Do i deserve ur love part 31

3 Mar

 

Hearing the painful past of maneet and their baby sam had tears in her eyes.

Omg.. they suffered so much, having so much pain inside still maan is acting normal. He is really great. So the foundation is maan’s. MF.. MUSKAAN FOUNDATION.

Yes sam, muskaan died because of lack of money. So maan bhai established MF, so that no other kid die because of lack of money. The operation for children will be free in that foundation told pinky.

Pinky, you don’t worry. I will re-unite maan and geet again. Its my promise told sam and there is a determination in her eyes.

But that is not so easy sam, you don’t know how stubborn geet is told pinky but hoping one day her friend and her bhai will unite and live their life happily like before.

Sam turned to pinky.  Pinky there in nothing impossible in love. How much be stubborn geet be, she should bow her head in front of love told sam.

Pinky smiled and hugged her. Sam, I am there with you to help you in the mission unite maneet told pinky.

Thank you pinky told sam and smiled at herself. I too will see how geet wont come to maan thought sam and left from there with heavy heart. That day was a long day for everyone. Here adi is still searching for maan, when he came to know about aishu being his daughter, he is shattered once again with geet’s words.

“You are a murderer maan” those words are ringing in maan’s ears making his state more and more vulnerable. Maan stood on the middle of the road all alone once again lost in his darkness. He don’t know what is there in his destiny, when he is happy with his family god snatched his muskaan, his daughter, his princess from him. When again after 6 years when he came to know about aishu geet didn’t even allow him to take his daughter into his arms. She once again broke his heart with her words which are killing maan inwards.

Tears are not taking a name of stopping. He felt a hand on his shoulder and he knows who is it. He is only person who is there with him in all odds or say in each and every part of his life. He turned to look at adi who came in search of maan.

Maan hugged adi not able to control his pain, maan completely broke down and fell on his knees crying bitterly. Adi too is crying with maan, how destiny is so cruel to his friend.

Maan sambhalo apne aap ko told adi wiping maan’s tears.

Maan stood up and looked at adi with pain.

What is happening with me adi, I am not able to understand. Before my muskaan left me and then geet. Now my another daughter is 5 years old and I don’t know she exists. Adi uss din main apni muskaan ko aakri baar nai mil paya ab darr lag raha hain ki meri aishu ka yeh pehli mulakat aakri na ho jaye cried maan.

Maan aisa mat socho, you and geet will be happy once again I am sure told adi consoling his friend.

Maan smiled sadly and told you saw geet today na adi and you are still thinking geet will come to me. adi don’t have any words to say, but he has to do something so that geet comes to know the truth that maan is innocent. Adi dropped maan to his house and be offered maan that he will stay with him but maan asked him to go home saying he want to leave alone for some time. Adi didn’t pesture much as maan is so shattered and he needs to be alone for some time.

Here geet went to her room and closed the door not even hearing the call of rano. She thumped on the bed crying bitterly. Pari followed geet with aishu in her arms. When rano asked what happened to geet. Then pari said how they met maan jiju and how rude geet was.

Rano is angry on geet, 6 years passed even now she is angry on maan for no reason. Just for one mistake of maan she is punishing him for his life time. This is the heights of ridiculous.

Come out geet shouted rano going towards geet’s room.

Maa please leave me alone, I don’t want to talk anything now shouted geet back.

Cry geet cry, how much you want you cry because the pain you gave to maan is much more bigger than your tears told rano cursing her fate and her daughters.

I lost my muskaan because of maan maa cried geet.

Even maan lost his muskaan geet, she is yours and maan’s daughter not alone yours told rano and left from there haring no response from geet.

Here geet is crying and crying thinking about muskaan.

I cant forgive you maan, you are the reason for my muskaan’s death and I wont allow you to meet aishu. She is mine only mine and this time I cant lose her because of you thought geet and wiped her tears. That day no one is able to sleep, all are lost in their own thoughts.

Next day morning, geet woke up and she heard some music from aishu’s room. She rubbed her eyes and went to her room to see her dancing on the bed with her music system on. Geet got angry seeing that and switched off the music system splitting fire on aishu.

Aishu, how many time I told you don’t dance. I told you I hate dance and I don’t want you to repeat it again shouted geet. Aishu started crying hearing her maa’s shouting. Rano rushed to aishu’s room hearing geet’s shouting and saw aishu crying. Rano hugged aishu rubbing her back to calm her grand daughter. She shot an angry glare on geet. Geet left from there not able see her daughter crying that too because of her.

