Ajeeb prem kahaani part 2

22 Oct



Maan dropped mona to her house and went to KM. when he stepped inside he saw angry dadi who sat on the couch waiting for her laadla pota. Maan tip toed and went inside and wished dadi.

Hii dadi..

Dadi gave him an angry glare and maan smiled at her cheekily. Maan sat beside dadi and rested his head on her lap and told sorry dadi, tomorrow we r going to shimla na, so I am completing the last minute work.

Dadi brushed his hair and told got and freshen up we will have dinner.

Immediately maan got up and asked what dadi u didn’t have dinner ?

Dadi nodded in a no and sweet sweet maan came to his MSK mode and asked what is this dadi? U have to take medicines on time and why u r doing all this? Why u r neglecting ur health?

Dadi made a baby face and told sorry I wont repeat it again.

Better’ told maan and looked at dadi seriously. Dadi too looked at him and both burst out into laughter. Just then some one came there.

Aww dadi I thought u will scold maan, but here u r laughing with him complained mona who came with her mom.

Maan rolled his eyes seeing mona’s nautanki. He went to mom and took blessings from her.

Maan beta I bought sweet for u, tomorrow u r going to shimla na. phir 2 months ke baad told mom and fed him sweet. Maan happily ate and sticked out his tongue at mona. Mona made a baby face and looked at dadi. Dadi smiled at her and told koi baat nahi mona main hu na, fridge mein aapke liye chocolate hain, go and take it.

Mona smiled widely and told u r the best dadi and she ran to the kitchen. She took the chocolate and came out and started eating like a kid.

Oyy zyada chocolate mat ka moti ho jaogi taunted maan.

Ha mujhe pata hain, aur waise bhi eating chocolate is good to health rather than black coffee told mona and giggled.

Mere black coffee ke baare mein kuch mat bolo told maan.

Same pinch, mere chocolate ke baare mein kuch mat bolo told mona and hi-fied with dadi.

Mona, maan beta se aisa koi baat karta hain kya. Hmmm?? Scolded mom.

Mona made a baby face and murmured sorry.

Later they all had dinner and maan finished his packing and dozed off. Here mona helped dadi in her packing and warned her dadi u should take medicines in time and eat food properly and on time.

Offo mona beta u too’ aap bhi maan se training lekar aye ho kya asked dadi annoyed by their continous dhamkis.

Ohh sholly dadi told mona making a cute face.

Dadi caressed her hair and told next week se aapko exams hain na, so all the best. If u r bored here then tell me I will arrange a ticket for u to shimla ok?

Ok dadi, I will surely come told mona.

Ok beta, raat bohot ho chuki hain. Good night wished dadi.

Good night dadi and happy journey told mona and hugged dadi. Mona left from there and dadi too slept.


Next day morning:


Maan got up and went to his gym asusual and started practicing his tai-chi. After that he went to washroom and took the shower and came out. He selected casuals to wear as he is going for holiday. After getting ready he climed down the stairs and saw dadi is waiting for him for breakfast.

Good morning dadi wished maan and kissed her forehead.

Good morning beta wished dadi too.

All set dadi, did u pack ur medicines and all asked maan.

Yes maan, mona did everything told dadi.

Oh so its ok. She might have packed all told maan and smiled.

After breakfast dadi and maan left for the airprort and reached there after 45 min drive. When he was about to go inside he got a msg to his mobile. He saw the msg and smiled, its from mona.

Hey good morning maan, I am so sorry u know na I was sleeping so I couldn’t come to airport. Waise tum na dadimaa ka khyal rakhna. HAPPY JOURNEY. Shimla jaane ke baad call karna. Tc.. msged mona.

Thanku madam, u sleep now I will call u after I reach shimla.

Mona read the msg and smiled and again she is back to her sleep.

Here maan and dadi boarded the flight and their journey started to shimla.


In shimla:


Geet got up very lazily and wished her babaji.

Good morning babaji. Ohh babaji I forgot aaj yash veerji is going to delhi for some business meeting, plz make his deal success. Ok babaji pakka na? prayed geet and smiled.

Hogaya tumara prayer? Asked meera who is coming inside.

Hey meer, tum itni jaldi ready kyun hogayi? Asked geet.

Pagal ladki time dekho 8:15am, humko college jaana hain told meer.

Oh ya ya aur u completed my assignment na? asked geet smiling cheekily.

