Do i deserve ur love part 24

13 Sep

Haldi function is completed, maan and geet went to their respective rooms to take shower. Smile didn’t leave their face, they both are so excited and happy to start their new life. Maan had shower and came out, changed into vests and pants. Just then pinky there with breakfast for maan. Maan smiled at her and pinky arranged breakfast for him.

Thanku pinky told maan.

Bhai I know that you are getting married and from tomorrow your wife will do all these things, but doesn’t mean that you should be this formal complained pinky listening thanku from maan.

Maan smiled at her complaint and told acha baba I am sorry. And one more thing are you expecting geet will do all these things? Pinky looked at him confused.

Kyun nahi? (why not?) asked pinky.

My dear pinky, does your friend know how to cook? Asked maan rising his eyebrow.

Pinky laughed at him and told poor you bhai, enjoy cooking. And my friend is not that bad too she can make maggie for you and laughed out loud. Maan too joined her laughter.

Hawwww you are teasing my sister told pari entering into his room to give his sherwani.

Saaliji, you are also same right? I pity maa, how she is tolerating you both teased maan and pari made a baby face.

Yeh lijiye, your sherwani. I am placing it on the table told pari still pouting.

Arey saaliji tho bura maan gaye teased maan further but stopped seeing her tears. Pinky placed hand on her shoulder and asked what happened pari?

Pari nodded in a no.

Arey pari, I was just kidding. Sorry yaar told maan getting up.

Jiju take care of my di told pari while tears rolled down her cheeks. I was never away from geet di, but today she is going to start a new life. I am very happy for that but from today she wont be with us na told pari looking down.

Maan looked at pinky and then pari. Maan side hugged pari and told pari, you will never miss geet. You are my family now. You are like my sister, we all will stay together, I promise. Now don’t cry. If geet see na, she thinks I made you cry.

Pari smiled at maan and thanked him.

Thanku so much jiju. You are the best.

Chalo chalo, we will have breakfast I am hungry told maan touching his stomach.

Jiju, so much work is left you have breakfast and get ready. I will take care of your MISHTY teased pari and ran from there leaving a shocked maan behind.

Ha ha humko pata hain ki geet aapki MISHTY hain pinky too teased further. Now all the boys entered into maan’s room and made pinky go out.

Oyy why you all are staring at me? Asked maan making a weird face.

Saale, bachelor party kaha hain? Asked dev.

NO shouted maan.

What no? asked raj.

Bachelor party warty, no way told maan stubbornly.

You don’t come, we will enjoy told yash.

Maan is thinking while having breakfast. Hmm ok, you guys enjoy. Don’t drink much ok? Asked maan.

Ok dude, thanku thanked yash and went to his dreamy land dancing with girls.

Geet sat on the bed with girls around. She is thinking of something when pari nudged her.

Di, come out of jiju’s dreams for some time teased pari.

Geet blushed and slapped on her head warning her. Rano brought breakfast for geet and fed with her own hands. Rano kissed her forehead and blessed her.

Be happy geet, geet hugged rano. Both are having tears in their eyes. Rano broke the hug and told

Chalo, aaj khushiyon ka din hain. Aansu nahi and wiped her tears. Get ready geet, its almost 11 am. You should be ready in 2 hours.

Geet nodded and pinky told don’t worry aunty. We are there na.

Rano nodded and left from there.

Pari took out geet’s lehenga from cupboard and gave it to her. Geet touched it and smiled. Soon she changed and came out. Her hair is open and she is looking cute in that lehenga. Her friends attacked her with makeup kits and jewelary. Geet sat in front of dressing table and allowed her friends to do what ever they want. Few are making her wear bangles, maang tika and all other ornaments. While few are doing her hair.

Finally seems like ages geet got ready and it took almost 3 hours. Geet looked herself in the mirror. Pari and pinky hugged her from back and told you are looking breath taking.

Geet blushed and lowered her eye lashes.

I will be back told pinky and rushed to maan’s room.

Here maan too got ready in his sherwani and applied gel to his hair and looking hot and handsome exposing his chest with first 3 buttons open. Pinky knocked the door. Adi opened and asked what?

Is bhai ready? Asked pinky.