Aishu aise rote nahi, dekho good girls don’t cry tried rano to convince her.

Nani, I love dancing why maa don’t allow me asked aishu innocently.

Rano don’t know what to answer. How can she answer that her mother will remember her father because he is also a dancer. Rano still remember how muskaan use to dance with maan with her small small steps. Maan and muskaan’s bond is so special. Maan loves muskaan more than geet, his day starts with muskaan and ends with her, pampering her and fulfilling all her dreams. But one day he lost her. Here aishu is waiting for her nani’s answer but how can she tell so she kept quite and made her ready to school.

That day rano dropped aishu to school. Aishu is dull all the day as in her school annual day is coming soon and she want to participate in dance competition but her mother don’t allow her. Rano cant see her grand daughter all sad and an idea popped in her mind and smiled at herself.

Now I will see geet, how much you want your daughter not to meet her father but this time I wont listen you, father-daughter duo meet for sure thought rano and left from there to meet someone.

Precap: What rano is thinking?

Sam-geet meet..

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18 Responses to “Do i deserve ur love part 31”

  1. khwaishfan March 3, 2013 at 5:50 pm #

    hi thanks 4 da pm n intense update! Well written! poor Maaneet! update soon 🙂 Khwaishfan IF

  2. Ayeshap March 3, 2013 at 6:11 pm #

    Amazing update….
    Lovd it….poor maan…..suffering alot….

  3. soma March 3, 2013 at 10:34 pm #

    sahi kahe hai rano ne……..koi galti k bina hi maan ko saaza mil raha hai…..geet i hate u fr doing dis to maan………….

    superb n beautiful update…

    loved it very much…

    thank u very much fr d lovely update n fr d pm also…

    waiting fr d nxt prt eagerly…

    continue soon plz…

  4. trs1391 March 4, 2013 at 2:07 am #

    awsem update so mission maneet

  5. misha goel March 4, 2013 at 6:06 am #

    EMOTIONAL UD DR BOTH R IN PAIN

  6. DrRose March 4, 2013 at 7:44 am #

    sad part

    but liked it a lot …

    waiting for next

    thanks jyo for pm

  7. adsshri March 4, 2013 at 8:07 am #

    Awesome di

  8. gill123 March 4, 2013 at 10:14 am #

    Just loved it

  9. maanmaniac March 4, 2013 at 11:03 am #

    Gr8 part.
    Of course feeling bad for Maan and Aishu.
    But I hope Rano has a great plan.

    Sampa.

  10. maanmaniac March 4, 2013 at 11:06 am #

    Gr8 part.

    Of course feeling bad for Maan and Aishu.

    I hope Rano has some superb plans.

    Sampa

  11. Jasmine Rahul March 4, 2013 at 12:36 pm #

    Still geet is angry with Maan.Oh!But happy that now Rano wil try 2 unite Maan & Aishu

  12. nivedithaind91 March 4, 2013 at 1:55 pm #

    Hope i have read this already in IF !!! Very nice update !!! Rano finally has decided to help her daughter & son-in-law with their lives !!

  13. seemamary March 4, 2013 at 6:15 pm #

    Awesome update..

  14. Kiran Nautiyal March 4, 2013 at 6:20 pm #

    I think this update we have already read in IF…
    but it was nice reading again….
    Rano is right Geet is unnecessarily blaming Maan….

    awesome update….

    thanx for pm…

  15. payal March 5, 2013 at 4:51 am #

    Nice part..Why Geet believe that Maan is reason..Geet don’t listen Maan..I hope rano thinking is correct..Maybe Sam going to stay neat Maan to jealous Geet.

  16. spvd March 5, 2013 at 7:32 am #

    part 31
    nice part……….
    poor Maan…………..
    they all are in pain………
    cont soon dear…………….

    PS – plz open a thread on IF too for this dear………..will post the link in the thread………

    Deepa (spvd)

  17. Angel13 March 7, 2013 at 2:16 am #

    great update
    Poor Maan Geet is being unfair with Aishu why she always shouting at her
    she loved Muskaan more but she shouldn’t behave with Aishu like this and make her feel that her Maa doesn’t love her
    thanks for pm
    continue soon

  18. Pooja March 7, 2013 at 11:35 am #

    superb update
    i think geet is going overboard with her motherly feelings
    she is not d only one who lost muskaan
    maan was her father & he also lost her
    hope someone can make some sense in geet’s brain

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