Rishtey Part 5

11 Feb

Maan, geet, annie, anita, tammy enjoyed their time with maan’s bua. Maan is feeling so happy to see his family. He always heard from his dad that his family is so big and he hurted all of them. Maan who was all lonely till today and don’t know how a family will be is now experiencing their love and care. He forgot all the pain which he suffered after his dad’s death. Till today his mom, tammy and naina was his life but now there are so many people who care for him and love. All these relations were with him from long but he don’t know and today when he came to know the value of relations, value of RISHTEY he felt so happy, a unknown happiness engulfed in him.

Next day morning was as usual busy, all elderly ladies were busy in kitchen and the girls were in their masti mood tammy too joined them. Maan had a smile on his face seeing his little sis happily enjoying with them. Suddenly the whole hall became silent, there comes maan’s dadaji from the morning walk. When maan saw him a small fear engulfed in him thinking will dadaji accept him or not. Thinking the same he and tammy went near dadaji, who now sat on the couch.

Dadaji called maan, dadaji looked up at them. Dadi came there with a coffee. Ji, yeh hamare Veer ke bache told dadi. Listening that dadaji stiffened a bit. He looked at maan and tammy blankly. They both bent to take blessings from dadaji, but he just got up angrily. Tammy feared seeing his angry face. He left from there giving an angry glare to maan and tammy.

Seeing his angry face tammy is literally shaking, everyone treated as princess but now she is facing someones anger. Though maan is famous for his angry but he was always a loving and caring brother. She is having tears in her eyes. Maan saw that and closed his eyes knowing how sensitive tammy is when it comes to something emotional. When they lost their dad it took 2 months for tammy to come back to normal.

Maan took tammy to his room, by now she is crying.

Bhai, we will go back I don’t want to stay here told tammy crying and hugged maan.

Princess look here asked maan and cupped her face. You know na dad hurted dadaji and others and came out of this house and married mom. So obviously dadaji will be angry on dad right? And he has right to show his anger on us told maan and kissed her forehead.

Tammy is little convinced but still sad seeing her dadaji’s anger. Will you talk with naina, shall I call her? asked maan.

Tammy nodded for a yes. Ok, I am calling her told maan and took out his mobile to call her. she is the one who can handle tammy when she is emotional or upset.

Hey maan, how is everything? Asked naina picking up the call.

Hii everything is fine, tammy wants to talk to you told maan and gave the phone to tammy.

Hello di came a voice of tammy which is sad, naina got alerted hearing her sad voice and understood why maan called now.

Hey princess how are you? Asked naina.

Di I want to come back told tammy.

What happened dear ? asked naina.

You know dadaji is angry on us and explained how angry he was. Naina heard everything silently.

Ohh so my princess is sad for that asked naina for which tammy nodded. Hmmm tammy dear, you should give some time for them and I know my tammy is strong and she will win her dadaji’s heart soon told naina trying to convince her. Tammy thought for a while and smiled at maan cutely.

Yes di I will told tammy happily. Maan sighed in relief seeing her smile. He can face everything but not his sis tears.

Tammy yaar, come fast shouted geet from outside.

Naina di, geet is calling me. I will talk to you later told tammy and gave the mobile to maan, she ran outside. Maan smiled at her.


So, how is everything there? I think you must be angry by now asked naina.

Yes, but I am here because of maa ad except dadaji all are talking to us nicely. So happy to see all of them now told maan.

Wow, that’s great. Hey maan, need to attend meeting now. I will call you in the evening told naina.

Ok no probs. Bye take care told maan.

You too bye told naina and cut the call.

Maan comes of the room to see geet, tammy and annie are talking and cracking jokes around. Its been long since maan is standing. Priya came to maan and asks about morning incident.

No maa, I am not angry. Its our responsibility to win dadaji’s heart told maan and smiled at his maa. Maan decided to go for a walk, but when he saw girls are playing cricket there. He is amused to see their playing skills. They are playing with small kids in the village. Geet was caught out but no she is not accepting and stood there making baby face to give her one another chance. An idea popped in maan’s mind to tease geet.

Maan went there and gathered childrens attention there.

Hello pyaare bachon, mera naam hain maan. kya main aapke saath cricket khel sakta hu? Asked maan.

Bachon, you should not allow him to play. From many years we are playing and I am the caption and I allow no one to play fumed geet.

Iss ghar ki bada beta hu main, so I have right to play retorted maan.

Ohh hello, I came first to this house. So I am first and you cant play that’s it told geet angrily.

Anita, annie and tammy are listening to their argument silently. They decided not to interfere. When geet and other children again started to play game, maan sat on the bench and he is facing geet’s back. Maan who is having chocolates in his pocket took them out. When geet is ready for bating, when a boy is bowling. He stopped in the middle and looked at maan with a smile on his face. Geet got confused and looked back. When geet is turning back, maan kept the chocolates inside his pocket and sat there innocently as if nothing happened.

