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Do i deserve ur love part 34

24 May

Still you didn’t forget this maan? why maan why you are making it difficult for me. I hate this helplessness. I don’t deserve your love maan, I really don’t. please don’t force me to come to you maan thought geet. when aishu’s dance completed there was a huge round of applause. Suddenly geet turned back as she is feeling instant gaze on her. She saw maan averted his gaze when she turned back and is clapping smiling at aishu. Aishu is searching for her nani and mumma. When she saw them, she smiled widely and waved at them.

The next second her eyes caught maan standing there at the back. Her smile broadened and she waved at him too. Maan smiled at her. its the results time and maan is praying aishu to win as he cant see her sad. And as expected aishu got the first prize and she is on cloud 9. Maan sighed and left from don’t want to upset geet more. After some time geet with rano and aishu left home. Geet is quite till the way to home. Even after reaching home she went to her room and locked herself.

She lied on the bed closing her eyes and in deep thought.

I am not able to understand anything, what should I do? Maan I just want to come to know and be in your arms forever. But I hurted you so much still why you love me so much maan? I know that I did a mistake by leaving you alone. That time I couldn’t think anything else other than muskaan and I was scared to loose our aishu too. Dad was also like you maan he don’t think anything before doing things after that he repent. I lost dad, then muskaan I cant afford to loose anyone in my life again maan and I cant change your life too. I know how you are? The fear of mine is overcoming my love maan. I am feeling so helpless seeing you in pain geet cried her heart out feeling helpless her fear is overcoming her love.

Here aishu wants to show her prize to her friend maan and she asked rano the same. Rano dropped aishu at maan’s house and came back and decided to talk to geet. Aishu rang the bell but the door is ajar. She opened the door and tip toed inside to surprise maan. Maan saw aishu and hid behind the door. Aishu looked here and there and felt sad not finding maan. But maan took her in his arms from back and kissed her cheek.

Aishu showed her prize to maan, he looked at her proudly and kissed her cheek appreciating her. Maan took her to kitchen and gave her an apple and thought to prepare pasta as she might be hungry.

Aishu is watching him thinking what he is doing. Aishu added salt in the pasta, added veges which maan chopped and started stirring it with her tiny tiny hands. Maan is just adoring her and helping her. when pasta is finished they both bend down to smell it.

Ummm yummy both said at a time and laughed at each other. Maan is feeding aishu and she is happily eating. Aishu took spoon from maan and offered him. Maan just stared at her, muskaan always does that. He became emotional and controlled his tears with great difficulty and ate from aishu’s hand. She smiled at him.

After eating maan cleaned up everything and when he came back to hall he saw aishu sleeping on the floor itself. Maan took her in his arms and settled himself on the couch with aishu sleeping on his chest. He kept caressing her hair. Aishu slept peacefully holding his collar in her tiny fists. Just then sam came to maan’s house to invite maan to her birthday party. She is happy to see aishu with maan.

Here geet came out of her room washing her face. when she didn’t find aishu she understood where she might be and went out to bring aishu with her. At the same time she is feeling tensed and nervous to face maan, today she want to talk with him and pour her heart in front of him. Today she want to put full stop to all their sufferings. She is excited to meet him now.

When geet parked the car in front of their house and climbed the steps. As the door is open she saw a beautiful sight in front of her, aishu sleeping in maan’s arms. She smiled at them and felt contended. When she was about to enter into the house, she saw sam coming out of the kitchen with a glass of water in her hand. Geet frowned seeing sam there and a pang of jealousy erupted in her. When sam bent down to clean the pasta on aishu’s dress, but geet assumed that she is cleaning maan’s shirt and that angered geet.

She knocked the door loudly and went inside before anyone react and took aishu from maan. Seeing her angry face maan thought geet is again angry on him for meeting aishu but that is not the true.

Seeing aishu holding maan’s collar tight in her fist, she released it hurriedly and left from there giving angry glares to both maan and sam. Poor maan is thinking she is angry on him again but sam understood she is angry on her and jealous as she is close to maan when she came there. Sam smiled widely and thought her plan is working and tomorrow’s bday party will take a step ahead in their relation.

The day passed peacefully, geet though didn’t talk to maan today but decided to talk to him later. The D-day has come. The birthday girl is so excited, today maan and geet will come face to face and seeing her reaction yesterday sam is more curious. Evening everyone gathered for the party. Geet along with aishu came there and after sometime maan too arrived. Sam smiled at him and she cut the cake. Sam first fed maan, geet looked at sam angrily, she just want to stangle sam with her bare hands. Here sam is observing geet from corner of her eyes and is thoroughly enjoying her restlessness.

Sam fed geet and aishu too. Sam smiled at her plan now and its time to execute.

Hiii friends, let us play a small game. Here there are chits with me. everyone should take one and what ever they gets they should do that or answer that question told sam.

All of them clapped and everyone took one chit.

Ok now lets start, hmmm with whom we will start asked sam and looked at aishu.

Yes we will start with aishu told sam and went near her. aishu smiled at sam broadly. When sam took the chit from aishu and opened it.

Aishu, whom do you love? Mumma or papa? Asked sam. Aishu looked at geet and geet smiled in return.

I love mumma told aishu. Maan smiled widely hearing aishu’s answer. Who don’t love his geet.

Why you don’t love your papa? Asked sam.

Aishu nodded in a no. why? Asked sam.

Bad daddy, he don’t love us. He never came to me told aishu which shocked everyone. Sam never expected this answer she looked at geet disgusted. Maan looked at aishu painfully. Geet is also shocked to listen aishu. She remembered once in anger she shouted on aishu telling he doesn’t loves us and he killed her didi. After that never that topic came and she never clarified to aishu about maan and geet never expected that aishu still remembers those words which she told in anger.

Maan immediately left from there not even glancing at geet once. Till today there was a small hope that he will get his geet and aishu back but today at this moment all his dreams are shattered and only pain engulfed him.


Precap: Rano slaps geet.

                Maan leaving delhi and accident.


Do i deserve ur love part 33

9 May

Part 33


One side sam and rano are busy in planning sam’s birthday party so that maan and geet can come close.

Aunty, I am not able to understand what should I do now? I invited geet but will maan come? Asked sam nervously to rano who rolled her eyes as this is the nth time sam asking the same question.

Sam, we will plan something. First we should make them face each other, then we can do something told rano patting her cheek.

