feeling well… guessingg its either food poisoning or shz pregnant…..n maans knows it…..n now the shocking part geet is arrested…winder who is behind all this…hope maan n arnav save her……..lvd the update…..
    Plz update the next parf soon

  8. spvd September 12, 2012 at 7:24 am #

    part 16
    OMG poor Geet……….
    she is pregnant with Maan’s baby?
    and top of this jail……………….
    why did her senior report so?
    hope Maan gets her bail……………..
    cont soon dear……………….

    Deepa (spvd)

  9. DrRose September 12, 2012 at 12:04 pm #

    what a part…. loved it
    maan maa convo was cool
    oh maa is also khurrana and attitude and arrogance to banta hai naa…
    loved maan and siblings at breakfast table
    was smiling when maa(sangita) scolded sasha… you deserve this baby, for your
    negligence …
    but oh adi is concerned … poor her dad…

    oh geet got arrested ???? why ??? that was a false allegation naa???
    glad anjali went to kc.. clever girl…
    geet is not feeling well …. ab kya hua????

    maan reached to police station… pheww… am relaxed

    precap… hmm.. guess, sangita is gonna make a way for geet’s bail …

    waiting for the next

    much love Rose

  10. abi September 12, 2012 at 2:04 pm #

    awesome update
    i think may be geet is preggy
    who has done the sign of geet

  11. srirad September 13, 2012 at 6:01 am #

    Amazing update
    Loved maan and his mom attitude
    Is geet pregnant..Poor geet ,she is in jail
    Who did this…Now what will maan do
    Continue soon
    Eagerly waiting for next 🙂

  12. punam2712 September 13, 2012 at 1:54 pm #

    Why is Geet feeling unwell
    And who could do this to her
    Is it Mann s enemies

  13. ruchs September 13, 2012 at 6:28 pm #

    Am so confused with Geet not feeling well and Maan saying that he knows about it!! Is Geet pregnant??? Loved Sangita!! Gosh now i know from where Maan has got all the attitude!! he he!! she is a true business woman!! Hope Geet comes out from the jail all fit and fine and also gets released from all the false charges!!! Awesome update dear!!

  14. Meena September 14, 2012 at 3:25 pm #

    awesome dear
    loved it
    m confused with geet not feeling well
    hope geet gets out of jail soon
    continue soon
    thanks for pm and update

  15. Amy September 14, 2012 at 3:41 pm #

    Superb Update
    Continue Soon
    Thank You So Much For The PM

  16. Kiran September 14, 2012 at 3:57 pm #

    first of all is Geet pregnant because Maan is saying he knows the reason but being doctor why Geet herself don’t know anything ?….
    Sangita is back to business… is very good now Maan has a helping hand….
    Poor Sasha her father is in hospital…..but she is very loyal to Maan….

    who made Geet arrested… it some planning by enemies of Khurana family…..

    awesome and interesting update….

    thanx for pm….

  17. pamil September 14, 2012 at 4:09 pm #

    beautiful update dear
    i think its maan’s uncle behind geet’s arrest
    waiting to know more
    thanks for pm

  18. Niharika September 14, 2012 at 4:23 pm #

    Who is behind Geet’s arrest?? and is she preg?? OMG!! then things will be more complicated…

  19. tia September 14, 2012 at 4:34 pm #

    wow lvly
    first half lv maanus’ mom n her stule now we also came to know from where all this arrogance and authority came from .. hehehehh.. lvd it
    bt geet wt y ? who is behind all this .???????????
    n geet not feeling well n feeling dizzzy n throwing up. she is preggy.. obviously.. wink wonk..
    bt maanu wont leave that person who is behind al this…

  20. nats0109 September 14, 2012 at 5:05 pm #

    awesm updt!!
    loved it!!
    poor geet.. is she pregnant.. n plus nw arrested!!
    waiting 4 d next one!!

  21. ruhakhan September 14, 2012 at 5:31 pm #

    loved maans moom attitude
    jaesi maa waisa beta
    and y geet is sick kahin woh……..
    do update soon

  22. janvi2006 September 14, 2012 at 5:32 pm #

    awesome part..
    update soon dear..

  23. Chetna September 14, 2012 at 5:54 pm #

    Hi thanks 4 da pm n wonderful update! Loved it! Wel written! update soon! Khwaishfan (IF)

  24. soma September 14, 2012 at 9:59 pm #

    why geet is arrested?…is geet pregnant?

    awesome n wonderful update…

    loved it very much…

    thank u very much fr d lovely update n also fr d pm…

    waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt…

    continue soon plz…

  25. Angel13 September 15, 2012 at 12:05 am #

    great update

  26. fffan123 September 15, 2012 at 3:32 am #

    Absolutely loved the update. Hope Maan is able to save her.

  27. payal September 15, 2012 at 5:07 am #

    nice part..

  28. freya10 September 15, 2012 at 1:23 pm #

    awesome part

  29. soumi paul September 15, 2012 at 1:53 pm #

    superb update
    seems like geet is framed……………………..but by who?

  30. drashti10 September 16, 2012 at 7:42 am #

    Awesome update jyo….. wow… Loved Prem nd Khushis cute fight!!!! 😀
    Loved Maan nd his moms talk….
    Hmm so Maan hs gt dis attitude 4m his Mom…..
    Sangita also went to offyc wid Maan…. OMG Geet is arrested but how?????
    Precap is interesting,…. Hpe Maan nd Arnav will save Geet…
    plzzz cont soon…w8ng

  31. Pooja September 19, 2012 at 12:36 pm #

    awesome update
    m somehow confused for geet’s condition … she is not feeling well for 2-3 days nd maan is saying he knew wats d matter wid geet is

  32. fozia September 19, 2012 at 10:39 pm #

    Really good update.

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