Oyy why you stopped shouted geet. that boy again went back for bowling. Again maan took out the chocolates and that boy stopped. This happened for 2-3 times. Finally geet is frustrated and looked back this time before time and red-handedly caught maan bribing children with his chocolates. All the children ran to maan and took chocolates from him.

Bhaiya, you are only our caption told children. Maan smiled at them and winked at geet who is now fuming at him.

Geet, tumko bhi chocolate chahiye? Asked maan laughing out loud.

Geet gave an angry glare at him. maan is still laughing holding his stomach.

Tch tch, what happened geet? your nose is red, are you angry on me? asked maan innocently.

Geet who is holding cricket bat throwed on maan. maan caught it and smiled sweetly at her.

Aww thankyou so much geet, I was about to ask you told maan and started playing with children.

Geet went to annie and others who are watching their fight silently.

Tammy, tumko pata hain, your brother is one the dhust danav I have ever seen shouted geet angrily. But the 3 girls laughed out loud.

Precap: Ufffff geet totally mad at maan and thinking to take revenge.

Maan helping dadaji.


21 Responses to “Rishtey Part 5”

  1. divya February 11, 2013 at 6:05 pm #

    nyc part..
    chalo gud ki maan understood d situation n is ready to handle it calmly….

  2. Khwaishfan February 11, 2013 at 6:30 pm #

    hi thanks 4 da pm n superb update! Well written! update soon! Geet is a like a child!

  3. ffdeewani February 12, 2013 at 2:07 am #

    Hey Jyothi…nice update.

    Maan controlling is quite rare to see..hehehe

    This part so much reminds me of a movie and the track of the story too..but still there is essence of urs and waiting to see more of it, especially how u gonna twist and turn with ur style

  4. padma February 12, 2013 at 4:48 am #

    lovely part..
    waiting for more maaneet nok-jhok

  5. misha goel February 12, 2013 at 5:25 am #

    nice ud dr maneet nok jhok nd geet angry nw wil take revenge waitng 4 d next part dr

  6. Jasmine Rahul February 12, 2013 at 7:36 am #

    Loved Maan making Tammy understand d situation.Tho Naina is not there with them,its nice that he is not ignored by u.U r giving imp 2 her also.Maaneet fight was so funny.

  7. spvd February 12, 2013 at 8:31 am #

    hey Jyothi dear…….whats the link of this FF on IF? the previous username is closed whats the new username?

    Deepa (spvd)

  8. Ayesha February 12, 2013 at 9:18 am #

    Finally an update after a long long time….
    Loved it….
    Maan n tamny need to work hard to win dadajis heart….loved maneets argument….

  9. adsshri February 12, 2013 at 1:47 pm #

    Happy to see that u r back di with a bang 🙂
    Fabulous part….maan’s dadaji is angry on them and they decided to win his heart and maaneet fight were cute

  10. trs1391 February 12, 2013 at 3:38 pm #


  11. DrRose February 12, 2013 at 4:22 pm #

    hey jyoo… me too back …
    well awesome part …liked it
    dadaji angry on tammy and maan..
    tammy got scared ang told maan that they would leave as dadji won’t accept them
    but maan handled her and she talked to naina..
    naina nice girl …
    loved maaneet cute fight over bat and cricket…
    all enjoyed their fight lol
    precap./.. ops what sherni is up to ???
    will dadaji allow maan to let him help ???
    waiting eagerly for next

  12. amber February 12, 2013 at 4:57 pm #

    loved it

  13. punam2712 February 12, 2013 at 5:26 pm #


  14. spvd February 14, 2013 at 3:29 pm #

    part 5
    the bonding is so nice………..
    OMG Geet is too funny……………..
    Maan naughty………..
    cont soon dear…………….

    Deepa (spvd)

  15. payal February 28, 2013 at 2:33 am #

    Nice part..Maan teasing Geet..Waiting for more..

  16. Kiran Nautiyal March 4, 2013 at 8:29 am #

    Daadiji still angry but on whom…the person who broke all realtions and was his own son is no more….so what is the use of showing anger on his children without any fault….some times elders behave illogically…
    but thank God Maan didn’t lost his temper and kept his cool…loved how he is irritating Geet….
    thanx for pm…

  17. dona86 March 4, 2013 at 9:32 am #

    nice update
    maan controlled his anger!!!!!!!!!!
    maan teasing geet
    n geet angry on maan
    loved it….

  18. gill123 March 4, 2013 at 10:32 am #


  19. dia0n March 5, 2013 at 12:15 pm #

    awesome part .. same as KTKKHK

  20. Angel13 March 7, 2013 at 2:18 am #

    Superb update
    thanks for pm

  21. mandy15 March 12, 2013 at 6:10 pm #

    loved it dear:)

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