Done aunty I will inform maan too about party as well as adi and pinky too so that they can be a helping hand told sam.

Yes that’s a good idea and still one week is left, some idea will strike till then told rano smiling at her. So her second plan is also success, now geet will face maan and vice versa.

It was Monday morning, aishu is in no mood to go to school. She is still on the bed rubbing her eyes and cutely pouting at her mama who is staring at her.

What happened? Today my aishu is so lazy? Asked geet tying her messy hair which is falling on her face.

Mumma, I don’t want to go to school today told aishu making puppy face to melt her mumma.

Acha? Why? Asked geet.

Don’t know mumma, please mumma requested aishu. Geet is melting from one side, as aishu never ask that she will not go to school.

But what about your homework and all? Asked geet.

Mumma, I will ask rohan told aishu excitedly. Geet’s face became dull with the name of rohan but she cant tell aishu not to talk with him. And children don’t have anything to do with all the matters. So geet agreed aishu to stay at home only for today. Aishu nodded happily, geet went to her room to get ready for office as she had to attend the clients today for the presentation.

Geet went to her office, rano and aishu are at home. Aishu is practicing her dance with the help of sam as geet is not there at home. Maan is busy in hospital so he didn’t come to meet aishu. Later geet came back in the afternoon as the meeting got over and her aishu is also at home, so she decided to spend sometime with aishu and take her out for shopping.

Geet took aishu for lunch, after that she took her for shopping. Aishu is all excited to send the time with her mumma, after coming to delhi she saw geet is always serious and even shouted on her for dancing. Today she took her for lunch outside.

Mumma I want icecream asked aishu pointing towards icecream corner.

Geet smiled and took her to parlour, she made aishu sit on the chair and she went to order icecream. But before she order anything, icecream is on their table making geet confused and aishu excited.

Excuse me I didn’t order anything told geet looking at that man confused. That man turned back and looked at geet smiling. Geet is shocked to see its maan who brought icecream for them. Though aishu saw maan but didn’t react as her mumma will get angry if she come to know she is learning dance. Maan winked at aishu without geet’s knowledge. Aishu smiled widely at him.

Aishu come we should go now told geet, but aishu made a baby face and showed her icecream is not finished yet. Geet sighed in helplessness. Maan looked at geet lovingly moving away from them, geet didn’t look at him for once this made him sad but composed himself and looking at them till they left ice cream parlour. Aishu is running here and there and geet is following her.

Aishu was about to fall on the ground when geet caught her immediately. Maan saw her falling and ran towards them but stopped seeing aishu in geet’s arms securely. Maan is looking at them longingly, geet sensed maan near her and turned aside, their eyes met. She can see his longing for her and love for aishu. Geet averted her gaze immediately and went to dresses mall for aishu.

Aishu is making geet’s life hell by not liking any dress.

Aishu, what ever I am showing you are not liking anything. Tell me what you wany? Asked geet placing her hands on hips.

Aishu’s eyes caught a white color frock and she liked instantly.

Mumma called aishu and pointed towards that dress. Geet smiled and asked the sales girl to pack that dress. Geet selected few more dresses and went to pay the bill. By the time she reached bill counter maan already paid their bill.

Ma’am your bill is already paid, here is your purchase told that man and gave their shopping bag. Geet looked at maan who is standing outside the shop and flashing his smile. Geet is getting angry with every passing second. Geet took the baggage and left from there hurriedly with aishu.

Geet went to parking lot and drove back to home. When geet reached home she sighed. They rested for some time. Aishu got up in the evening and saw her nani is making her fav pakodas.

Nani pakoda exclaimed aishu excitedly. Rano smiled at her and filled plate with pakodas and gave to aishu. Aishu is having pakodas happily.

Later pari took aishu to her dance class, unknown to them even geet is also following them. when pari with aishu entered into maan’s house geet stood there speechless. Even her maa lied to her, this is the reason she never entertained in coming to delhi again but this job of hers made her come to delhi.

Geet barged into maan’s house angrily and the scene which she saw in front of her made her froze in her tracks. Maan and aishu are dancing, a smile playing on their lips. Maan took aishu in his arms and kissed her forehead.

My aishu is dancing very well, so ready for competition asked maan.

Aishu nodded excitedly but her face became sad suddenly making geet and maan frown. Geet want to reach her daughter and take her in his arms.

Friend, I am tensed. What if I loose in the competition? Asked aishu sadly.

You will never lose aishu, because its your father who is with you thought geet, but next second her face hardened and scolded herself for thinking like that.

No dear, don’t think like that. If you win you will be happy and if you lose also you should be happy because you will get to learn and understand more and after that you will make sure that you will not commit that mistake again. Don’t think of winning and losing at the start. Just concentrate on you dance, that’s it told maan smiling and kissed her forehead. Aishu too smiled at him and kissed his cheek.

Geet walked towards them and took aishu from maan. with the sudden entry of geet both maan and pari are shocked and aishu is scared thinking her mother will shout at her.

Pari take aishu with you and sit in the car told geet not looking at them.

Pari obeyed geet and took aishu with her. aishu looked at maan sadly making his heart bleed.

I didn’t expect this from you maan told geet coldly. Maan turned his face away and didn’t talk anything.

You are trying to separate mother-daughter? Asked geet in dis-belief as she never expected maan to do such thing.

Maan looked at geet shocked.

You are thinking like this geet? asked maan not able to bear her accusation.

Don’t act maan, what were you doing all the time meeting my daughter behind my back. And what a tragedy my maa and sister are against me and supporting you told geet.

Why will I try to separate you both geet when I want you and aishu in my life again told maan.

Bas maan I have already told you aishu is my daughter and she will be mine forever warned geet and left from there leaving a heart broken maan. Maan collapsed on the ground and his face shows only pain. He is trying to convince geet but she is not at all ready to listen.

Pari who forgot her mobile there listened geet’s accusations.

No di, enough is enough I cant see you both like this. You have to know the truth, the truth of what mamaji did thought pari and left from there. Geet, aishu and pari reached home. Geet is still angry but didn’t show it on aishu as she is a kid and don’t know anything. She though to confrot rano later about this matter.

Maan walked towards his gym and doing his work out angry on himself for not gaining geet’s trust.

Kuch bhi hojaye geet, I will get back my wife and my child. I am ready to bear anything thought maan.