Meer glared angrily at her. Geet smiled and hugged her and told I know meer u will complete my work too. I love u yaar.

Meer smiled at her antics and geet broke the hug and told to meera hey meer I wont be coming for first hour yaar. Main yash veerji ke saath airport jaa rahi hu. Thik hain.

Hmmm aaj ek aur bahana taunted meer.

Nahi meer sach mein told geet and pinched her throat.

Bas bas I know ur nautanki, thik hain second hour par aajana ok? Warned meer.

Ha meer surely I will come told geet and went to washroom to freshen up. She came out wearing a simple baby pink color salwar suit with matching ear rings and not to forget matching bangle which is so simple. She is looking not less than a angel.

Later geet went to airport and meera went to college. Geet met yash in the airport and at the same time delhi flight landed in shimla. Maan helped dadimaa to come out and they both took their luggage.

Here geet is talking with yash.

Veerji u have to come early ok? And I have prayed to babaji ur deal will be success. So don’t worry about that told geet and smiled at him sweetly.

Yash caressed her hair and told I don’t have any problem with business deal I am worried about u. why don’t u come with me, its just for 4 days na? asked yash.

No veerji meer will be alone here na, I will manage u don’t worry about me ok? Told geet.

Ziddi ho tum told yash and geet pouted for that. Yash smiled at her and told if u have any problem then call me ok? Don’t hesitate.

Ok veerji I will call u told geet.

Hmm.. then they heard the announcement for delhi flight. Yash kissed her forehead and bid her good bye and left from there.

Geet is feeling thristy so she thought of buying a water bottle when she turned back, she then bumped into something rather say someone before he hit the floor that person held her by her waist. Geet closed her eyes in fear and clutched his shirt tight.

Here maan and dadimaa who were coming out of the airport, then maan suddenly bumped into a girl who turned back. When she was about to fall down he saved her before falling and protected her in his safe arms. When he saw her face, her eyes are closed due to fear and she clutched his shirt tight.

Geet slowly opened her eyes and saw herself in a strangers arms. She saw his face and composed herself and came back to senses. Here maan too came back to his senses and saw that whole crowd is watching them, maan got embrassed and left her immediately. Oops that’s the big mistake he did. Maan left her immediately and geet fell down as she held his shirt maan too fell on top of geet.

Both maneet are shocked and dadi’s head is almost spinning.

Hey babaji kaun hain yeh gadha, dekhiye aap zara mera upar se hathiye told geet angrily.

But maan is not able to get up because of geet;s grip on his shirt.

If u leave my shirt then I can get up told maan.

Geet realized what she is doing and immediately released his shirt. Maan got up and stood on his feet. Maan offered his hand to geet but she gave an angey glare to him and she got up by herself.

Umm.. sorry miss.. I didn’t saw u coming told maan.

Sorry?? U made a big tamasha here and now saying sorry. Mujhe pata hain tum sab ladke ek jaise hain, jo karna hain kardo last mein ek sorry blasted geet angrily.

Maan got angry listening to this and told hello miss mera mistake nahi tha u turned back suddenly and bumped into me. But I told u sorry and u r shouting on me blasted maan.

Oh hello, what do u mean sab galti meri hain. Aap tho bade shareef ho na, ek acha sa dressing karne se kuch nahi hota. U should have manners to talk with girls told geet.

Maan’s anger rised how dare she tell that MSK don’t have manners. Here dadi who is listening all thinking that she is the first person to shout on maan and she thought if she don’t stop now then they do a war here.



5 Responses to “Ajeeb prem kahaani part 2”

  1. ayesha October 23, 2012 at 10:34 am #

    Amazing update….
    Milte hi fight shru…..continue soon…

  2. Chetna October 23, 2012 at 11:47 am #

    Hmmm finally Maaneet meet n den fight lol! Poor Maan! Saves Geet n she balmes him! Fantabulous update! Update soon! Well written! Khwaishfan (IF0

  3. adsshri October 25, 2012 at 4:50 am #

    wow kya baat hai maneet milte hi un dono li nok jok shuru kardiya haiiii

  4. Chetna October 25, 2012 at 10:11 am #

    hey dear..waiting 4 pt 3……:)

  5. tabby November 10, 2012 at 1:11 am #

    chalo shruat ladaai se
    hope jaldi pyaar ho
    waiting for next part

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