Yes told adi.

Ok I have to tie sehra to bhai told pinky.

Ok ya I forgot come told adi and allowed her to come in. Maan smiled at pinky and she tied sehra to maan. Maan got ready and they all are ready to go to marriage venue. Geet and some of her friends are there in house while rano and other elders went to marriage venue before maan reach there. Maan and his friends with pinky got into the car and started their drive to venue.

Within 1 hour they reached the venue and they all got down. Here rano is already waiting for maan. She saw him and smiled and maan too smiled at her. Rano did aarti and put tilak. She then took sweet and fed maan a spoon. Maan took blessing of rano and entered into the marriage hall. It is beautifully decorated with red roses and orchids favorite of both maan and geet. Soon maan is escorted to mandap.

Here geet too got ready and they too got into the other car and drove to venue. Geet is all nervous and excited. She clutched her dupatta tight and closed her eyes. All other friends are busy in their own world.

Babaji, thanku so much. Today is the most auspicious day in my life. Today I will be Mrs. Maan Singh Khurana. Papaji, aaj main bohot khush hu, aap bhi khush ho na? kaash aaj aap yaha hote. Where ever you are you will be happy. I got my happiness in the form of maan. I need your blessings papaji thought geet to herself and closed her seeking her papaji’s blessings.

They reached the venue and all of them got down. Rano came to her and took her inside the hall. Maan felt geet’s presence and turned towards the entrance.They looked at each other .



Dulhe Ka Sehra Suhana Lagta Hai

Dhulhan Ka To Dil Deewana Lagta Hai

That’s it, his breath stuck in his throat seeing his mishty looking not less than angel. Her milky while skin is reflecting more and her pink cheeks and lips and a smile playing on her lips shows how happy she is. She too looked up and saw maan, who is staring at her without blinking. They both are lost in their own world. Geet couldn’t tolerate his continous gaze on her and lowered her eye lashes.

Maan smiled at her and rano took geet to the mandap. Due to heavy lehenga, geet is not able to climd the step, maan offered his hand and geet happily took it and climbed the single stair near the mandap and they both stood side by side.


Soon panditji arrived and started chanting mantras. After few minutes, panditji asked them to exchange vanamala. Pari handed one to maan and one to geet.

Soon they both exchanged the vanamala and smiled at each other. Panditji asked them to sit. They both sat side by side and panditji chanting mantras once again. The havan was lit, maan and geet folded their hands infront of havan praying for their future.


Panditji asked maan to fill geet’s maang. Maan took a pinch of sindoor and filled geet maang. Geet closed her eyes living the moment.


Maan looked at her lovingly. Then he took mangalsutra and tied around her neck. Geet had tears in her eyes, seeing that maan nodded in a no.


Saat Pheron Se Bandha, Janmon Ka Ye Bandhan

Pyaar Se Joda Hai Rab Ne, Preet Ka Daaman

Hain Nayee Rasmein, Nayee Kasmein, Nayee Uljhan

Hont Hain Khamosh, Lekin Keh Rahi Dhadkan

 Dhadkan Dhadkan Dhadkan Dhadkan

 Mushkil Ashkon Ko Chukana Lagta Hai

Dhulhan Ka To Dil Deewana Lagta Hai

 Palbhar Mein Kaise Badalte Hain Rishte

Abh To Har Apna, Begaana Lagta Hai

 Dulhe Ka Sehra Suhana Lagta Hai

Dhulhan Ka To Dil Deewana Lagta Hai

They both stood up for pheras. They did seven pheras around the fire, promising each other to be there for each other in every ups and downs of the life. They completed the pheras and took elders blessings. Rano kissed their forehead and blessed for their happy life.


Next ritual was bidaai, it was very emotional, geet hugged both rano and pari and cried. Maan felt bad seeing his geet missing her happy. But he promised himself, soon she will be with her full family.


Main Teri Baahon Ke Jhule Mein Pali Babul

Jaa Rahi Hoon Chod Ke Teri Gali Babul

Khoobsurat Ye Zamaane Yaad Aayenge

Chah Ke Bhi Hum Tume Na Bhool Payengey

 Dulhe Ka Sehra Suhana Lagta Hai

Dhulhan Ka To Dil Deewana Lagta Hai

Dulhe Ka, Sehra, Suhana Lagta Hai

Dhulhan Ka To Dil Deewana Lagta Hai

Even pinky got emotional seeing geet, she suffered a lot in her life. Finally she is settled and she have full confidence on her maan bhai, he will keep geet always happy, no matter what.