Next day morning, it was aishu’s dance competition. Geet is not ready to come but seeing aishu’s face she cant deny her. They all got ready and went to school. Performance have started one by one and its turn of aishu. When aishu started with her dance, in her each and every move she can see muskaan. The same dance which muskaan did for maan to surprise him.

Still you didn’t forget this maan? why maan why you are making it difficult for me. I hate this helplessness. I don’t deserve your love maan, I really don’t. please don’t force me to come to you maan thought geet. when aishu’s dance completed there was a huge round of applause. Suddenly geet turned back as she is feeling instant gaze on her. She saw maan averted his gaze when she turned back and is clapping smiling at aishu.


Precap: Maan: You should have told aishu that her father is DEAD geet.

               Rano slaps Geet

Do i deserve ur love part 32

8 Mar

Now I will see geet, how much you want your daughter not to meet her father but this time I wont listen you, father-daughter duo meet for sure thought rano and left from there to meet someone. Rano took taxi from aishu’s school and went to meet her son-in-law maan. She very well knows after what happened yesterday maan might be lost in their past and blaming himself for what happened.

When rano stepped inside maan’s house, she saw nothing is changed. Not even a single thing, everything is as per geet’s and muskaan’s choice. Rano smiled sadly and went to maan’s room, she didn’t find him there.

May be he is in muskaan’s room thought rano and went to muskaan’s room which is filled with her toys and her pictures. Maan sat near the bed his face in his palms. Whole night he didn’t sleep, he sat in muskaan’s room feeling dejected, not knowing how much he has to suffer more. He want to hug his daughter aishu and shower her all his love but here he cant tell her he is her daddy.

“Daddy” such a beautiful word. “I love you daddy” whenever muskaan says this to maan, his heart swelled with happiness and proud. But one day he lost her, he is not murderer. How can he kill his own child, he tried everywhere for money. He was ready to beg raj because nothing is important for him other than his muskaan, but nothing worked.

After geet left him, one day raj came to maan’s house to return his money. Then told everything what happened. He didn’t cheat him but it was geet’s mamaji who blackmailed him not to give money to them. That was the main reason for his rejection of giving money on his engagement day when he came for money. But what is the use of knowing the truth or getting money now, so maan immediately rejected to take money, but raj was adamant and said he is his friend and help him to reach geet and tell everything happened. Raj deposited the money in maan’s account.

Once he was famous for his dance school and he did programs in everywhere possible in India he got into bollywood so easily and in no time he became successful choreographer. Maan made sure that his name don’t come out as he don’t want any media hype.

Days to years passed, one fine day he met geet again. Her love for maan changed into hatred to such extent that she didn’t tell about his own daughter. The past is flashing in front of him, which is making him more and more depressed and making his life more dark. He sensed someone opened the door allowing the sun light to enter in the room making the darkness fade away. Maan looked up with his heavy eyes and saw rano there.

His heart overjoyed to see his MIL, whom he treated as his mother there.

Maa a whisper came out of his mouth making rano cry seeing her sons state. Why he is suffering for her brother’s deeds.

Rano came and sat next to maan, hugging her son tight trying to take away his pain and give him some relief.

Maan beta, what is all this? Cried rano.

Maa, aishu is my daughter is the first thing maan asked. Mujhe kyun nahi bataya maa cried maan in her embrace.

Maa, am I that cruel that no one told about this. How I survived these many years I don’t know maa. Mujhe meri geet ko wapas la do maa. I want my geet cried maan resting his head on her lap. Even rano is also crying with him.

Maan, we should tell truth to geet told rano wiping her tears. Maan instantly lifted his head and stared at her.

No maa, geet cant handle this. Life long she will feel guilty thinking she is responsible for what happened told maan.

Maan, till how long we will hide this from her. day by day her actions are getting worst. I will never ever forgive bhai for this cried rano.

What is there to forgive maa, we lost our muskaan and he met with an accident and is bed ridden now. chakar bhi hum kuch nai kar sakte maa told maan.

Rano wiped maan’s tears and told finally why she came here.

Maan, I want to tell you something told rano.

Maan looked at rano.

Maan you should be aishu’s dance teacher as she is so much interested in her school competition told rano.

Maan is first thrilled then hesitated thinking how can he? What if geet comes to know about this.

But maa’ maan was cut by rano.

Maan, this is the only way to meet your daughter and I cant see you in pain. Tum kuch bhi kaho maan mai zaroor geet ko sach batakar hi rahungi. Please fulfill your daughter’s wish requested rano.

Even thought maan is hesitant thinking geet don’t like it. But his heart is saying to accept so that he can see his daughter daily. Maan smiled slightly at rano which is enough for her to know maan is ok with this idea.

Maan, be ready in the evening to meet your daughter told rano and kissed her forehead. Maan got up from the floor so as rano. He hugged and thanked for trusting him and allowing him to meet his daughter. Maan forgot all his worries and pains and is so excited to meet his aishu. Rano left from there smiling as her first plan to unite father-daughter is successful.

Day passed so slowly for maan, he cancelled all his appointments for that day and is waiting for the clock to strike 3pm. Now the time is 2:30 pm and maan is already waiting for aishu near school where stil one hour time is there for aishu to complete her classes. Anxiety is all over written on his face. He is rubbing his hands and looking over the entrance gate again and again.

He saw rano getting down from an auto, maan saw her and smiled. Rano paid to the auto driver and walked towards maan.

Maan when did you come? Asked rano.

Half hour back told maan and smiled. Rano didn’t tell anything knowing how excited he is. The time passed and finally aishu came out running to her nani. Rano smiled and took her in her arms. Maan smiled at them.

Nanii kissed aishu on her cheek.

Meri bachi kaisi hai, aapko ek surprise hai told rano.

What nani? Asked aishu excitedly.

Rano turned towards maan and told he is your dance teacher aishu.

At first aishu got so excited and is smiling widely. But soon her face became gloomy. Maan and rano didn’t miss the sadness in her face.

What happened beta? Asked rano.

Mumma gussa karegi told aishu sadly, even with aishu maan too became sad knowing why geet hates dance. She hates everything which relates maan.

We will not tell to mumma now, when your program finishes that time we will tell. Ok? Told rano.

Par nani, you told we should not lie to anyone? Asked aishu innocently.

We are not lying beta, we are not telling to your mumma that’s it rano convinced aishu and she accepted happily.

Aishu looked at maan and smiled.

