Do i deserve ur love part 34

24 May

Still you didn’t forget this maan? why maan why you are making it difficult for me. I hate this helplessness. I don’t deserve your love maan, I really don’t. please don’t force me to come to you maan thought geet. when aishu’s dance completed there was a huge round of applause. Suddenly geet turned back as she is feeling instant gaze on her. She saw maan averted his gaze when she turned back and is clapping smiling at aishu. Aishu is searching for her nani and mumma. When she saw them, she smiled widely and waved at them.

The next second her eyes caught maan standing there at the back. Her smile broadened and she waved at him too. Maan smiled at her. its the results time and maan is praying aishu to win as he cant see her sad. And as expected aishu got the first prize and she is on cloud 9. Maan sighed and left from don’t want to upset geet more. After some time geet with rano and aishu left home. Geet is quite till the way to home. Even after reaching home she went to her room and locked herself.

She lied on the bed closing her eyes and in deep thought.

I am not able to understand anything, what should I do? Maan I just want to come to know and be in your arms forever. But I hurted you so much still why you love me so much maan? I know that I did a mistake by leaving you alone. That time I couldn’t think anything else other than muskaan and I was scared to loose our aishu too. Dad was also like you maan he don’t think anything before doing things after that he repent. I lost dad, then muskaan I cant afford to loose anyone in my life again maan and I cant change your life too. I know how you are? The fear of mine is overcoming my love maan. I am feeling so helpless seeing you in pain geet cried her heart out feeling helpless her fear is overcoming her love.

Here aishu wants to show her prize to her friend maan and she asked rano the same. Rano dropped aishu at maan’s house and came back and decided to talk to geet. Aishu rang the bell but the door is ajar. She opened the door and tip toed inside to surprise maan. Maan saw aishu and hid behind the door. Aishu looked here and there and felt sad not finding maan. But maan took her in his arms from back and kissed her cheek.

Aishu showed her prize to maan, he looked at her proudly and kissed her cheek appreciating her. Maan took her to kitchen and gave her an apple and thought to prepare pasta as she might be hungry.

Aishu is watching him thinking what he is doing. Aishu added salt in the pasta, added veges which maan chopped and started stirring it with her tiny tiny hands. Maan is just adoring her and helping her. when pasta is finished they both bend down to smell it.

Ummm yummy both said at a time and laughed at each other. Maan is feeding aishu and she is happily eating. Aishu took spoon from maan and offered him. Maan just stared at her, muskaan always does that. He became emotional and controlled his tears with great difficulty and ate from aishu’s hand. She smiled at him.

After eating maan cleaned up everything and when he came back to hall he saw aishu sleeping on the floor itself. Maan took her in his arms and settled himself on the couch with aishu sleeping on his chest. He kept caressing her hair. Aishu slept peacefully holding his collar in her tiny fists. Just then sam came to maan’s house to invite maan to her birthday party. She is happy to see aishu with maan.

Here geet came out of her room washing her face. when she didn’t find aishu she understood where she might be and went out to bring aishu with her. At the same time she is feeling tensed and nervous to face maan, today she want to talk with him and pour her heart in front of him. Today she want to put full stop to all their sufferings. She is excited to meet him now.

When geet parked the car in front of their house and climbed the steps. As the door is open she saw a beautiful sight in front of her, aishu sleeping in maan’s arms. She smiled at them and felt contended. When she was about to enter into the house, she saw sam coming out of the kitchen with a glass of water in her hand. Geet frowned seeing sam there and a pang of jealousy erupted in her. When sam bent down to clean the pasta on aishu’s dress, but geet assumed that she is cleaning maan’s shirt and that angered geet.

She knocked the door loudly and went inside before anyone react and took aishu from maan. Seeing her angry face maan thought geet is again angry on him for meeting aishu but that is not the true.

Seeing aishu holding maan’s collar tight in her fist, she released it hurriedly and left from there giving angry glares to both maan and sam. Poor maan is thinking she is angry on him again but sam understood she is angry on her and jealous as she is close to maan when she came there. Sam smiled widely and thought her plan is working and tomorrow’s bday party will take a step ahead in their relation.

The day passed peacefully, geet though didn’t talk to maan today but decided to talk to him later. The D-day has come. The birthday girl is so excited, today maan and geet will come face to face and seeing her reaction yesterday sam is more curious. Evening everyone gathered for the party. Geet along with aishu came there and after sometime maan too arrived. Sam smiled at him and she cut the cake. Sam first fed maan, geet looked at sam angrily, she just want to stangle sam with her bare hands. Here sam is observing geet from corner of her eyes and is thoroughly enjoying her restlessness.

Sam fed geet and aishu too. Sam smiled at her plan now and its time to execute.

Hiii friends, let us play a small game. Here there are chits with me. everyone should take one and what ever they gets they should do that or answer that question told sam.

All of them clapped and everyone took one chit.

Ok now lets start, hmmm with whom we will start asked sam and looked at aishu.

Yes we will start with aishu told sam and went near her. aishu smiled at sam broadly. When sam took the chit from aishu and opened it.

Aishu, whom do you love? Mumma or papa? Asked sam. Aishu looked at geet and geet smiled in return.

I love mumma told aishu. Maan smiled widely hearing aishu’s answer. Who don’t love his geet.

Why you don’t love your papa? Asked sam.

Aishu nodded in a no. why? Asked sam.

Bad daddy, he don’t love us. He never came to me told aishu which shocked everyone. Sam never expected this answer she looked at geet disgusted. Maan looked at aishu painfully. Geet is also shocked to listen aishu. She remembered once in anger she shouted on aishu telling he doesn’t loves us and he killed her didi. After that never that topic came and she never clarified to aishu about maan and geet never expected that aishu still remembers those words which she told in anger.

Maan immediately left from there not even glancing at geet once. Till today there was a small hope that he will get his geet and aishu back but today at this moment all his dreams are shattered and only pain engulfed him.


Precap: Rano slaps geet.

                Maan leaving delhi and accident.


4 Responses to “Do i deserve ur love part 34”

  1. maneetlover2013 May 24, 2013 at 6:44 pm #

    Amazing update….loved it alot….maan so hurt…..
    Waiting fr next part….

  2. kathrina Pheonix (Dumas) May 25, 2013 at 5:07 pm #

    Awesome update maan and geet are both being played by Sam hope their realize it soon awesome update beautifully done

  3. adsshri May 28, 2013 at 3:57 pm #

    Awesome part
    maan is so hurt his hope was shattered with one word waiting for next

  4. suzie July 13, 2013 at 11:25 am #

    awesome update

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