Rano wiped geet’s tears and told Khush raho beti, aaj se tum apna naya zindagi shuru karne jaa rahi ho. Sambhalke, mera aashirwad tumare paas sada rahega.

Geet hugged her maa once again. Rano went over maan and told maan beta, meri beti ka khyal rakhna. Thoda gussa bohot ata hain par dil ki achi hain.

Maan smiled and told aap chinta mat kijiye maa, main geet ki aankhon mein ek bhi ansu nahi aane dunga. Yeh mera waada hain maa.

Rano smiled with tears and blessed them. Maan and geet got into the car and started their new journey of their life.

Precap: ……..


23 Responses to “Do i deserve ur love part 24”

  1. ruchs September 13, 2012 at 6:07 pm #

    That’s a lovely update!! The song fit the situation just perfectly!! Gosh!! Finally they are married!! yipppeeee!!! Loved Maan and Pari’s bond!! It was really emotional!!

  2. ramneek kaur September 13, 2012 at 6:25 pm #

    Great update
    Finally maaneet got married after lot of teasing
    emo bidai
    waiting for some hot sr

  3. adsshri September 13, 2012 at 6:39 pm #

    fabulous maaneet got married finally

  4. maneetmaniac September 13, 2012 at 9:35 pm #

    Superb update……

  5. trs1391 September 14, 2012 at 1:58 am #

    superb update maneet married bidayi and song fab update

  6. punam2712 September 14, 2012 at 5:04 am #

    Finally they are one.
    What a beautiful wedding
    Made me cry
    Both were so excited

  7. maaneet0887 September 14, 2012 at 9:01 am #

    tht was totally lovely ud dear do cont soon and eagerly waiting…. 🙂

  8. reshumayapari September 14, 2012 at 11:50 am #

    loved it
    wow atlast dono ki shaadi ho gayi

  9. DrRose September 14, 2012 at 12:05 pm #

    oh so they got married

    loved the way pinky said about sehra thing

    precap ???????

    waiting for the next

    much love Rose

  10. spvd September 14, 2012 at 2:03 pm #

    part 24
    lovely part dear………
    cont soon…………..

    Deepa (spvd)

  11. Meena September 14, 2012 at 3:30 pm #

    awesome dear loved it

  12. srirad September 14, 2012 at 4:04 pm #

    Commented on IF 🙂

  13. tia September 14, 2012 at 4:36 pm #

    wow awesome
    finally my maaneet got married wow..
    superb.. lvd it….
    precap waitingggggggggggggggg

  14. nats0109 September 14, 2012 at 5:36 pm #

    finally maneet married!!

  15. ruhakhan September 14, 2012 at 5:43 pm #

    toh wedding finally ho gayi
    do update soon

  16. janvi2006 September 14, 2012 at 5:44 pm #

    gr8 part…

    thanks for pm dear

  17. fffan123 September 15, 2012 at 3:35 am #

    Lovely part. Finally they are married. Continue soon.

  18. freya10 September 15, 2012 at 1:21 pm #

    lovely part

  19. soumi paul September 15, 2012 at 1:54 pm #

    great update
    finally they r married

  20. ritzy09 September 17, 2012 at 9:05 am #

    good update…jyo if u don’t mind I have a suggestion. Look in this FF, we know thye are not together in present….and past has been going on for a long time and at slow pace….i am not able to enjoy the good moemnts ebcause I know already that there is something sad coming up…so request you to quicken pace of past a little bit, so that we can come back to presnt and how Maan justifies or gets his love back…pls don’t mind, it is just a suggestion

    • abi September 19, 2012 at 2:31 am #

      agree with ritzy di
      plz jyo quicken up the past its really not having the impact and its also little boaring

  21. tanvi04 September 17, 2012 at 6:24 pm #


  22. padma October 8, 2012 at 3:54 am #

    lovely part

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