Hello aishu wished maan.

Hello baby, I am maan introduced maan himself.

I am aishwarya told aishu and smiled at him again.

Maan talked with aishu animatedly telling her different things while going to his house. Aishu loved maan instantly and she too talking with him. Rano told she has some work and she will be back in an hour or so. Maan just nodded taking aishu inside.

Maan made aishu sit on the couch and he went to kitchen to bring juice for her.

Aishu, this is for you told maan and gave her juice. Aishu had it as she is feeling hungry too.

What should I call you? Asked aishu looking at maan with her innocent eyes. Maan’s heart screamed to call him as dad but outside he just smiled and told whatever you like.

Aishu patted her chin thinking.

I will call you as friend told aishu and smiled at him.

Maan kissed her forehead and he took her to his dance room, where he and muskaan use to practice dance before.

Days passed to weeks. Aishu daily visit maan and learn dance for her school competition. They use to play on Sundays and maan use to take her to park. Rano lied to geet that she is taking aishu to music classes as she has music competition in her school and aishu is very excited to participate. Though she felt bad for lying to geet but she want to unite father and daughter first.

Aishu became so close to maan, that in the evening maan use to pick her up daily and take her with him to ice cream parlour some days, to park or they just go on a ride on his bike. She use to tell everything to him what happened in school. This whole month is not less than a bliss to maan, he forgot everything about his past and just enjoying with his aishu. Even adi and pinky too observed change in him and they are happy for him. sometimes maan takes both rohan and aishu outside so that both friends enjoy.

On the other hand sameera shifted to the same apartment as of geet, so that she can befriend with geet. Though geet didn’t talk to her much as she was busy with her office work and all but she liked sam for her chirpiness. Sam used to spend most of her Sundays with geet as she is staying alone there. It is one of such Sunday, rano took aishu for her dance class and geet is busy in cooking while sam is munching an apple and talking with geet.

Geet, next Sunday is my birthday. You and aishu darling has to come. Ok? Told sam.

Ok sam I will come smiled geet.

Sam made a plan to call maan too so that they both can meet. Sam patted for back for her plan and smiled at geet happily.


Precap: Aishu with maan. Will geet sees them??? Shocked

Do i deserve ur love part 31

3 Mar


Hearing the painful past of maneet and their baby sam had tears in her eyes.

Omg.. they suffered so much, having so much pain inside still maan is acting normal. He is really great. So the foundation is maan’s. MF.. MUSKAAN FOUNDATION.

Yes sam, muskaan died because of lack of money. So maan bhai established MF, so that no other kid die because of lack of money. The operation for children will be free in that foundation told pinky.

Pinky, you don’t worry. I will re-unite maan and geet again. Its my promise told sam and there is a determination in her eyes.

But that is not so easy sam, you don’t know how stubborn geet is told pinky but hoping one day her friend and her bhai will unite and live their life happily like before.

Sam turned to pinky.  Pinky there in nothing impossible in love. How much be stubborn geet be, she should bow her head in front of love told sam.

Pinky smiled and hugged her. Sam, I am there with you to help you in the mission unite maneet told pinky.

Thank you pinky told sam and smiled at herself. I too will see how geet wont come to maan thought sam and left from there with heavy heart. That day was a long day for everyone. Here adi is still searching for maan, when he came to know about aishu being his daughter, he is shattered once again with geet’s words.

“You are a murderer maan” those words are ringing in maan’s ears making his state more and more vulnerable. Maan stood on the middle of the road all alone once again lost in his darkness. He don’t know what is there in his destiny, when he is happy with his family god snatched his muskaan, his daughter, his princess from him. When again after 6 years when he came to know about aishu geet didn’t even allow him to take his daughter into his arms. She once again broke his heart with her words which are killing maan inwards.

Tears are not taking a name of stopping. He felt a hand on his shoulder and he knows who is it. He is only person who is there with him in all odds or say in each and every part of his life. He turned to look at adi who came in search of maan.

Maan hugged adi not able to control his pain, maan completely broke down and fell on his knees crying bitterly. Adi too is crying with maan, how destiny is so cruel to his friend.

Maan sambhalo apne aap ko told adi wiping maan’s tears.

Maan stood up and looked at adi with pain.

What is happening with me adi, I am not able to understand. Before my muskaan left me and then geet. Now my another daughter is 5 years old and I don’t know she exists. Adi uss din main apni muskaan ko aakri baar nai mil paya ab darr lag raha hain ki meri aishu ka yeh pehli mulakat aakri na ho jaye cried maan.

Maan aisa mat socho, you and geet will be happy once again I am sure told adi consoling his friend.

Maan smiled sadly and told you saw geet today na adi and you are still thinking geet will come to me. adi don’t have any words to say, but he has to do something so that geet comes to know the truth that maan is innocent. Adi dropped maan to his house and be offered maan that he will stay with him but maan asked him to go home saying he want to leave alone for some time. Adi didn’t pesture much as maan is so shattered and he needs to be alone for some time.

Here geet went to her room and closed the door not even hearing the call of rano. She thumped on the bed crying bitterly. Pari followed geet with aishu in her arms. When rano asked what happened to geet. Then pari said how they met maan jiju and how rude geet was.

Rano is angry on geet, 6 years passed even now she is angry on maan for no reason. Just for one mistake of maan she is punishing him for his life time. This is the heights of ridiculous.

Come out geet shouted rano going towards geet’s room.

Maa please leave me alone, I don’t want to talk anything now shouted geet back.

Cry geet cry, how much you want you cry because the pain you gave to maan is much more bigger than your tears told rano cursing her fate and her daughters.

I lost my muskaan because of maan maa cried geet.

Even maan lost his muskaan geet, she is yours and maan’s daughter not alone yours told rano and left from there haring no response from geet.

Here geet is crying and crying thinking about muskaan.

I cant forgive you maan, you are the reason for my muskaan’s death and I wont allow you to meet aishu. She is mine only mine and this time I cant lose her because of you thought geet and wiped her tears. That day no one is able to sleep, all are lost in their own thoughts.

Next day morning, geet woke up and she heard some music from aishu’s room. She rubbed her eyes and went to her room to see her dancing on the bed with her music system on. Geet got angry seeing that and switched off the music system splitting fire on aishu.

Aishu, how many time I told you don’t dance. I told you I hate dance and I don’t want you to repeat it again shouted geet. Aishu started crying hearing her maa’s shouting. Rano rushed to aishu’s room hearing geet’s shouting and saw aishu crying. Rano hugged aishu rubbing her back to calm her grand daughter. She shot an angry glare on geet. Geet left from there not able see her daughter crying that too because of her.

Aishu aise rote nahi, dekho good girls don’t cry tried rano to convince her.

Nani, I love dancing why maa don’t allow me asked aishu innocently.

Rano don’t know what to answer. How can she answer that her mother will remember her father because he is also a dancer. Rano still remember how muskaan use to dance with maan with her small small steps. Maan and muskaan’s bond is so special. Maan loves muskaan more than geet, his day starts with muskaan and ends with her, pampering her and fulfilling all her dreams. But one day he lost her. Here aishu is waiting for her nani’s answer but how can she tell so she kept quite and made her ready to school.

That day rano dropped aishu to school. Aishu is dull all the day as in her school annual day is coming soon and she want to participate in dance competition but her mother don’t allow her. Rano cant see her grand daughter all sad and an idea popped in her mind and smiled at herself.

Now I will see geet, how much you want your daughter not to meet her father but this time I wont listen you, father-daughter duo meet for sure thought rano and left from there to meet someone.

Precap: What rano is thinking?

Sam-geet meet..

Do i deserve ur love part 30

28 Oct

(Listen to this song while reading )

 No, my daughter cant leave me told maan and tried to wake up muskaan. Hearing no response from her he collapsed on the chair and hugged muskaan tight and cried. Adi too hugged maan and cried.

Adi, how can my muskaan leave me and go. Please tell her to wake up cried maan, hugging her daughter tight.

Maan, please sambhalo apne aap ko please told adi, tears were flowing down his cheeks. Muskaan is very close to him and pinky. Here after getting the news pinky rushed to hospital. She saw geet just sat there like a statue without any emotions. Pinky rushed to geet and placed her hand on her shoulder. But geet didn’t move. This worried pinky and cupped her face.

Geet, look at me. Once look at me cried pinky. Geet looked at pinky with no expression on her face. Geet pointed towards muskaan. Pinky cried seeing her friends condition. Rano and pari asked geet to cry but she just sat there silently. Inside maan is crying his heart out.

Maan think about geet once told adi.

Then maan looked at adi. Go maan she needs you told adi.

Maan placed muskaan on the bed and rushed to geet. Maan sat infront of geet and looked at her with teary eyes. Seeing maan she hugged him tight and they both cried. They wanted geet to cry, and after seeing maan, geet couldn’t hold back her pain.

Its been a week their muskaan left them. There is only darkness all around. Geet sat on the bed caressing her stomach.

Geet (st): The history has repeated again, in past I lost my dad and now I lost my daughter. Kyun mere saath aisa ho raha hain babaji, kya kiya maine. Maan wont change I am sure. He wont think of consequences and do what ever he thinks. This is all happened because he helped his friend. If he didn’t help his friend then we could have saved our muskaan. I am sorry baby I am so sorry.

Geet still remembers how muskaan was calling maan when she was breathing heavily. She is in so grief that she didn’t think what she is talking.

Maan, you killed my daughter, you killed my daughter mumbled geet.

Here maan is in the hall sitting alone hugging muskaan’s pic. He remembered geet is alone in their room. He placed the pic on the table and went to their room to see what geet is doing.

When he entered he is shocked to see geet is packing her bag.

Geet, where are you going? Asked maan.

Aapka matlab? Asked geet angrily.

I mean why you are packing bag? Asked maan.

Geet didn’t answer and continued packing her things. Maan is confused and held geet’s hand but geet jerked his hand and looked at him angrily.


Don’t don’t touch me shouted geet.


Geet held his collar you killed my daughter maan, you killed my daughter. Jo kuch bhi hua wo sab tumari wajah se hua. My daughter didn’t died because of her health, she died because of you. Jab wo uski aakri saans le rahi thi daddy daddy karke sirf aapko pukar rahi thi.

Geet muskaan is my life how can you say that? Asked maan.

No no no, jab tumne uss raj ko help kiya tha tab tumne kisi ke baare mein soha. Nahi na. agar tum uss din mere aur muskaan ke baare mein socha tho yeh sab nahi hota. For outside world you may be a great friend and you may help to other without thinking of anything. But for me you are murderer of my daughter muskaan shouted geet.


When muskaan left us from that minute there is no relation between us. Samjhe tum?? Shouted geet and cried. Maan stood there like a statue looking painfully at geet. Tears were flowing from their eyes endlessly. From the moment their muskaan left them, everything has changed into darkness. Geet is carrying their baby but she is afraid to tell to maan. And she don’t want anything happen to this baby of hers. So she decided to leave maan forever.

Geet packed her bag and took in her hand and once last time glanced at maan and left from there not able to see his painful face and tears in his eyes. Maan looked at geet who is leaving him, he didn’t dare to stop because of mistake is his.

He collapsed on his knees and hid his face in his palms and cried his heart out. The pain today he is in is not expressed in words. First he lost his daughter and now his geet left him and gone.


zindagi mein koyi kabhi aaye na rabba

one shouldn’t come in anybody’s life, o god

aaye jo koyi toh phir jaaye na rabba

and if comes, should never go away

dene ho gar mujhe baad mein aansoo’

if somebody want to give me tears later

toh pehele koyi hasaaye na rabba – 2

then one shouldn’t make me smile first


Maan sat there on his knees with a picture of geet and muskaan close to his heart.


Why god why you did this to me? everything was going fine then why you took off my daughter. Kya bigada hain hum aapka. And now my geet left me alone and went away. Shayad meri zindagi mein khushiyon ke liye koi jagah nahi hain thought maan and smiled sadly.



dil ke jo armaan the, dil mein hi reh gaye

the desires/wishes of heart remained in heart itself

aashiqui jo kee toh ham, ashqon mein beh gaye

i love somebody, and now i drift in tears

gham ka fasaana hai, dard ye puraana hai

this is the story of sorrow, this pain is old

itna bhi koyi yaad aaye na rabba

one shouldn’t miss somebody so much

zindagi mein koyi kabhi aaye na rabba
aaye jo koyi toh phir jaaye na rabba
dene ho gar mujhe baad mein aansoo’
toh pehele koyi hasaaye na rabba


Aapko tho pata hain na babaji ki meri muskaan aur meri geet ek din mujhe chodkar chale jayenge. Par kyun aapne mujhe itni khushiyan di jab sab kuch katam ho jaane wala tha. Kyun babaji kyun cried maan. His pain is beyond limits today.

Meri geet bhi mujhe samaj nahi payi. Main meri muskaan ko maar diya kya babaji. Aap hi boliye cried maan. Mujhe itna khushiyan kyun di aapne babaji, kyun??? Screamed maan.

ashq aankhon mein bhare hain, jigar jalta hai

my eyes are filled with tears, my heart is burning

kya qayaamat hai, kya qayaamat hai

what a distruction is this

kya qayaamat hai’

what a distruction is this

bhari barsaat mein ghar jalta hai

in the heavy rain a home is burning

yahi sochta hoon kaise usko bhoolaaunga

i always think that how should i forget her

na woh kabhi aayegi, na usse bhool paaunga

she will never come to me, and i will never forget her

jeene ka thheekaana hai na marne ka bahaana hai

there is no source for what i should live, and there is no excuse to die as well

itna bhi koyi bhi sataaye na rabba

one should tease that much, o god

zindagi mein koyi kabhi aaye na rabba
aaye jo koyi toh phir jaaye na rabba
dene ho gar mujhe baad mein aansoo’
toh pehele koyi hasaaye na rabba
zindagi mein koyi kabhi aaye na rabba
pehele koyi hasaaye na rabba

Muskaan aapne hame akele chodke chale gaye, kyun beta kyun?? Aap apni papa se pyaar nahi karte haina? Aapki mama bhi mujhe chodke chali gayi. Aapki mama ki bolo beta mere paas aajaane ke liye. Pls geet come back to me. I cant live without you geet, I cant.. cried maan and collapsed on the floor and hugged their photo and cried cried. His eyes turned red due to continous crying. But the pain is not reducing. Does his geet ever come back in his life again?

Here geet took rano and pari and left to London as she got posting there. Rano and pari tried to convince geet but she is nowhere to listen. They reached London and geet took promise from rano and pari that they should never contact maan and should not tell about her pregnancy. They nodded having no other option.

Here pinky is angry on geet for doing like this, leaving maan all alone who is in pain. Pinky and adi took care of maan. Maan didn’t had any food for days and his health became worst. But pinky after giving birth to rohan, maan again came back to his normal self. Maan worked hard to earn money. He worked in a construction company and at the same time did choreography in different bollywood movies. Now maan singh khurana is famous choreographer. For all the top movie he is the choreographer. But his name or his picture never came out. He maintained a low profile always. Now maan is a multi milloneir.

~~ Present ~~

Hearing the painful past of maneet and their baby sam had tears in her eyes.

Omg.. they suffered so much, having so much pain inside still maan is acting normal. He is really great. So the foundation is maan’s. MF.. MUSKAAN FOUNDATION.

Yes sam, muskaan died because of lack of money. So maan bhai established MF, so that no other kid die because of lack of money. The operation for children will be free in that foundation told pinky.

Pinky, you don’t worry. I will re-unite maan and geet again. Its my promise told sam and there is a determination in her eyes.

Do i deserve ur love part 29

28 Oct


Doctor you arrange for operation, I will arrange money told maan and got up.

Adi too followed him and stopped maan.

Maan one minute told adi.

Maan turned back and asked him what?

Maan how you arrange money, you just joined the office a month back. We wont get loan in a week told adi.

I know adi, but for time being atleast I get 4-5 lacs loan so that we can arrange for the operation told maan.

Hmm.. I will also apply for loan, once it get sanctioned I will inform you told adi.

But adi how can you’ asked maan.

Maan, muskaan is like my daughter too told adi and hugged him.

Thanku adi thanked maan.

Seeing maan, geet rushed to him. Maan what did doctor tell? Asked geet.

Geet the operation should be done in one week and we need 25 lacs for operation geet told maan.

Hearing this geet gasped, rano and pari became worried. Tears formed in geet’s eyes.

Geet you don’t worry, I will somehow arrange the money told maan.

Yeh kya horaha hain hamari bachi ke saath thought geet. A sudden fear engulfed in geet. When her mamaji cheated her dad, he was unwell and he died because there is no money for his treatment and on top of that her dad was depressed. And now when Raj cheated maan, everything was going fine but suddenly is unwell. And they need money which they don’t have now. Geet ran from there without saying anything.

Geet.. geet called maan.

But geet didn’t listen and running. She reached near by temple. She broke down on her knees and cried her heart out.

Babaji, please save my daughter. Pls babaji, I cant live without her cried geet. She felt a hand on her shoulder, she looked up and saw maan there. Geet got up and looked at him. Her face is blank which worried maan.

Geet, please don’t loose your hope. Our muskaan will be fine. I am here told maan.

But geet snapped his hand and looked at him with anger. She held his collar. Maan is shocked due to her sudden move.


Stop it maan just stop it. Why you did like that maan. How many times I have told you think twice before you do anything. But no why you will listen to me. your friends are important for you na. If you thought before helping that Raj today we wont be in this position. How we will arrange 25 lacs maan, that too in 1 week cried geet.

Maan too had tears in his eyes. He is feeling helpless, his brain is not working, he just stood there numb. What geet told is right, if he would have thought before thinking anything then today he would have paid that amount for operation.

Maan left from there without saying a single word. Geet sat down, and caressed her stomach.

I am sorry baby, I thought to tell about you after the sports event of your sister. But see what happened to your sister. Pls you too pray to babaji for your sister’s health cried geet caressing her stomach and talking with her unborn baby.

Here maan walked out of the temple geet’s words are ringing in his ears.

In that trance he reached office and went to talk with his boss. Maan explained muskaan’s condition, being a nice man he told he will try to give loan to him but 1 week is very less time.

Don’t worry maan, I will try my level best to approve the loan told boss.

Thanku sir, thanku so much told maan and left from there. He called adi and rano and told the same matter. Geet went to muskaan’s ward and sat beside her.

Muskaan opened her eyes and smiled at geet. Geet caressed her hair.

Mama, where is daddy? Asked muskaan.

He will come muski, you take rest told geet.

Mama, I want to go home told muskaan.

Muski we will go in 2-3 days told geet and kissed her forehead.

Okay told muskaan and made a face.

Suddenly muskaan started breathing heavily. Mama.. mama called muskaan.

Geet got up worriedly and asked muskaan, what happened beta, wait I will call doctor.

Geet rushed to doctor’s cabin and called doctor. Doctor came and injected her and placed a oxygen mask.

Now muskaan is fine and is sleeping told doctor. Geet sighed in relief.

Geet beta, we have to operate her as soon as possible, her condition is getting critical day by day told doctor.

Geet nodded with tears. Doctor patted her cheek and left from there. Here pari tried calling yash but he is in abroad for a meeting and is busy. Adi tried for loan but he didn’t get as he took recently for his mom.

4 days passed, there is no improvement. Maan use to stay with muskaan at nights and take care of her. He is so worried, he asked his friends for help but still he didn’t get even 10 lacs.

One day adi came running to maan and told that Raj has come to Delhi. Maan is angry on him but now he need money, he thought of asking him. When adi and maan went to raj’s house they came to know that today is his engagement.

Adi and maan went to his room. Raj is shocked to see them.

Raj I need to talk to you told maan.

Cant you see maan today is my engagement, I don’t have time now told raj rudely.

Raj please, my daughter is not well, I need money told maan.

Oh you came for money, sorry yaar. I cant gove you now. come tomorrow told raj.

In Hospital:

Muskaan condition is getting worst. And today from morning she started breathing heavily. Rano, Geet and pari stood there helpless. Doctor came out and looked at geet sadly.

Doctor what happened? Asked geet.

We are sorry geet, her condition is out of control told doctor.

Geet stood there numb, tears were falling down her cheeks. You can see her now told doctor and left from there.

Geet went inside cabin, saw muskaan who is looking pale. Geet caressed her cheek.

Muskaan opened her eyes and tried to smile. The first word came out of her mouth is daddy.

Where is daddy? Asked muskaan.

He is coming now muskaan told geet.

Her pulse is sinking and is breathing heavily. She held geet’s hand tight and asking for maan.

Daddy daddy asked muskaan breathing heavily.

Geet hugged her tight, pls muskaan you cant leave us thought geet and cried.

Suddenly muskaan stopped talking anything and moving. Geet, hugged her daughter who is no more and cried her heart out.

You cant do this muskaan, you cant cried geet. Rano who saw geet like this broke down completely. Her grand daughter is no more. Pari who came there with medicines is shocked to see her mothers condition. Pari rushed to rano and asked

Maa what happened?

Rano hugged pari and told muskaan’ hame chodke chali gayi. Pari is shattered and hugged rano tight and cried. Immediately pari called adi and pinky and told.

In raj’s house:

Raj.. shouted maan and held his collar.

Leave me maan and go from here. You want money and I told to come tomorrow told raj and left from there. Just then adi’s phone rang.

Maan, we need to go to hospital told adi.

Why?? Asked maan.

Doctor is calling us told adi trying hard to control his tears. How can he tell to maan.

Maan and adi reached hospital. He saw geet is sitting outside, all lost and pale. He didn’t understand anything. He rushed to muskaan’s ward. Maan thought that muskaan is sleeping. He went near her and kissed her forehead.

Muskaan.. called maan.

Maan’ called adi.

Shh she is sleeping told maan.

Maan, she is no more told adi. Maan looked at adi with anger and shouted stop it adi, don’t talk rubbish. She is sleeping wait I will wake her up told maan.

Maan remembers when geet was trying to wake her up she didn’t. finally when maan woke her up saying he will buy ice cream, how she got up.

Muskaan, you are a good girl na wake up told maan.

No reply.

Muskaan, daddy will bring toys for you told maan.

Hmm I know, daddy will buy you ice cream told maan.

But hearing no response from her maan got worried. He looked at adi, he nodded with tears.

No, my daughter cant leave me told maan and tried to wake up muskaan. Hearing no response from her he collapsed on the chair and hugged muskaan tight and cried. Adi too hugged maan and cried.


Precap: Present..

Do i deserve ur love part 28

21 Oct

P.S.: The medical issues are purely my imagination.. Tongue


Maan is so guilty and don’t know what to do. Geet came to maan and sat beside him. Maan hugged geet and told I am sorry geet, I never expected Raj will cheat me.

Geet caressed his back and told shhh maan, calm down. We will think some way to come out of this problem.

May be geet is angry on maan, but at this time maan needs her and she should be his strength but not weakness.

Shhh maan relax, what has happened is happened. We cant change it now. Pls aap shaant hojayiye tried geet to convince him.

Seeing geet near him made him feel relax, he didn’t expect that raj will cheat on him. He is hell angry on him but cant do anything. Maan slept on geet’s lap mumbling sorry continously. Geet is caressing his hair making him feel relax.

In the evening adi came to meet maan. They both talked for some time.

I need to find a job yaar told maan.

Maan, are you sure? Asked adi.

Yes adi, I have my architecture degree with me. I will apply in any firms. I don’t want to trouble rano maa more told maan.

Maan if you need any help then tell me ok? Told adi.

Maan nodded and thanked him.

Its been a month since that incident, maan took a small flat and they shifted there. Maan got a job in one of the construction firm but its useful for their expenses and muskaan school fee. At present they are not having any problem. Rano and Pari supported them in every way. Yash insisted that he will pay back that money but maan told

Yash I am happy that you came forward to help me but dude everything is fine now. And if at all I needed I will ask you for sure told maan.

Yash hugged maan and told remember maan, I you need anything you just call me, I will be there ok??

Maan nodded and thanked him. Pari saw this and looked at yash with a proud smile and mouthed a thanku. Yash nodded in assurance. Here muskaan, joined her school back and geet too applied for a job where she resigned before. She will be getting her call letter in a month or two.

One day maan and geet are in the hall relaxing. Its been month maan joined office, just then muskaan came from school. She is looking very happy.

Daddy.. shouted muskaan and jumped on his lap.

Hii princess, how was the day today? Asked maan.

Fine daddy, tomorrow there is a sports day in our school and I am participating told muskaan smiling.

Wow that’s great, I know you will come first this time too told maan and kissed her forehead.

Daddy you know, I liked this place very much. All my friends are here and I can play with them daily told muskaan smiling broadly.

Acha, really?? Nice smiled maan. But sad that their life is not like before where he can give all the luxuries to his princess. Geet noticed the pain in his face and placed her hand on his shoulder blinking her eyes. Maan smiled and nodded.

Muski, go and change your dress I will brings milk for you told geet. Muskaan nodded and left from there.

Maan, you please don’t think of what happened. See now everything is fine told geet and smiled.

Thanku for understanding geet but sorry for what I did told maan feeling guilty.

Maan please don’t be sorry. But think before what you do told geet nervously. Maan looked at her with serious face and then smiled.

Yes geet I will told maan and hugged her.

Geet gave milk to muskaan and she drank making faces. But geet is stubborn.

Next day:

Muskaan is very excited for her sports day and even parents are allowed to watch the event. So maan and geet too accompanied her to the school. The events have started in the school and muskaan is busy with her friends. Maan and geet are settled in the audience encouraging muskaan. Now it’s the time for running race and muskaan is participating.

The race has started and muskaan is leading, and all are shouting muskaan muskaan, maan and geet too. She looked at maan and waved. Maan smiled and waved back.

But all of a sudden she fell down. Maan and Geet got worried and got up.

Muskaan’ shouted maan. But to their relief, muskaan got up and smiled at them. They both sighed in relief. But the next moment they are hell shocked to see the blood coming out of her nose. Muskaan sense something wet near her nose and touches it. Maan rushes to muskaan and takes out his hand kerchief and wipes the blood.

Daddy’ called muskaan and fainted in his arms.

Muskaan muskaan called maan but listening no response from her maan took her in his arms and both maan and geet rushed to the hospital in a taxi. Maan is calling her but she is not at all responding.

Maan, what happened to her. why she is not opening her eyes asked geet in the verge of crying and maan is also in the same condition. Soon they reached hospital.

They admitted muskaan and doctor checked her. he cleaned the blood and completed few tests. Here maan is sitting beside muskaan caressing her hair. Geet is outside as muskaan is in ICU and only one person is allowed. Soon rano and pari reached hospital only to see crying geet.

Geet beta what happened? Asked rano.

Maa.. cried geet and hugged her. I don’t know maa, its been 2 hours we came here and no one is saying anything told geet.

Di, where is jiju? Asked pari.

He is with muskaan inside told geet.

Geet, don’t worry everything will be fine told rano and made her drink some water.

Maan came out and saw rano and pari with geet. Geet looked at maan and rushed to him.

Maan, how is muskaan? What doctor told? Asked geet.

Geet, relax doctor called us to his cabin, come lets go told maan.

Maa.. muskaan’

Don’t worry maan, we will be there with her told rano.

Maan and geet went to doctors cabin.

Doctor what happened to my daughter? Asked maan.

Mr. Khurana the wounds are not that serious told doctor.

Maan smiled but frowned when doctor said but..

But what doctor? Asked maan.

Maan relax, when we doing her check up we observed that she is having breathing problem told doctor.

Breathing problem? Asked maan confused.

Yes Mr. maan, then Dr. Mehra asked us to do some tests. And your daughter is having some problem. See Mr. Khurana some children have a narrow valve from birth and that will become more narrow as they grow up’ but he was cut by maan.

See doctor I am maan and my daughter is muskaan, pls check the reports once again. I think the reports are mis-placed told maan not able to believe what doctor is saying.

No Mr. Khurana, we are not wrong. Your daughter is in critical condition told doctor.

Just stop it doctor,  you people are lying. Till today she didn’t had any problem and all of a sudden you are saying that she has a heart problem. Are you guys joking asked maan angrily.

Look maan, why do we lie. Its true that your daughter is having problem and she should be operated immediately told doctor.

I know this, I am expecting something like this. See doctor my daughter is perfectly alright. My muskaan is fine, she don’t have any problem don’t try to cheat me told maan and got up.

Come geet we will go to told maan.

Go we are not stopping you told Dr. Mehra who is silent till now.

Maan turned back.

You can go now, but after a week or so don’t come with your daughter again who will be in critical condition told Dr. Mehra.

How dare you doctor. How can you say like that? Roared maan.

Geet got tensed listening to him.

Look maan, we saw your daughters condition that’s why we are saying. If we didn’t observe then we could have just treated for her wounds and prescribe some medicines but we didn’t do that. We care for each and every patient who come here told Dr. Mehra.

Doctor that means our daughter is really having problem asked geet.

Yes ma’am she really has, its truth and we have to believe told Dr. M.

Maan collapsed on the chair.

He then looked at maan and told we have to do operation in a week. Nahi tho her condition will be more critical.

Doctor but till yesterday she was fine then all of a sudden? Asked maan not able to believe his daughter, his muskaan is in critical condition.

Maan, some things we don’t observe till it reaches last stage told doctor.

Maan closed his eyes in pain and got up and walked out of the cabin like a life less body. Geet followed him. He directly went to muskaan’s ward and held her hand and kissed it.

Muskaan opened her eyes and smiled at maan. Maan too smiled at her and kissed her forehead.

Sorry daddy told muskaan.

Maan looked at her confused.

I lost the race this time. But I will win next time pakka told muskaan making cute face.

Maan smiled at her and told I know darling, you will win for sure.

Daddy when we will go home, I am liking the hospital smell told muskaan.

We will go soon muskaan told maan trying hard to control his tears. Baby I will come now, you take rest told maan and muskaan nodded and closed her eyes. Adi who came to hospital listened what doctor told. He followed him to muskaan’s ward. He had tears in his eyes seeing them.

Maan came out and saw adi there. He hugged him and cried his heart out.

Adi.. my muskaan. What happened to her? she will be fine na, nothing will happen to her na? asked maan.

Maan calm down nothing will happen to her. be strong maan told adi. Come we will go and talk to doctor.

Maan and adi went to doctors cabin.

I am sorry doctor, I overreacted before apologized maan.

Its ok maan, we understand. All of a sudden when you listen your daughter is not well it happens told doctor.

Doctor what we should do now? asked adi.

See the operation which charge very high, we have buy the valves from other country as we don’t get in india. And each valve will be 6 lakhs and we need 2. And the doctor at present he is in abroad. We have to call him and he will charge high. So totally we need 25 lakhs for operation and we have to do it in 1 week told doctor.

Maan is shocked. if his didn’t cheated on him then 25 lakhs he would arrange in within hours. But now his salary is enough for daily expenses then 25 lakhs is impossible for him but he didn’t loose his strength. He can do anything for his muskaan.

Doctor you arrange for operation, I will arrange money told maan and got up.


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